Feelings after reading Author: The Itch of Three Lives Three Lives
When I read a novel, I always read the comments first before deciding whether to read it or not. It’s rare that this novel is all: praise! What kind of writing skills and what kind of story can win the hearts of all my friends. After reading it in one sitting, I understand!
I don’t know what the final direction of the author’s story will be. Please allow me to express my inner expectations: Yifei and Chengtian, due to their special status and the political involvement of the palace, cannot make the decisions themselves.
Suitable for Qingcheng. But Qingcheng's feelings for Yifei are special only because of the face that is exactly the same as that of her ex-boyfriend. I'm afraid Qingcheng himself didn't realize this. As for Jingren, after reading it now
, it deviates a little from the impression I had when it first appeared. I didn’t give him the best writing, and it should not be the author’s last choice. By the time Bei Mu Kuang, although he only showed one side, a few light words had already made his mark.
It captured my heart and felt very stable. I believe many friends have the same feeling as me. That should be a foreshadowing laid by the author. I think the author should let the male protagonist play next. I look forward to the author's writing giving
We are a different kind of "crazy". While we capture the hearts of our relatives, we also capture the heart of Qingcheng. Looking forward to, looking forward to...
Zhongzhong, you are actually very good at writing stories. After reading other novels, you will basically understand it after most of it. It depends on how the author fills in the structure to make the story more perfect. The story direction of your novel should be Qingcheng and Kuang, but the plot
But it is often unexpected. Just like an excellent stage actor, you never know what surprises her gorgeous turns will bring you! You are good at designing stories, look forward to it...
I have read so many novels, and so far this is the only one that has made me write such a long review. I am really looking forward to the subsequent development, and I hope it will be the result I want... It is not in vain for me to keep breaking it.
Random thoughts, recommend to friends around you. You write with your heart, I read with my heart...
A little suggestion: The plot of the story is really good, but in these articles since Qingcheng entered the palace, the highlights of Qingcheng have become increasingly blurred. A woman who is liked by so many outstanding men, a modern soul
, she should have a distinctive personality that can attract people. Girl, don’t rush to write. Take a good look at why Qingcheng has attracted the attention of so many outstanding men, and what qualities are those men attracted to her. What follows.
The article seems to only focus on the plot and ignores the characterization of the characters. Come on!
Wuyan: I have always been very grateful to Sister Sansheng Sanshi for reading my articles so carefully and telling me your truest feelings. Thank you! Sister! Thank you for your support and advice!