At the beginning, the author tells us that this is a whirlpool world, and whirlwind is regret. Without regrets, no matter how happy people are, they will not experience happiness. So, emotional regret, I am afraid that this whirlpool world affects people's hearts.
The cold-faced CEO Shangguan Wudao and the ordinary girl Yan Xiaolan met in a nightclub and knew each other about the revenge plan. Is this another regret arranged by God? I like the name of the protagonist, Shangguan Wudao, but Tao is Wuqing but
Youqing and Yan Xiaolan are little orchids in the mountains, ordinary but strong, soft on the outside and strong on the inside. Let’s see what kind of passionate story will happen between these two people. Let’s see the author tell them one by one. From cheating on her boyfriend, to pretending to be a girl in a nightclub, to
When she got into trouble with that cold and domineering man, Xiaolan never lost her stubborn and brave heart; and the domineering man who approached her for revenge and wanted to get not only her people but also her heart seemed to be everywhere.
Take advantage of the opportunity, but you don't know if you will find that what is missing is your sincerity. People are always so strange. They forcefully grab what they don't have, but they don't know how to cherish the ones around them. Eyes blinded by hatred
, is that you cannot see the happiness around you. Only when you have truly lost it will you understand. I just don’t know if it is too late by then.
The structure of this article is clear, and the story is connected one by one. The main line is interspersed with elements such as martial arts and revenge, but it still does not dilute the romantic plot. The interspersed elements play an embellishment role, the rhythm is bright, and it is not sloppy. The author adds such elements as constellations and Mingli
, gangs, martial arts and other elements are very eye-catching. Personally speaking, I especially like the description of Cancer men, "There is no crab in the world who is not lonely, but no crab is afraid of loneliness. After they have experienced
After all kinds of things in life, he can transform into an invincible strong man in this world! Such a Cancer man regards devotion as an unattainable belief in life, and regards affection and ruthlessness as a means to vent his dissatisfaction with life.
." This kind of narrative is so precise that people can't help but marvel when they see it. The article is compact and interesting (sub-line), and it also makes readers want to read the full text (main line).
The author tries to discuss the attitude of facing life in the article, Yan Xiaolan's self-indulgence; Shangguan Wudao's hatred that blinds his eyes; Zhang Haodong's daring to be angry and dare not speak; Yingzi's drunken life and dreams; Liu Qingqing's fantasy; and even Uncle Xiaolan's
The cowardice. In the face of the setbacks in life, should we face it and how to face it? The author gives some inspirations. The lines on everyone’s palm are twists and turns, just like everyone’s life path cannot always be
It's all smooth sailing. Only when people don't care about the bizarre hardships along the way can they keep the clouds clear. Although some of the author's attempts to explore life issues seem not clear and profound enough now, such attempts are worthy of encouragement.
In terms of language, I like to add narratives in dialects. I don’t know if the author did it intentionally. However, if it is just inadvertent, you need to pay attention in the future and don’t use dialects too casually. Use them in the right place, and they will have some charm.
Maybe it’s because boys don’t describe enough of girls’ hearts when writing romances, so the emotional transition between the two is a bit stiff, but on the other hand, the jealousy between men is quite accurately grasped. Also, the control of the martial arts fighting scenes is relatively weak. It seems
It doesn't feel like it's live, I hope the author can pay attention to it in the future.
Overall, this is a good novel, a romance novel suitable for boys. I am looking forward to the further development of the story and hope that the author can bring us more exciting plots.