I can't count how many things this girl has silently done for me. Every time I get hurt or encounter setbacks, as long as I look back, I can see her standing quietly behind me, healing me. Wound.
I even doubted whether she was an angel sent by God to accompany me. Could it be that I was really the reincarnation of Hai Qingtian?
Otherwise, why would God treat me so favorably and give me such a kind and beautiful girl?
"Thank you." I walked up to Chu Tingting, and there were no words to describe my mood at the moment.[
"No need." Chu Tingting lowered her head shyly and flipped through the textbook in a panic.
I put my hand on the textbook she was flipping, put the newspaper on her desk, and said somewhat naughtyly: "What do you think of my composition?"
"Very good." Chu Tingting always had a lot of patience when discussing things she learned: "The words are beautiful and the intention is profound, especially the parallelism in the third to last paragraph, which is the highlight of the entire composition. , adds a lot of color.”
"Then do you think this essay can get full marks?" Chu Tingting didn't notice at all that she had fallen into my trap.
"Of course." Chu Tingting said with admiration: "Think about it, even the most critical old scholars in the editorial department are full of praise for your essay, otherwise why would it be printed in the most conspicuous position of the school newspaper? "
"Then do you think the 'shot one shot two' in my composition is childish?" Last time, the Chinese teacher ridiculed my writing style in front of the whole class, saying it was the writing style of primary school students and junior high school students.
"No." Chu Tingting said seriously: "This is a shot-by-shot description technique. Even today, both film directors and literary masters often use this method. Fragments are described separately, and the upper and lower paragraphs are described separately. There is no obvious connection between them, but when you read them together, you can tell that they are describing the same thing. For example, in your essay, you describe the small white building, the rockery, the garden, and the pool respectively. There seems to be no connection, but they are all describing the beautiful scenery of the campus. .”
After listening to Chu Tingting's long discussion, I was stunned for a moment. I didn't expect that she had such profound insights.