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Just as Xie Ying and He Mi were facing each other in silence, and the atmosphere was strange, He Mi suddenly turned pale, flushed, and her slender hands tremblingly stretched out to her clothes...
"Sha...dingdong..."
There was a sound of clothes rubbing against each other mixed with the crisp sound of objects hitting each other, and the evil shadow with wandering eyes followed the sound, and He Mi was seen lowering her head at this time, her pretty face flushed. What was particularly eye-catching was the yarn falling to the ground, in the candlelight.
The smooth and fair skin shone under the scattered light and was comparable to white jade. At this time, the shoulders were bare and the abdomen was exposed. The light green gauze fell down, covering the three inches of white jade golden lotus.
Xie Ying was startled, but he still looked at the man carefully. He Mi's face was stunning, she was still young, and she was indeed attractive enough to be proud of. Her light red lips and rosy face exuded youthful vitality, as if
The flower buds in bud are full of vitality, and their beautiful face and white skin make them even more pure and pure. Her face is flushed with blush. Her face is charming and beautiful, and her figure is slim and slim. What's more terrible is the biting cherry lips, trembling and delicate.
The body, the lustrous jade skin, the exquisite curves, and the curves make Xie Ying's heart tremble. Now He Mi is like a devil and makes people commit crimes!
"Miss He! What is this for?"
Fortunately, Xie Ying was not the first brother who had never touched women. After being shocked, he flashed, picked up the gauze on the ground and covered the devilishly alluring body, and said in a trembling voice! In the current situation, I don’t want to get involved.
As for He Mi, this is the best measure for Xie Ying. Otherwise, if Xie Ying gets up and leaves, or turns around to face her, it will cause great psychological damage to He Mi, who is pure in heart and pure in ice!
"I...I..."
He Mi was already very nervous, but Xie Ying's question made her blush even more intensely, and she couldn't stop squealing. However, her little hands instinctively grasped the loose yarn scattered on her body.
"Miss He actually doesn't have to be like this! With the relationship between General He and me, I will naturally take care of you without you having to pay anything!"
Until now, if Xie Ying still doesn't understand, then he is a fool. He couldn't help but sighed secretly and said, while suppressing the excitement in his heart. He moved away from the hot and soft skin that his fingers touched. From this point of view, Xie Ying is right to
The self-control of women is really good!
"I volunteered!"
A whisper sounded like a gnat. If it weren't for Xie Ying's extraordinary strength and the quiet environment, I wouldn't have been able to hear it clearly!
"Miss He has just encountered a huge change, and it is human nature to have random thoughts in her mind. Go back and have a good sleep. You will feel much calmer when you wake up. Since I have taken you in, I will escort you out of Luoyang!"
Xieying sighed secretly. He still couldn't bear the tenderness, so he had to bear the burden again!
"Chi, chi..."
There was a moment of silence, and Xie Ying controlled his eyes to move away from that alluring body. Suddenly, there was a faint sound of sobbing, and he saw He Mi holding Luo Sha with both hands, with tears on her pink face like broken pearls.
Falling straight down!
"He...Miss He! Don't get me wrong, I'm not...I just don't want to take advantage of others' danger. I'll wait until you calm down before talking!"
Seeing He Mi sobbing, Xie Ying couldn't help but panic. He didn't know how to persuade him, so he had to squeeze out some words of comfort. He even waved his hands and said, but with Xie Ying's character, he really didn't care about this kind of thing.
Not good at it!
"Woo..."
It was okay that Xieying didn't speak, but as soon as he opened his mouth, He Mi suddenly burst into tears!
The sultry fragrance rushes towards the face, the fragrant muscles and soft bones come suddenly, the exquisite and fiery body is pressed tightly in front of Xie Ying, and the moist liquid drips on Xie Ying's body!
"Uh...cry! Cry! It will be okay if you cry..."
He Mi's sudden movement made Xie Ying's mind go blank for a moment, and he was embarrassed and speechless. After reacting, he couldn't help but pat He Mi's pink back gently and said softly!
It seems that there is no chance of rest tonight!
There was a wail in Xie Ying's heart, but Xie Ying had only met He Mi once, and now he felt more pity for He Mi than any affection for him! It was okay to act on occasion, let Xie Ying attack a woman with no emotional foundation, Xie Ying
I really can't do it, it feels like a corpse, tasteless...
"clothing!"
A burst of thunder shook the earth and the sound of dense horse hooves woke up the sleeping people of Luoyang. Naturally, it also woke up Xie Ying and He Mi who had fallen asleep at some time. When He Mi woke up, she found herself lying on a bed whose breath made her
With her tender body weak in her arms, the scene from last night immediately flooded back to her. Remembering that she was held by this man and slept all night, He Mi immediately felt shy and blushed. She stood up suddenly and was about to run away in panic.
, but when she heard the man suddenly shouting, she realized that her clothes were half unbuttoned, her hair was messy, and she was suffering from infinite shame. Her whole body was burning, and she hurriedly pulled the gauze and put it on, but her delicate body was trembling, and her hands and feet would not listen.
I felt like I couldn't put it on after wearing it for a long time, and He Mi was so anxious that her pearly tears began to roll again!
Seeing He Mi like this, looking pretty and crying, Xie Ying was amused and pitiful as he stepped forward to help her pull up her clothes and tidy them up. However, it was inevitable that there would be bumps and bumps while wearing them...
"Bang!"
There was a crashing sound on the wooden door, and He Mi, who was dressed, felt that she didn't care to check her own appearance, and immediately ran away. The evil figure in the room was left smiling bitterly at the shaking wooden door...
"What's going on outside?"
After a while, Xie Ying calmed down and walked out of the room and asked the guard on duty!
"Report to my lord! It seems that the Xiliang army has come for reinforcements again. At this time, the Xiliang cavalry are entering the city in large numbers and running rampant in the streets!"
Seeing the evil shadow appear, the five or six guards who had been guarding the whole night immediately looked at him strangely. However, seeing the evil shadow's calm face, they did not dare to make a mistake. They immediately raised their heads and stood up, suppressing the thoughts that they should not have in their hearts.
The voice replied!
Hearing what the guard said, Xie Ying couldn't help but suddenly realized that Dong Zhuo's little trick, Xie Ying was naturally aware of it, was just a trick played by the restless elements in Luoyang and the ministers of the DPRK. Where did the reinforcements come from? I guess Dong Zhuo's hometown...
Xiliang is now being ravaged by Ma Teng, Han Sui, and Zhao Yun. Do the math, and it is estimated that the army led by Zhao Yun will soon arrive in Liangzhou!
After understanding the situation outside, Xie Ying ignored it and returned to the house, summoning the bodies of Zhang Rang and Duan from the Haotian Tower. He had been busy last night, and when he was about to deal with Zhang Rang's matters in the evening, He Mi It just happened to arrive, so I have been putting off the time until now! However, after a day of buffering, Zhang Rang's mood became much more stable, but the situation surprised Xie Ying. At this time, Zhang Rang's eyebrows were all white, like silver threads. The spirit is decadent, the look is old, as if he has become an old man in an instant, and he looks like he may grow old at any time!
"I don't know what the Marquis' plans are in the future? If you don't dislike it, the door of Yizhou will always be open for the Marquis!"
After some consolation, Xie Ying asked aloud, thinking about Zhang Rang, except for going to Yizhou, there is no place for Zhang Rang in the world. Xie Ying said this, it is just an excuse to surrender to Zhang Rang!
"Farewell, Lord Marquis, I have called the slave family the title of Marquis. The slave family deserves it! The slave family naturally wants to go to Yizhou, but... ah!"
Originally, Xieying thought that when he extended an olive branch, Zhang Rang would definitely agree immediately. After all, he had worked hard to save him. With Zhang Rang's identity, no one in the world could save him except himself. But Zhang Rang Rang was quite secretive and kept silent, neither expressing his willingness nor his refusal!
Under doubt, Xie Ying suddenly remembered Zhang Rang's fate. Zhang Rang was considered a relatively important historical role in the history of the Three Kingdoms. Otherwise, Zhang Rang would not be qualified to be an SS-level historical general because of his ability to be both civil and military. However, this kind of important historical figure The characters all have important historical missions, which means that Zhang Rang's role is greater than his ability. The system only forces them to be promoted to SS-level historical generals. However, this type of NPC has two powerful characteristics. One is that it is almost impossible to be surrendered; Second, they are almost impossible to kill unless they complete their respective missions.
With Zhang Rang's fate, his mission has been completed and his death date has come. This kind of NPC that is related to the continuity of the entire region and major historical plots is different from the fate of Zhang Han, Yingbu, Yu Ji and other short-lived special plot characters. The most obvious thing is that the existence of Zhang Han and others does not play a decisive role. They have a mission, but they may not die after the mission. Zhang Rang is a character destined to die! Like Zhang Jiao before, if his fate is not changed, he will die. It's their only ending!
After thinking clearly, Xie Ying immediately took out the "Tai Yi Demon Wheel" and used the "inversion of yin and yang" skill to change the fate of Zhang Rang.
"Ding! Congratulations to the player Xie Ying. The special NPC Zhang Rang agrees with you to change his destiny. Please name Zhang Rang's new life!"
"Chang Rang (the abbreviation of Chang Shi Zhang Rang)!"
"bite……"
As expected by Xie Ying, as soon as Zhang Rang changed his fate, Zhang Rang's old and vital state disappeared immediately, and he successfully recognized his master, but his expression was still sad and emotional. The main reason is naturally It's because of Zhang Rang's recent experience, and while his destiny was changed, Zhang Rang also knew his own destiny and mission!
Seeing Chang Rang (hereafter called Chang Rang) look like this, Xie Ying couldn't help but smile, and immediately used the "Resurrection" skill on Duan's corpse, and then saw Duan standing up with Chang Rang's stunned and ecstatic expression...
