The book is finished, although the ending is not ideal.
But I think that the national war has already progressed to this extent, and it would be meaningless if South Korea and Japan were resurrected with full health and fought again.
This was my fault because I didn’t have an outline at the time, so I can only finish it now.
Next, we will supplement the initial settings of some settings in the book that have not yet been shown.
1. The protagonist’s power: Regarding this thunder and lightning power, only a small part has been revealed so far. According to my initial setting, the protagonist will strengthen his thunder and lightning power through the weak electricity of the game helmet. The later part of this book will
It will show a world of supernatural powers, in which the scene where they go to Nanshan for an outing is for the future
As a foreshadowing. Through the upgrade of superpowers, superpowers can separate their spiritual bodies and enter another spiritual world. This world is very similar to the game world, so it is used as an extension of the game world. Then another war breaks out in the spiritual world (similar to the national
war, etc.). If this setting is used, the book cannot be completed without five to six million words.
2. The mysterious girl: According to my original idea, these are all paving the way for the spiritual world. This girl is the key, and her appearance is to guide the protagonist to finally change from a game player to a player with supernatural powers, and participate in a game created by
Go into the "game world" of the spiritual world created by the World God. And Professor Yang
The son of the girl is the mysterious person who hunts the girl. Because they are carrying out a god-making project, they have spied on the secrets of the sky. They attempt to use the girl's genes to transform ordinary humans and mass-produce players with super powers. This is basically the case in this book.
It wasn't mentioned at all, it just released a little shadow.
3. God-making plan: A scientific research company headed by Professor Yang accidentally created a person with lightning powers, and finally came up with a formula through research. However, because this would have devastating consequences, Professor Yang et al.
The man quit. But his son stole the formula and
And it has been applied to game helmets through hacking methods. The game helmet uses weak electricity to stimulate undeveloped areas of the human brain to achieve the purpose of cultivating superpowers. This is the god-making plan. In the later part of this book, it will become a superpower.
Ability to write novels (This has been criticized by many people, so I won’t go into details.)
4. The fall of the divine world in the game: Although it runs through this book, it is only a few strokes. Many people may not feel that this setting has any effect. In fact, this setting is for future abilities.
Foreshadowing. The so-called fall of the God Realm is actually a hint.
It reflects the fall and disappearance of the "God Realm" (the world of superpowers) in real life, which is inseparable from the research of Professor Yang and others. In the end, when players explore the secrets of the fall of the God Realm, they will discover the game's general
Go to the real channel and smoothly transfer to the real game.
5. About Dark Dragon: It is a tragedy of love. The entire plot of Dark Dragon revolves around the story of Dark Dragon wanting to break through the shackles of the world and pursue his beloved woman. Because of the needs of the task, it was divided into several segments.
It has not been fully shown so far, but it has just begun. If it is not completed, the dark dragon will eventually break through the cage with the help of the protagonist who becomes a god, and become the protagonist's mount and partner.
6. About the ending: Some readers may think that this ending is too hasty. From the perspective of the National War alone, the National War has been completed. South Korea has only the last main city left, but there is no elite medical record
, it will be a matter of time before it is captured. No need to write about it. As for Japan, in the last few chapters, I mainly talk about Japan. After experiencing the melee in South Korea, Japan’s military strength was almost exhausted. And the most difficult battle in the battle was
war
, the offensive and defensive battle of Yokohama Castle. Japan has already brought out its last elite to fight. The capture of Yokohama Castle means that it is difficult for Japan to organize effective resistance. So it is meaningless to write about it any more.
.The war of attrition between the Eastern Route Army of the Northern Alliance and the East Asia Alliance has basically brought down the military strength of the entire East Asia region. The Chinese players who reaped the benefits have become the strongest force in the region. The outcome of the National War
it goes without saying.
7. Regarding the ownership of the protagonist: Most readers criticize this part, it is too sloppy. Or it does not meet their expectations. I can only say that from the structure of the story, the ending is actually very certain. I
He is not a casual person, I think the protagonist is the same, he has to be responsible. So he chose Shangguan Wan'er, there is basically no suspense.
8. About this book: Readers who may have followed this book have also discovered, "What does the content of this book have to do with NPCs? Where are the dates?" Therefore, it is too far away from the topic. This is why the book ends up like this.
The reason for the ending.
9. About the new book: After summarizing the shortcomings of this book, I began to pay attention to the role of the outline. It runs through the main line of the whole text and has a better grasp of the rhythm. I believe that the new book can give you a completely different feeling.
