Personally, I think the book hasn’t been written yet enough to be put on the shelves.
Yes it's better than the one written in the middle
The beginning was good, the middle was bad, and now it's pretty good these days
Don't always use the name written by Lost Leaf
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:25:54
If I want to change it now, the amount of work will be huge.
Just Murong Mingyue and Zaishui Fang
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)22:26:10
This means that no matter how good your writing is, you can't compare to him. The characters you write are all under his shadow.
You, when I first wrote it, I didn’t tell you not to use it.
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:27:35
I've recently been paying attention to adding plots of life
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)22:27:43
In fact, any battle is for peace, and fighting ends with force. Just remember this.
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:28:05b22:28:34
By the way, there are also romantic and graceful love stories
It doesn’t reflect romance and elegance at all.
Ark in the sky (1303605612)22:28:48
You have to live and fight at the same time. If you don’t live, you won’t fight, and there won’t be a big fight.
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:29:01
22:29:04
The passion for fighting has long been worn away
Ambiguous and don’t really feel it
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)22:29:2522:29:34
I don't feel it myself
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:30:3622:30:35
Brother Feng
I think
Online games?
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:30:4822:31:08
It would be better if the scenes and settings were more grand.
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:31:23
We are still in the stage of fighting for hegemony in Silvermoon City.
Ark in the sky (1303605612)22:31:25
In the darkest side of human nature, as long as there is a glimmer of hope, it will break through the darkness and usher in the light of dawn.
What is stallion flow?
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:31:58
It’s just that the protagonist pushes down more women.
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)22:32:17b22:32:31
Let me give you a suggestion
mercenary
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:32:47
22:32:47
gods and demons
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)22:33:20
There can be many girls who like the male protagonist, but the male protagonist is indecisive about their feelings.
Men only like one
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:33:51
Well, this is also the current strategy. I also feel that it would be irresponsible if we demolish it at will.
The concept of gods and demons was already laid out when the Dark Dragon appeared.
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)22:34:59
It must be a god or demon, otherwise why would there be electric shocks?
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:35:0322:35:19
no no no
I haven't said everything yet
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)22:35:3522:35:56
Can you bring the war between gods and demons into the game?
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)22:36:0222:36:16
In this way, divine weapons and beasts will be useful.
Brother, this is a game
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:36:32
The Dark Dragon's counterattack will eventually reveal the story of the war between gods and demons through a series of missions.
The line I buried is too far
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)22:37:19
It’s great that the line is far away, and there are many chapters to write.
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:37:27
I set No. 1098 Novice Village as the secluded place of the Eastern Protoss in a paradise land. The protagonist will pass through this village and finally go to sea to find the Eastern Dragon Clan.
Ark in the sky (1303605612)22:37:32
It will be collected quickly when the time comes.
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:37:59
Therefore, I use ancient Chinese dialogue in 1098 Good Village
The paving is too loose. It seems that we need to tighten it appropriately to let the magic thread come out.
Ark in the sky (1303605612)22:38:54
The problem lies in your current description of the protagonist’s electrical abilities. From a reader’s perspective, he is no longer a mortal.
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:39:16
Later, someone will come from Tianhen headquarters to explain.
Ark in the sky (1303605612)22:39:38
22:39:55
I agree with this sentence
Ark in the sky (1303605612)22:40:25
When more people read it, you may have to write thousands of chapters.
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:40:46
Tianhen's careerist, the real version of the god-making plan, the superpower training plan
Activate the memory function of cells through the micro-point electric shock of the helmet to develop the human body's potential
Ark in the sky (1303605612)22:41:27
What you mean is that through this game, certain players can break through the limits of human beings themselves.
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:41:56
Well, according to my vision, the future has a very broad path
Just keep at it
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)22:42:26
It's like the boxing god played by Wang Leehom in the past
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:43:04
Well, I've seen it, and it does mean something like that
Ark in the sky (1303605612)22:43:22
In the future, humans will use computer chip implants to allow people to break through themselves and fully develop the untapped parts of the human brain.
The concept is good, you should reveal this concept a little bit in the second volume
Be vague
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)22:44:23
Just highlight one point
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:44:36
Let the careerists from Tianhen headquarters come out and explain.
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)22:44:40
It’s just that this game is unusual and ordinary
Then you mean to appear in the next few chapters? Because the protagonist is no longer ordinary.
Someone saw that the protagonist can use lightning
Ark in the sky (1303605612)22:47:32
Then you can write an NPC in the article who has special powers and can predict the future.
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:48:25
That psychiatrist Dr. Li
I deliberately made her so mysterious because she is a mysterious person herself.
Ark in the sky (1303605612)22:50:24
That won't work, you can write the person who can predict the future as the protagonist's lover. When the time comes, let her know that she will marry the protagonist but she is not willing to accept the arrangement of fate.
Go against the protagonist in everything, and then slowly conquer her through the protagonist's personality charm
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:51:47
This, I need some time to figure out how to integrate it.
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)22:52:33
The protagonist transforms into success through all the things that are destined to fail.
Ark in the sky (1303605612)22:53:47
Just for one thing, destiny may be destined, but destiny can also be changed through hard work.
This way you can get your readers excited too
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:54:58
I probably thought of something!
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)22:55:29
Just like Shangguan Wan'er in your novel, there is darkness, but there is still a glimmer of light. As long as you follow the guidance of the light, you will reach the other side of victory.
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:56:17
I have thought that the protagonist is surrounded by girls with problems. In addition to playing games, he also needs to solve the psychological problems of these girls around him.
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)22:56:24
You can write that the protagonist's true love is a demon.
Angels are also demons, and demons are also angels
This will look more appetizing to the author,
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:58:36
I have this idea, but it’s difficult to grasp! I also want to write the protagonist as a bit bad, but actually has a good heart. Like GTO Spicy Teacher.
Ark in the sky (1303605612)22:59:22
When an angel becomes selfish and greedy, the angel is no longer an angel. When a devil falls in love with an angel regardless of everything and abandons all other devils, the devil also becomes an angel.
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)23:00:41
Just don’t ask questions that go against your principles,
Just like in reality, we men may sometimes chat with female netizens for a few words, but it is just with our mouths.
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)23:02:45
I have thought about it. I also wanted to write an urban book based on it. A young man who is uninhibited and indulgent and advocates freedom tramples on all the rules of the city and breaks the hypocrisy between people. He is lustful but not obscene, violent but not bullying.
Weak.
But thinking about it, I’d better finish writing this one first.
This can be the subject of the next part.
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)23:02:44
You can write the psychiatrist as a master of hypnosis, who uses all means to understand people with supernatural powers.
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)23:04:38
By the way, I want to ask for your opinion. I want to post tonight’s chat history in a book. Do you want me to hide the name for you? Or just copy it and send it out?
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)23:04:59
Then when she knew a lot of events inside the game, she wanted to use these abilities to do things for her. Subconsciously, some of them had weak consciousness.
I'm free to do whatever you want, I like reading your books, that's all.
But your sister’s little devil, don’t write it for a year, uncle’s 360 degree virginity will be broken on you.
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I would like to thank my uncle and brothers Kang Han (the giant sword in the novel). Their opinions are of great help to me! They are also very inspiring!
I set up "This Book of Major Events" to record my growth process. No matter what happens in the future, as long as I look back at the road I have traveled, I will understand in my heart how I got here!
And this chapter is to tell myself what the ultimate direction was when I wrote this novel, and I want to tell myself not to forget it!
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