The introduction of Qingxuan's book mentions the prodigal son, but I read the first few chapters carefully and there is no sign of the prodigal son. I guess the excitement will come later. I will make suggestions about the prodigal son later. I will mention the first few chapters first and go through the first few chapters.
It is not difficult for Zhang to see that Qingxuan's writing style is indeed good, and there is a sense of beauty between the lines.
The protagonist Lin Yu has a strong scholar flavor. He is not a poet but he possesses supreme martial arts, which is really surprising. The description of the character's appearance is very good. Through Qingxuan's writing, you can see the characters of Liu Zimeng and Liu Ziqing.
Beautiful and moving, the beauty of ancient costumes can be fully displayed through words, which is really commendable.
The fighting aspect is also good. You can point out the fatal points through the body, and leave it to the reader's imagination. The characters' language also has its own personality characteristics. It is easier to compare the stillness and movement of Liu Zimeng and Liu Ziqing. I look forward to the emotions behind it.
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Having said that, there are a few points that need to be mentioned. The appearance of the number one killer in the world at the beginning was a bit dramatic. If he were the number one killer in the world, then the killer would be ruthless, cold-blooded, and less talkative, which might be more suitable for his status.
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Although it was to highlight the protagonist Qingxuan's martial arts skills, the death of the number one killer in the world was indeed a bit cowardly. He was killed by Lin Yu before his aura was even revealed. Then the appearance of the Peach Blossom Thief lowered the protagonist's martial arts skills.
After thinking about it for a while, I didn’t know how to judge the protagonist’s martial arts level. Qingxuan could pay attention to this.
It’s not easy to comment on other aspects in detail yet. I will continue to read the work carefully and evaluate it in the future. By the way, there is an extra word "meng" in Liu Zimeng in the second chapter. Qingxuan should change it.