Art comes from life, and in order to make novels more real, I always try to find some inspiration in life. After writing the last few chapters, I went to the book review area and looked at it. I couldn't calm down anymore, and I even had the idea of starting over these chapters.
Some people have said that online novels should have a sense of enjoyment, and don’t try to make readers unhappy. It seems that I didn’t do a good job. Some readers in the book review area said that these few chapters of my book were in vain. To be honest, if I were just writing about games, I would be better than writing about reality.
These chapters are much easier, so I am just superfluous and thankless! I have put a lot of thought into writing these chapters, and they are all inspired by reality.
Just give a few examples! Sanshengshi once said, "After I sleep with a woman once, I have no interest in sleeping with her a second time." A friend of mine is a very good person and has good conditions in all aspects.
, I advised him to calm down and stay with his current girlfriend. These were his original words, and I didn’t change a single word.
The plot about KTV also comes from reality. Some time ago, a colleague went to KTV for his birthday. When he came out, he saw two men holding a girl’s arm at the door of the private room, and another man hugged the girl’s waist from behind. I heard the quarrel.
Only then did I know the general situation. The girl likes to play with men in entertainment venues without spending money. She is used to men touching her, but that day three men actually wanted to have sex with her in a private room. At that time, my colleague said: "
Let’s go! Things like this can happen in KTVs at any time, and I’ve seen them even more exaggerated than this.”
This incident left a deep impression on me, and I later heard many similar stories. My playboy friend told me that once five men took two girls to check out a hotel room. One time I went home to play with him, and he asked me
I went to a bar, and there were two pretty girls there. I had a few drinks with them. When I was boxing with one of the girls, she lost a few times and said to me: "Brother Chen, why don't you lose and drink?"
, if I lose, how about I kiss you once? Later, she even said that if I would drink two bottles of beer at a time, she would come with me that night. I dare not say that I am still pregnant, but because I am afraid of getting sick, I never provoke this person.
Class girls, Dong Xiaohui and Lily are based on them.
The prototype of Sanshengshi is a combination of my playboy friend and a classmate of Reality. Reality spent time describing this character because there are many similar people around.
I said that I wrote these chapters in order to make the image of the heroine more fleshed out. Some readers guessed that in the shopping mall chapter, I wanted to introduce four schoolmates, but mainly I wanted to portray the character of Ban Qianqian. The society is very complicated, and my portrayal of her
No matter how trendy the classmates around her are, she always retains her innocence while trying to adapt to society. When she was in the mall, she said, "If I am looked down upon by others, I will turn around and leave.
But I get angry when a snob looks down on you." I wanted to show that she believed in two years of online love, and that the protagonist was more important to her than herself.
In fact, I hesitated to write these chapters after I came back, but because I dug a hole from the beginning, it was impossible not to fill it. If the plot about KTV is briefly mentioned, then the previous holes will be dug in vain. Read the readers’ opinions in the book review section
The main points are mainly concentrated on the following points. First of all, the protagonist is fearless and does not meet the high IQ setting. The first thing that needs to be corrected is that the protagonist’s future memory only knows that there was a girl drunk in KTV on June 1st, and he does not know that he was with the gangster.
The power was involved, so he felt that he could prevent this. While waiting for the heroine in the corridor, he prepared a text message in advance, which was a reflection of his prudence and rationality. As for bravery, I don’t know how everyone understands it, but
I really like the words of the fat man in "The Fake Hero". When it's time to take responsibility, you have to rush forward even though you know you can't do something. So being brave doesn't mean that the fighting brother exudes a domineering spirit and beats the supporting characters to a pulp.
Secondly, the protagonist** entered the private room alone even though he knew there were many people inside. I would like to ask the reader who raised this point, when did the protagonist know that there were several gangsters in the private room? He was just called by the female protagonist.
He was afraid that something might happen to the heroine and rushed to protect her. When he saw the heroine being drugged, could he withdraw and think of other ways to deal with it?
I personally feel that the real-life chapters were such a failure, mainly because I ignored the age of game readers. Most readers are still students and have not experienced many things, so the words I wrote with care became bloody and unreasonable. I want to tell
Most of our stories are adapted from real events. Things are happening in society every moment that may be unbelievable to you, but they really exist.
Another reason why the response was so great is that the protagonist did not exude the aura of a king and bully, and managed to deal with a few gangsters in a hurry. But the protagonist I set is a strategic type. In reality, the fighting master felt awkward from the beginning, so the king and bully
His anger was gone. He had sent a text message to Wang Ying before, and the problem was later solved. Isn't this a sign of rationality?
This is a game novel, and it shouldn’t be mixed with too much reality! I also read book reviews and some readers said there was too little reality, so Congshan Ruliu added some realistic descriptions. It is still in the new book issue, and all chapters are free.
If you don’t like these chapters, just skip them! I think a book has millions of words, and it’s impossible for every chapter to satisfy everyone. Up to now, this book still has something that can attract you to continue reading.
