I came back and read the comments, and found that many readers were more concerned about the main storyline.
Let me explain here, there is no main plot in the early stage of this book, because the protagonist himself has no pursuits. He believes that he is in an ordinary world and is satisfied with his current life situation, so naturally there is no desire to drive him forward.
He just needs a stable life.
In fact, I have revealed before that this kind of carefree and calculating life is what the protagonist has always pursued. In the past, he had no chance to enjoy this kind of life.
Bai Mo never really sleeps, he just needs to rest.
You can also see that I have basically never written about combat before, and the description of extraordinary people is only a simple level. The difference between levels is actually not obvious. There are more and more characters on the scene, but most of their abilities and personalities are mentioned briefly, and even
Didn't write much.
It’s not that I don’t want to write about these, but I intend to leave them behind and unfold them through the protagonist’s perspective.
After all, Bai Mo couldn't rest forever.
Due to the characteristic of "not being able to detect abnormalities", he cannot see the reality of this world, cannot participate in many things at all, and cannot feel the joy and sorrow of this world, so I will end his state as soon as possible.
Of course there is a main line.
As the restricted area expands and the world changes drastically, the main line will inevitably appear and it will be clear. The emergence of the main line also means the change of the protagonist, which is also the process of filling in the pit.
According to my original idea, the main plot will start to unfold in the plot of Equality Paradise, but this plot is designed to be relatively long and needs a period of foreshadowing. After all, the change in the protagonist's desire needs a reasonable explanation.
But it seems that everyone can't wait that long. This is indeed my problem. The lack of a main line will indeed make readers less immersed and involved, like a headless fly.
As for the comment that I often see the protagonist feeling aggrieved, I can only say that Bai Mo doesn't care about such things at all. The so-called manipulation and use are like playing house to him. Of course, if you want to see the protagonist explode,
, there will be one later.
I carefully considered everyone's suggestions and decided to adjust the plot, speed up the progress of the story, and quickly enter the main line.
In fact, adjusting the plot is a troublesome thing. It feels really uncomfortable to have a well-designed plot abandoned due to various factors and then have to change it again, not to mention that the changes may be worse than before.
Readers may only need to urge "Hurry up and get into the main plot", but if the author wants to do it, he needs to make adjustments based on the current plot. It is impossible for Bai Mo to be confused now. I will make him cold-blooded in the next chapter.
Fight ruthlessly against the forbidden creatures.
The new plot direction has been roughly thought out, and all coded chapters have been deleted. Today’s update cannot be guaranteed, but the promised 100,000 words in ten days will not be missing.
In fact, according to the original plan, there was actually a plot in a third-rate town, but I guess people didn't like it, so it should have been cut.
Mo Qingcheng also has a plot that he has not written yet. It seems that he can only continue to postpone it or decide whether to write it or not depending on the situation.
Those who can see this should be paying readers. As long as it is not abusive, I will consider accepting your reasonable suggestions with an open mind and try my best to satisfy everyone.
Let me make it clear here that I cannot guarantee that the changed plot will be liked by everyone. I can only say that I will do my best to make it a good one. If you want to watch it, you can read it. If you really don’t want to watch it, I can only do it.