A summary at the end of the paper that almost fell off at the end of the paper(1/2)
I was struggling and thinking before writing,
Ah, it would be a waste if I didn’t give a speech. I always feel so tired when writing it. After all, writing a summary is not much better.
Forget it about Ka Wen, but Ka Wen’s speech is too sad.
But in the end I still wrote it like this. I feel like I have persevered all along and it wouldn’t be good if I didn’t write.
So let’s talk about this volume, not counting the tenth volume of the extra volume.
From the end of July last year to now, I have finally finished writing "Card and Catch".
It took more than half a year to reach 182 chapters, which is really a slow update...
Maybe it was the residual influence of the European volume. After I went all out to write that volume and challenged myself to go online, I felt a sense of exhaustion after the passion.
There is nothing conscious in my mind,
What was I thinking about before writing this volume? I can no longer remember it. I flipped through the outline of my notes.
Just draw a timeline, tell where the plot is, and what is still missing in the overall picture?
Organized the growth progress of Xia Ran,
Then I decided to write this volume, which can be regarded as a daily plot advancement that fills in the foreshadowing and foreshadowing.
I wrote about Fangran’s life after returning to daily life, and how the changes after growing up are different from before.
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The structure of this volume, roughly the paragraph structure is,
Night Palace
night game
Linfu District,
Xia Yao-Template Day,
Tang Bing-Photo
Osphia-Letter
Fang Xiaoran-ktv
Fire Brand-Cooking
Shui Lian Xin - Date on rest day
Night Crow-Push to
little queen/queen
Early midnight/Later midnight
end of semester exams
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There are thirteen paragraphs in total, each paragraph has its own meaning,
While writing the main idea clearly, try to insert vivid and interesting descriptions, and introduce interesting daily life without going off topic.
After all, no one likes a plot that doesn't relax after a big battle, right?
Then starting from Linfu District, I also used intermissions as the end, some for transition, some for summary, in short, most of them are like partitions
Let the paragraph structure of this volume be clearer
I really tried my best to finish this volume.
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As for the theme of this volume,
The title of the volume and the preface have been clearly written.
Probably because of Fangran’s European adventure and the growth of understanding his desire, the feeling gradually settled and fermented in his daily life.
If every intermission was good-looking,
It should be clear by now, cheering from the sky, recalling in the diary, rescuing people from the fire, secretly assisting the anti-narcotics police, incomplete awakening of the fire card, stopping the car on a date, qualifying scenes,
In the end, chasing the night breeze can no longer be a clear line.
In order to clarify these, so that the main line between the intermissions can develop smoothly, and the daytime routine of the section to which each intermission belongs can develop smoothly out of the intermissions,
For example, Linfu cheered high in the sky when he was very happy, went to accept the task after receiving a letter from Osphia, was bored and learned to cook and mastered the heat, and suddenly awakened the fire card. Such a connected plot,
In order to balance daily life and intermission, design the connection between the two while taking into account the interest and not going off topic.
I really racked my brains
After all, you can't write about things that have nothing to do with the interludes on a daily basis. The sense of separation would be too strong.
In this volume, what I want to eliminate is the sense of separation that Fangran had between his daily life and his night battles.
So with him, he can occasionally be serious and handsome even during the day.
Before this volume, he might be Night Crow or the Demon King, but after this volume,
He is just a participant-Fangran
Just like what the preface said, he became the person he wanted to be in the night wind
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I think about what else I can say about this volume. Let me talk about the regrets and shortcomings.
The daily part,
To be honest, I always feel that this volume of daily life is missing something like the ‘essence’.
Maybe every period of daily life is quite interesting, right?
But I feel that one of the most interesting, memorable and hilarious daily plots is missing.
For example, the shaved ice and hot spring rolls in the Kyoto roll, and the London Wandering roll in the European roll,
However, I am also trapped by the main plot. At this stage of writing the book,
Many times, I can no longer let my temper run wild. I must clearly serve the context and plot development of the entire book. But I cannot write as happily as before.
But anyway, I don’t have that kind of inspiration, just a little vague regret.
And without affecting the development of the main plot structure, there are some interesting daily stories that I had ideas but failed to write.
That's a real regret
To give some examples, in the Jinjinou PS4 fighting game, the incorrect use of xx Clow cards, such as substitute cards, sound cards, etc., Lamiao Rampage,
Of course, there is also the plot of the bathroom accident, the daily routine of Hulu's pile of sand sculptures, the cabin members playing board games together is like Double 6's daily life, and they pretend to be Santa Claus and give gifts at Christmas.
There are also interesting daily routines in the middle of the night (but I really can’t think of this one)
I really can't find a place to put them.
As for the very line,
What's a pity is that in this volume, I couldn't write a particularly big and climactic event.
At the end of the task list, I originally wanted to arrange a relatively large task for Fangran, such as assisting the armed police force in secret operations, or solving a huge crisis that occurred on campus.
All in all, it’s a bigger plot
But I was still limited by the plot. In the end, I could only write a simple plot about stopping a car after a date.
It makes me regretfully think about whether it would be better to write a plot like this or something...
Okay, maybe it’s not limited by the plot, it’s just that I’m too stuck, and my inspiration and enthusiasm are insufficient. How can I get rid of this limitation and restructure a better plot context?
As for other regrets, Midnight
Before I wrote Midnight, book friends who still remember may have seen how panicked and panicked I was, without any clue in my mind.
Although the article is not short, I still feel that I did not write the characteristics of Midnight
In that independent space, the vastness and secret-like beauty of the entire fairy mountain range are not well expressed. Maybe it is because there are too few locations.
To be honest, I always felt like there was something missing in the part about Fang Ran’s practice.
What's missing? I can't think of it. Forget it. I don't want to think about it. I've finished writing it. It seems it's too late to think about it.
The final regret in the part of Midnight is Immortal, just like not being able to express Midnight Immortal Mountain well,
I feel like I didn’t show the level of an immortal
Alas, but that’s right, let’s not mention the level of writing and so on. He only appears once in total. In two chapters, no matter how hard I think about the words, it seems that it will be difficult to work.
But at that time, I was confused and couldn't think of the description of the artistic conception of the world as real.
As for the queen, she has no regrets. She tried her best and feels quite satisfied.
And the most regrettable thing is,
To be continued...