The first volume ends with the firm words of Jacques-Louis Sian, while the second volume awaits the Hydrian Monastery with endless wars and conflicts.
The Church of the Scythe Bearer, the Holy See of Death, the Holy See of Light, and even the secular kings of the world also hope that the freaks of Norton Hill will stop their crazy behavior. For this reason, they are prepared to pay all costs to ensure the authority of the gods in the world.
So, in this irreconcilable and fierce conflict, where will the Hydrian Monastery go? Will it choose to surrender or will it resist to the end?
A year and a half has passed since the book was launched in May 2020. The first volume of this book has just been written. Although it is far from the expected progress, it is useless to regret and regret at this point. I will not take the opportunity to make a summary.
Looking back at the past and looking forward to the future.
The first is the aspect of failure.
First, the conflict is definitely not intense enough and the overall situation is too dull.
I am a reader myself, and my favorite writing style is also the style of fighting against the sky. But when I wrote it myself, when I blindly pursued the fierce battle and exhilaration, I found that the logic of my story became very poor.
The story also became extremely childish (see the previous eunuch work), not as mature as Potato. So I finally chose to give up this writing method temporarily and perfect my story first. So, it’s not that I am not passionate enough, but
I am limited by my own writing ability.
The second point is that in terms of characterization, the protagonist's status is not prominent enough.
If there are readers, you can definitely tell that in the first volume, Ian Hyde’s presence is not very strong, especially when the protagonist of all novels should come out to show off, Ian is usually the one who gets beaten.
This causes the readers to feel depressed, and they can’t help but wonder why the protagonist is so useless. It’s so boring that they should continue reading.
This is still a question of ability, because I can't find an entry point for the protagonist to pretend, or I tried it but the effect was poor. However, I still have to explain, that is why the protagonist always gets beaten.
It's because he is weak and nosy, and I didn't give him too powerful a plug-in, so he can't kill people beyond the level. In my setting, the power of the awakened one is weak, and his only saving grace is
The key lies in his ability to grow, and in the future he can grow into a powerful person in the field of genius or even a god.
But relying on the body and fighting spirit, the knight is definitely invincible in the early stage. Unless the protagonist uses the strength of his half-hearted squire knight to crush other awakened people, he will not have much chance to show his sainthood before saving the beauty. This is
It affects the experience the most, so I try to make the transition with various stories and settings.
However, because the update frequency is too high and the ideas are intermittent, this is not done well. I'm sorry.
Another reason is that I am too partial to the supporting characters.
In other words, I am too partial to the prototypes of supporting characters and bring in too much personal fantasy and emotion. For example, Hercules Salisbury and Roger Isaiah are all from my favorite characters.
He is the protagonist of the TV series, so the protagonist's halo also extends to the book, which shows that I am not too partial to Ian Hyde.
The third aspect is the most fatal update frequency.
Sometimes it is updated monthly, sometimes once every few months, so I probably don’t have a single reader. I often turn on the computer and sit there for a long time without being able to type a word. It’s not that I have nothing to write, but that I resist output.
I often hear a saying that what saves a book is not stable updates, but explosions. But it seems that I haven’t even done stable updates, so how can I save this book?
The book says that one must be aware of one's shame and then be brave, and it also says that one can never give up on one's merits. I hope I can possess these beautiful qualities of a human being.
In summary, these are the questions I have summarized myself. Next is the outlook for 2022 and the plan for the second volume.
My most urgent goal is of course to be able to update 3 million in 2022. I will try my best! But the most basic daily updates must be achieved.
Secondly, for the second volume, I hope to see Ian become a real protagonist, no matter where he is, as ordinary as Xiao Yan and Louis Koo.
The main plot of the second volume is definitely the hunter's obelisk. It mainly focuses on hunting, because it can have more fighting scenes. I found that I am not strong in this aspect. The back and forth is just a few boring sentences. I hope there is something.
Improvement must be ignited.
Then there is the pursuit of the truth about the Bone Burial Saint. Is this a hidden existence or an ancient god? Why does he do all this? How many followers and hunters does he have?
Then there is the construction of a combat system for Ian and his friends to prepare for their team hunting and promotion to the realm.
Of course, these ideas of mine are of course very good, but I cannot guarantee that I will write them 100% according to this. I can only say that I will temporarily create something equivalent to an outline.
In addition, the second part has started to be released. I hope everyone will like this work.