This volume was not originally that long, but I forgot to divide it into volumes.
It can be regarded as the sum of the contents of the second and third volumes originally envisioned.
To put it mildly, it achieved what I expected.
But there are more problems than the first volume.
There are three main problems.
The first is the issue of rhythm.
Starting from Chapter 70, the rhythm starts to deviate.
There are too many daily ones, resulting in a lot of lost readers.
Later, the pace accelerated, and there were meaningless plots during the outings near the time of release.
It’s not that it’s meaningless, it’s just different from what I imagined.
Originally, I planned to write a story outside of Konoha and bring some technical things to it.
But during that time, I wrote too fast, which led to flooding.
Personally, I think the war plot in the second half is up to standard.
But there are too many fights and the pace is a bit too fast.
The second one is the character issue.
Due to my own reasons, the supporting characters in the second volume are not outstanding.
Originally I wanted to write about the progress of Tsunade, Minato, Obito, Kakashi and others.
But his expressiveness is insufficient and he is a bit of a tool.
The biggest villain, Madara Uchiha, was also poorly portrayed.
The third one is Wudiwen.
I found that I am not good at writing invincible articles.
And because it’s a fan, I don’t dare to add too many original characters.
As a result, the protagonist is too invincible and loses the joy of growing up.
This can be regarded as a mistake in my setting before writing the article.
Because it is too invincible, farming, the original biggest selling point, also disappears in this volume.
For the next book, I should stop writing invincible articles.
In addition to these three, there are many minor problems, so I won’t explain them one by one.
The third volume should also be the last volume.
Many readers can also tell that my book is not long.
Unless we create a parallel world and turn it into a comprehensive comic.
But this book doesn’t have this setting, maybe it will be written in the next book.
My original estimate was one million words, but now it seems that it may be shorter.
But I promise that I can finish it successfully.
Not a eunuch.
Finish the story.
The title of the third volume is "The Great Harmony of the World".
Main content:
The first one is about the construction of the Kingdom of Thunder and Yunyin Village, and will write some farming content.
The second one, the three holy places of psychic beasts, involves immortals and immortality, as well as some plots from the theatrical version, the dragon veins of Loulan, the treasure chest of bliss in Caoyin Village, etc.
The third one is the development of the Akatsuki organization. Obito recruits members and collects tailed beasts to confuse Black Zetsu. Finally, in the case of betrayal, he seals Black Zetsu and completely stops the Eye of the Moon plan.
The fourth is to capture the Kingdom of Earth and the Kingdom of Water and establish a unified country.
The fifth is the grown-up scenes of Shisui, Itachi, Naruto, Sasuke, Hinata, etc.
Sixth, the possible plot of the Otsutsuki clan.
The seventh one, Haruki and Tsunade get married, the finale.
The content of this volume is basically these seven contents.
Thank you all readers for your tips, recommendations, subscriptions and comments.
At present, the book's score is around 1,000, so it can be considered as just getting started.
Anyway, thank you all very much.
Finally, let’s talk about deleting comments. I usually delete comments from unsubscribed readers that seriously affect the perception.
I am also a reader personally, and I know that seeing comments like this greatly affects the reading experience.
Therefore it will be deleted.
Just leave if you don't like it, there's no need to leave bad comments.
Everyone works hard to make a living, so why make it difficult for workers to do so?
It’s really not easy to write a street novel while working.
Please understand the author.
Now my time for games, movies, TV, and going out for various entertainments has been reduced by more than half.