In fact, the book was written with passion. I was rejected when I submitted the manuscript (because the beginning was too scattered and there wasn’t much role for the protagonist), so I thought about it and rushed to publish it on the second day of December.
Already.
At present, although it is a bit confusing, overall it is pretty good.
The plot of this book is roughly taken step by step. Maybe the author will come up with some fantastic ideas when writing the first chapter. The general outline of the plot is currently pushed to the outbreak of the great rebellion, so you will find that he is
I rarely write very clearly when I am setting up my writing, just to prevent my writing from being read later (lucky).
The first volume can be considered a carefully selected one by him. The story of Dawn Star in the Warhammer universe is both strange (it is not a war but disaster relief) and very grimdark (it takes a long time to try to no avail, not all of them die), but it is also very realistic.
There were not many problems when I started writing. Many places were not fully described, and many plots were promoted in a hurry (no help, it was updated daily). For example, Ahriman had a bad personality and was not well-liked.
It was written, and the plot of Perturabo dealing with the planet's instruments was not originally intended to end in one chapter, but when it came time to actually write it... it was just fine.
By the way, there are two Primarchs: Perturabo's attitude towards Morgan is an appreciation towards like-minded and capable people, but he is unwilling to show that appreciation too obviously.
I think that's very weak.
Going back to Magnus, the image of the primarch is actually quite negative in this volume, especially the scene where he accidentally crushed a Thousand Sons to death with his legs (some readers said that scene was too... exciting)
sex, not very suitable for the overall style of writing).
So if you readers have any questions, you can ask them. As long as they don’t conflict too much with the author’s basic ideas, he will try to make some changes.
That was also the reason why Perturabo suddenly got angry in Chapter 30: Magnus was dissatisfied with his healthy playful attitude towards capable people, so the impulsive side showed up for a short time...
It's a bit early to say that now. What needs to be worried about now is the second volume. Compared with the first volume, the plot of the second volume will be much bigger. The Randan War will affect at least nine legions and several primarchs.
, he very much planned to let part of the Second Legion appear in that volume.
The other is to gradually possess some emotions. The specific situation depends on the plot. Maybe one day, Morgan will have the belief to take the initiative to fight for others (a slight spoiler, that route points to their lovely archangel).
When he was shaping Magnus, he focused more on his weakness as a scholar, compromise, escaping from reality, and not wanting to be responsible. The main purpose is to serve the plot. Otherwise, with the fighting capabilities of Morgan and Magnus,
Damn it, there is no way to get Magnus’s soul fragment calmly...
You can't make a mistake, Xiaoma, he confessed to me.
It's very Morgan. He is wrong now. There is a fork in the road in Morgan's portrayal. One is absolutely selfish and egoistic (for example, the part about plotting against Magnus), but such a protagonist... I don't know if you can
Unacceptable.
The number one character in the second volume must be the Lion King Zhuang Sen. That person... is very difficult to get along with...
He didn't even ask for the Lion King's soul fragment. Morgan could only gain a little bit of the Lion King's trust and even if it was successful, he had to think carefully about what kind of guy the Lion King liked.
Secondly, he very much planned to create an outstanding figure in the Second Legion, probably the second person of the Legion like Sevatar, who was reliable and powerful.
In short, these are all the author's personal thoughts and feelings. You can express any opinions in the comment area, and you can also join the group. The group account will be pinned to the top of the comment area.