In the morning, please leave the comment area on the top of the essence of the hot post to explain
Grumpy brother, online education.
If you feel uncomfortable, please exit.
Don’t say much, just start spraying.
Last night a book friend posted this post in the book review area.
Anatomy? I want to scold the author...I have no objection to dissecting dead bodies, but is it a little bit inhumane to dissect a living person, and is the protagonist of the dungeon world too mature? From a novice who is not deeply involved in the world,
All of a sudden, he became a business tycoon who made great changes. Isn’t this a bit too big a turn?
I habitually opened the Writer's Assistant to prepare an explanation, but the more I looked at the ID, the more familiar it became, and then I remembered that in the previous chapter, this was the real grumpy old man.
After I turned to the previous chapter, I remembered that I had posted a screenshot in an old group a month ago.
I asked my group friends, are people so violent nowadays? I don’t know how many people can see it, but I can definitely find it by looking through the group chat records.
There is also the ID avatar of that book friend.
At that time, it seemed that I had passed it off with just a few words, but this book friend still left a very deep impression on me.
Because he was the first to call out the father of Tucun in this chapter, so he seems to be the first one.
And it’s hard not to be impressed by this in two consecutive chapters.
Although I was surprised at the time, I didn't say much. After all, they are inherently violent, and most of the villagers were portrayed by me as ignorant villains. To be able to say something like this shows that my portrayal was quite accurate.
Let's just think of it as a grumpy compliment.
Later, I saw that many people liked it or made other suggestions.
After all, this is a two-dimensional book. It is understandable that readers are younger than other genres and may be emotionally susceptible to infection and bias.
I was thinking at that time, should I write it darker?
Later, I partially vindicated the Lord of God and made it very clear. Some older people may have a deeper understanding, and I agree with their views more.
The Lord of God has made it very clear that Yae Ji is just following his old path. The Lord of God also wanted to save his sister when he was young, but unfortunately he does not have Yae Ji's fighting power.
From some detailed descriptions, it can also be seen that the god master actually still loves their children very much, but his heart has died since the death of the previous generation of miko.
For example, the book friend "Green Plum Blossoms", my views are highly coincident with his, and his comments are also very accurate.
I didn't have a choice before, and I don't have a choice now.
And what about our irritable book friend? I typed out his comments in the comment area, but I couldn’t post them at all!
What was he commenting on?
Volume 1, Chapter 48: It’s better to leave
Text: This weird atmosphere lasted for about five minutes, and the hoarse voice of Lord Yae came: Shall we talk?
A certain book friend: If you talk about your mb, you will die!
It’s understandable, after all, I haven’t started to clear my name yet. In the next chapter, after the God Lord is half-cleared, Qingmei Book Friend said my favorite sentence so far, which is that sentence of “what used to be”...
Then Chapter 49 Everyone will eventually become what they hate the most
The last sentence of the text: After all, this is my home.
A book friend commented: Come back with a hammer, and the next time you come back, you will slaughter the whole village! If the author writes the protagonist as a virgin, he will immediately become a fan!
This should be the sentence. I took a screenshot and posted it in the old group, jokingly asking all the book friends, are people so violent nowadays?
Then I had a very deep impression on him, which directly led to the subsequent scene where my emotions exploded and I started to rant.
The first article said he was awesome! It was because I was so emotional at the time. It just reminded me of the description of the beast tide in the previous three chapters. It was less than 7,000 words and the portrait of five people was criticized because of the ultimate move.
At that time, I exploded instantly! I was eating out with friends and almost dropped my phone.
After all, as a fan, I have said this many times about Destiny's opening and reward dungeons.
The buff for language proficiency and efficient learning appears at least three times in the text.
The protagonist is in the beginning of Destiny. He is a citizen of the United States and has a large amount of shares left to him by his parents, which he then naturally sells to become a start-up capital.
The foreshadowing in those chapters is really good. As I said before, this is a fanfic. I want to write about business wars in detail. You don’t need to guess to know that some people will jump out to criticize me and say, what the hell did you write? This is still Tokyo Ghoul.
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So I checked a lot of information. In 2007, the subprime mortgage crisis in the United States, John Wall Street, the collapse of the funds of two large mortgage groups, caused many funds to be directly affected, and the Federal Reserve rescued the market...
During the financial crisis, Citigroup shares plummeted, and most of the world's financial markets were flooded with disasters.
Attention! By this time, Yaeji has been in this world for a year! It is emphasized in the text that in addition to exercising, sleeping and eating, he has been in the buff of efficient learning and constantly absorbing knowledge.
For Yaeji, who has his wife with him, that is not a problem at all. As long as he goes to bed, he will know exactly which company will fall tomorrow and how much it will fall! If you can't make money like this, it will be really bad!
There are many financial tycoons who started their careers during the financial crisis. Others can become legends. Friends who are able should know why. The delay is so outrageous that it took two hours for me to publish a chapter.
At this point, I admit that it is my fault! I apologize! I'm sorry!
But then, I commented on the hot post this morning! I am right about every word!
I don’t know. If you are bored, you can find me in the group. I can just post screenshots and tell stories! It doesn’t matter if you just watch it as a funny event. Isn’t it just to make everyone laugh and exchange for some subscription money?
If it were a pirated version, I wouldn't even criticize it, I would just delete the post, ban it, and take it away. Non-Chiefs should know this very well.
It’s precisely because this book friend left such a profound impression on me!
This is no longer hitting the muzzle of the gun, this is running directly into the barrel!
Man, my fault! I sincerely apologize! I'm sorry!
But after that, I'm not wrong at all, don't tell me to calm down. This is completely a matter of different worldviews and values, which are irreconcilable!
How many lovers have broken up like this, let alone...
As for living people and ghouls, no matter how much I argue, I can say that he took things out of context, but there is no need.
The grumpy writer is so grumpy for now, feel free to comment whatever you want.
In the afternoon...it should be updated normally. Hot posts will be deleted after three days. Let’s stop here.