After finishing writing, I feel a little relaxed, and I would like to thank all my book friends for their support.
By the standards of online writing, this book is undoubtedly a failure.
why?
Because it is boring, or in other words, many transitional plots are not interesting, and the whole story is about development and war, and there is almost no other content.
There is no conflict between people, no astringency, and not even many routines. How can this be good-looking?
I can say it myself, but it doesn’t look good. Add to that typos, illogical sentences, various interruptions in the middle, and a bad update at the end. How can this be better?
Many friends are able to finish the game, probably because of their love for The Lord of the Rings and riding and slashing.
This is my problem, I'm not good enough to write an interesting story, this is where I want to improve.
But what about.
If you look at it from the perspective of a person who has never been exposed to writing and just got it on a whim after watching the "Hobbit" trilogy.
I think this book should be barely passable.
At least, I wrote what I wanted to write. Although it is not that interesting and the logic is not good, at least it is close to the original work.
I have written almost all of my understanding of Middle-earth, various conjectures, and things I know in this book. It is very fragmentary, but it is almost finished.
At the very least, in this book, I changed Thorin's fate. Of course, he did not reach the end of the book and went to the Hall of Mandos early, but he could still be reunited with his friends in Valinor.
Why did he die early?
Putting aside Thorin's original fate, in my case it's because his soul has been consumed and exhausted. Yes, he is too tired. Coupled with the wave of consumption against the dragon disease, his body is heated by him.
The faith burned out.
Therefore, he died in his early 200s.
It can be seen that being too tired will really shorten your life. I hope everyone can pay attention to living a relaxed life.
In my understanding, when looking at a life in Middle-earth, the body and soul are separate. After the death of the elf body, the soul returns to the Mandos Hall to wait for resurrection. If you are unwilling to return, you will become a lonely ghost in Middle-earth.
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Until the end of Arno,
Of course, in this regard, I also gave these beautiful lives an additional choice in the book.
After the death of the dwarf body, the soul returns to the Hall of Mandos, waiting for the call of Aulë.
Human beings are special. They are not bound by Arno. After death, their souls will go to other worlds.
Therefore, the body and soul are viewed separately. The soul continues to burn the body until it dies. In my opinion, this is the true state of every life in Middle-earth, at least, this is the case for dwarves, humans and elves.
In addition, I changed Aragorn's fate and allowed him to take back the throne when he was in his thirties.
Many people may think that Aragorn's decades of wandering have cultivated his wisdom, tenacity and kindness, and made him an excellent king.
I have a different view on this. In fact, a person does not grow in the midst of hardships. He only continues to recognize himself and explore his own essence.
So there is actually no essential difference between suffering for more than ten years and suffering for decades, it's just the length of time you suffer.
To put it simply, whether a person has a good character or not is mostly innate. The influence of acquired environment cannot be said to be absent, but not much.
This sentence may not sound nice, but it is just my personal understanding. I will not argue or make excuses.
The other is the fate of the Hobbit, Frodo and his four friends.
Under my changes, they will not have to endure the suffering of transporting the Supreme Ring, but can live happily in the Shire for the rest of their lives.
Is this good or bad? I don't know.
This is all because my abilities are limited and I really don’t know what to write in the middle. I can only kill Zoro in advance and let this world enter the next era.
Of course, I have changed many things, including the fate of the people in Rovanion, the fate of the dwarves, the fate of Saruman, etc. I won’t go into details here, as that would be too much.
Finally, let me talk about my journey since writing the book.
To be honest, I am a person who has a strong desire to express myself. Of course, it is only on the Internet. In reality, I don’t like to talk very much.
Friends who are familiar with me should know that I still have an account at Station B. I share some riding and slashing videos for free, but I stopped updating after writing the book. I was really tired.
My original intention of writing this book was just to write about how I would change the fate of these people if I arrived in Middle-earth. As soon as this idea came up, the general plot of the story was already in place.
I never thought I would write so much, nor did I think about how much money I would make. I just thought that if I posted it to the starting point and someone would read it, I might be motivated to finish it and not give up halfway.
According to my idea, it should have ended after the Battle of Five Armies.
Well, everyone has seen the result,
Moreover, just because I had this idea at the beginning, I often communicate with readers to answer why it is designed this way and why it is written this way.
But on the Internet, who can convince whom? This is not something that just makes sense, and my reasoning may not necessarily be the readers’ reasoning, and there is a high probability that the readers’ reasoning will not affect me.
If I say too much, it will just make each other uncomfortable and will not have any other effect. If I write the next book, I will definitely get rid of this problem completely.
Another point that impressed me the most is that the readers of Qidian are really very different. I am an old bookworm who has read books for more than 20 years, but I never thought that this would be the case.
Here, I would like to quote a passage to explain my feelings during this period.
A book is like a bus. You buy a ticket and follow the bus to see the scenery along the way. If you like it, keep buying the ticket. If you don't like it, just get off at the next stop.
In any case, this story ends here. We have a long way to go, and we will see you later.