Chapter 178 Soul Exploration 'Insect of Time and Space'
The story of the Blue Crystal Civilization is finally over. I am finally relieved and feel that I have performed well.
There are some areas that can be optimized, such as polishing the climax chapter and so on, to make the mood richer, but because of the tight time and the pressure of serialization, this can only be done.
As for writing skills, I also want to improve, but for a while, there is really no way.
Perhaps due to the influence of my last book "Game of Different Dimensions", this book uses a lot of puzzle writing methods, which is not very friendly to follow-up reading. The subscription price dropped by about 1-2 thousand at the beginning. Many people have kept it.
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However, I feel that if you read the whole story coherently, there should be no big problem. I hope that you can improve it by reading later!
(You are dreaming. If you stop reading, you will not rise!)
In addition, there is a slight problem with the rhythm.
Unlike Xuanwu Continent, Xuanwu Continent has a group of turtles as supporting characters, and the people on earth are crazy and shocked by the mirage, so it is easier to write (you can show off).
This new chapter is only supported by a few old characters from the past, and there are no earthlings around to shock. Although these characters can satisfy some funny plots, from the perspective of rhythm, there are some shortcomings.
I also noticed this during the writing process. Even though the story framework of the Blue Crystal Man is supporting it, the overall content still lacks a sense of lubrication.
I can’t pretend to be cool, it’s really missing a little bit of flavor.
The problem is not too big, I am still satisfied with the whole story.
In the next chapter, I will learn lessons, meet some new characters, and expand my circle of friends.
Because of the fall of the demon god and the great development of a century, various civilizations will also come out to hang out and encounter them.
It’s not good for the protagonist to keep digging for ruins. It’s also impossible to just dig in one place. There’s no such luck!
In addition, progress on the earth must also be accelerated.
The people on earth are really bad. The power level of this book is still very high, and it is not good for one person to do it alone.
In this book, collective power can still play a role, that is, building a world wonder-level killer weapon that can defeat powerful enemies.
There is no problem at all with a single individual dish. As long as we can build wonders, we can solve a large part of the problem.
Finally, I find that many people don’t seem to read the entire copy and just watch the final ending. What’s the gain?!
Because the subscriptions for those pictures are extremely high!
Isn't your behavior equivalent to... just the last three seconds, no intermediate process?
Okay, sometimes I read some unlimited books, and I do the same, but I think the writing in this copy is still okay...it's not to the point where I need to skip it, right?
That’s it for the summary. Before I know it, it’s 500,000 words long. I haven’t asked for leave yet. I’m a model worker!
Donkeys in the production team all have holidays!
I hope that the next work will go smoothly and my writing will be smooth!
