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In my own opinion, the biggest shortcoming of this book is that the characters are not established. Whether it is the protagonist, Liu Bei, or other characters, they are all written too thinly.
In addition, the protagonist does not have a clear goal, which makes it difficult to write in a satisfying way. Of course, the main problem is my ability.
Moreover, I wrote Cao Cao to death, and Yuan Shao was written very poorly. As a result, there was no strong sense of expectation later on, and many friends abandoned the book.
Regarding the subsequent plot, the idea is this:
Zhou Ping led his troops to Lujiang to defeat Sun Quan and drove Sun Quan to Jiaozhou.
Zhou Ping persuaded Liu Bei, together with Liu Biao of Jingzhou and Liu Zhang of Yizhou, to spend money, materials and efforts to rebuild the Luoyang Palace and welcome the Han Emperor back to Luoyang, but Yuan Shao refused.
Liu Bei sent his generals in advance to capture Qingzhou and then fought Yuan Shao in Liyang. Yuan Shao was defeated (Guan Yu killed Yan Liang and Zhang Wu shot Wen Chou). He abandoned the emperor in Yecheng and fled to Youzhou. Zhou Ping captured Zhen Mi.
Liu Bei welcomed the emperor back to Luoyang, and he was named king and appointed general.
Because Liu Bei was so powerful, Liu Xie was afraid that he would seize the throne, so he cried and begged Liu Bei to let Yuan Shao go. He said he was thinking of Yuan Shao's previous care, but in fact he wanted to keep Yuan Shao to contain Liu Bei.
Liu Bei was benevolent and agreed with Liu Xie, withdrawing his troops and returning to Yanzhou. Yuan Shao remained the herdsman of Jizhou.
Zhou Ping tried hard to persuade Liu Bei to attack Yuan Shao, but Liu Bei refused, so Zhou Ping went to the palace to persuade Liu Xie to abdicate.
Liu Xie came to Liu Bei to complain. Liu Bei was concerned about his reputation and scolded Zhou Ping.
Zhou Ping was so angry that he resigned and returned to Feng County. Liu Bei gave him three thousand catties of gold, fifty million yuan, and twenty beauties.
Liu Bei thought carefully and realized that he could no longer let Yuan Shao become more powerful, so he used Zhuge Liang's strategy to recruit him into the court as the Three Dukes. When Yuan Shao failed to arrive, Liu Bei sent troops to attack him.
The Luoyang family took the opportunity to rebel, and Liu Bei's mansion was attacked. Fortunately, Zhou Ping had made arrangements in advance to put an end to the Luoyang rebellion. However, Liu Bei was worried and plotted rebellion, and was defeated by Yuan Shao.
At this time, Sun Quan raised troops in Jiaozhou and occupied Jiaozhou.
Liu Bei came to Feng County to invite Zhou Ping out and returned to Luoyang with him.
Zhou Ping persuaded Liu Bei, then forced Liu Xie, and Liu Xie abdicated. Liu Bei accepted the throne and became emperor, still known as Han.
Liu Bei worshiped Zhou Ping as his general, led his troops to attack Yuan Shao, pacified Jiyou and merged the three states, and subjugated the foreign tribes.
Zhou Ping also led troops to attack Jiaozhou and destroyed Sun Quan.
Zhou Ping proposed to gradually weaken the power of aristocratic families, allowing ordinary people to enter officialdom, vigorously develop the papermaking and printing industries, and set up schools so that ordinary people could have books to read.
We also vigorously developed agriculture and transportation, so that the people lived and worked in peace and contentment.
Zhou Ping resigned and returned to his hometown. In Feng County, Zhou Ping owned hundreds of houses and countless money. He indulged in wine and sex all day long and did not care about government affairs. (End)
The last book I wrote was the one by Pan Feng. The first order was only 520, but the final order was 1,500. This one was the first order was 730, but the last order was less than 1,000. Two books
The high-end orders are almost the same, both cost more than 3,000 yuan. This shows how poorly written Liu Bei's book is.
Recently I was reading "My Father, Emperor Gaozu of the Han Dynasty", and I felt that the characters in it were very vivid and full of personality, while the characters in my book felt like they were all transparent people, or tool people.
It is not an easy task to write good characters and make them full-bodied, three-dimensional and individual!
I have opened a new book, still writing about the Three Kingdoms, with a system. This time I will work hard to create good characters.
Moreover, no matter what my grades are, I will never be a eunuch again! If I am an eunuch again, I may really become a eunuch! I also want to be a person who has a beginning and an end!
The new book "Three Kingdoms: I Have the Peak Experience Card of Martial Arts" has been released. Friends who still have confidence in Shiwen may wish to take a look. Shiwen will not let you down this time!
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