On the day when the filming team of Wanhe Duoyu and the desert island survival quartet set out.
After studying hard for a week, Zhang Yang finally wrote the second version of the script.
For this script, he learned a lesson and did not accept Liu Ming's help again. Instead, he relied on his own ability to write a simplified version of the script.
That’s right, Mr. Pu’s special skills!
Just write the summary of the story!
Don't ask, I just don't want to write everything.
Of course, the publicity this time is for Mr. Pu to read it first. If the story is suitable, he can then deepen it. Then, based on his own story, he can just ask other people in the department to help complete a few details.
Last time they worked hard to come up with a good script, but Mr. Pu rejected it directly, and they felt uncomfortable for several days.
Especially Mr. Pu’s last request, which was to include the plot of aliens invading the earth, directly scrapped their last script.
The kernel is completely different, so it has to be rewritten.
"Dong dong dong~"
"Enter!"
Zhang Yang and Liu Ming came to Mr. Pu's office for the third time. Zhang Yang took a thin piece of paper and handed it to Mr. Pu.
"Mr. Pu, this is a script I wrote."
Mr. Pu felt happy when he saw this number of words.
"Well! Judging from the appearance, there is progress!"
As a senior novelist, Mr. Pu naturally knows that the more words in a novel, the more interesting it is. Especially when writing a new book at the beginning, there is no problem in having more words. You can delete and delete only the essential content and leave the rest in the end.
Some parts are condensed into a few sentences to leave suspense for the future plot. In short, there is definitely nothing wrong with having too many words.
If the number of words is too short and the author is reluctant to delete every word he has written, how can he revise it?
Mr. Pu looked at the A4-sized script handed over by Zhang Yang and felt that it was stable this time.
Zhang Yang is back again.
Familiar scrawled script, dealing with official matters.
'It seems that my last suppression was very effective on Zhang Yang, and it is probably about to break.'
If a carefully written script is directly rejected and then rewritten, any screenwriter will be extremely uncomfortable, not to mention that the time is very tight.
Mr. Pu took the script and started browsing it.
Movie name: "Alien Forbidden Zone"
Story content: Alien spacecraft descended on a certain area of the earth, and then began to invade the earth. Human beings and aliens continued to rub against each other. The place was called the alien forbidden area. The protagonist Da Zhuang is a reporter who cares about his hairstyle very much. He feels that human beings
Both the aliens and the aliens are intelligent beings, so they should shake hands and make peace, then go to the alien restricted area alone, start a vigorous relationship with the aliens, and finally sway the aliens with their emotions, allowing them to leave the earth and become two civilizations
Ambassador of peace between.
over.
Mr. Pu:(°ー°〃)
Seeing Mr. Pu's expression, Liu Ming behind him was shocked.
broken!
As soon as Liu Ming saw Mr. Pu's look, he knew that Mr. Zhang's script must be finished.
He had read it before coming here and felt that it seemed like he was writing nonsense.
The collision between two civilizations actually stopped fighting by relying on one person to fall in love?
Where is the logic? Where is the law of heaven? Where is the law of darkness?
This is really a romantic drama in the guise of science fiction. What is the difference between it and the hot TV dramas on the market now that talk about romance in the guise of fairy tales?
In the end, he became an ambassador of peace, which was outrageous!
He felt that Mr. Pu would never want them to shoot something like this.
Now, Mr. Pu’s attitude is the best proof!
'Oh, if I had known better, I would have advised Mr. Zhang to write a new one. It's my fault that I didn't do my duty as a deputy.'
Silence, long silence.
Pu always expected that Zhang Yang would write simpler this time, but he didn't expect that Zhang Yang could only write these words after holding it in for a week.
It’s not enough for his usual 10 minutes of coding!
And this plot.
"puff!"
"Hahahaha! Zhang Yang, you are such a fucking talent! I really saw you right! You can write this script!"
Zhang Yang asked slightly nervously: "Then Mr. Pu...do I pass the test or fail?"
Mr. Pu clapped his hands: "A real hit! This movie will definitely be a hit after it is made! Just follow this direction! Don't change the main content at all, and then in terms of details. You must keep my four requirements in mind, and shoot like this
Come out. It will definitely look good!”
Zhang Yang has to take action himself!
This ability to write stories can be achieved with Dachun at 55.
What rubbish story?
From the short summary of the story, Mr. Pu has seen several poisonous points. If he writes such a novel, he will be thrown into the street!
First of all, aliens invade the earth in spaceships. Why do they have to stay in one place? It is also called an alien restricted area? Can't they fly and fight at the same time? They have to conflict with humans on the ground, right?
If this were written down, readers would directly criticize it as "depressing one's wits"!
Secondly, the role of individual power in racial wars is too small. The so-called relationship changes the world. I am afraid that this content can only appear in the Mary Sue TV series. If this movie was shot like this, it might as well be called "Alien Love"
"Fuck Me"! Maybe it can attract a group of young girls to go to the cinema to watch an interracial love!
If they were promoting a science fiction film, this content would definitely be sprayed to death.
As soon as the main story line of this movie came out, Mr. Pu seemed to see Douban waving to him with a score of 4.0.
A complete piece of shit.
When Mr. Pu said this, Liu Ming, who was blaming himself behind him, almost couldn't breathe.
(°ー°〃)
Mr. Pu actually gave such a high evaluation???
At this moment, his view of screenwriting was subverted.
Zhang Yang breathed a long sigh of relief: "I was scared to death. I almost thought I was not satisfied with this script. I stayed up for several days for this story and lost a lot of hair before I came up with it. It can definitely be done."
fulfill your requirement!"
Mr. Pu nodded with satisfaction: "Okay, I can see that you tried your best."
Sometimes, whether you can do something well or not has little to do with your attitude, it depends on your strength.
For top gangsters like Zhang Yang and Dachun, their strength ceiling is almost there.
Mr. Pu continued to explain: "When shooting, we must remember not to ask for the best special effects, but to ask for the most expensive. There is a little bit of cheapness in the expensive, so that the audience cannot see that we have invested so much money. It is best! Yes!
In order to give the audience some different experiences in terms of special effects, it is best to bring some physical discomfort."
The plot is disgusting, and so are the special effects!
The first step is to rely on the script, and the second step is to look at the shooting and post-production.
If these two points are well controlled, a bad movie can turn out to be great.
Faced with Mr. Pu's request, Zhang Yang waved his hand and asked Liu Ming to record it.
"Okay, Mr. Pu, then this film is decided like this?"
“It’s a deal!”
Although Mr. Pu didn't know how "Shanghai Fortress" was filmed, all the elements for a hit were gathered together. Even though the plot was different, the result was the same.
He suddenly remembered what a celebrity in the film and television industry said in his previous life: "Good movies have basically the same success story, while bad movies have the same bad tricks."
Discussions on the script have basically been completed.
Zhang Yang asked: "Mr. Pu, who are we looking for as the director of this film? The one we shot last time was Wu Ma. I don't think it's good. After all, he makes urban drama films and has never been exposed to the science fiction category. Although there are
We have two brushes, but that’s all we have, why don’t we find a director who is good at making science fiction films at home or abroad? Anyway, we have enough budget!”
With a total investment of 360 million yuan, as long as they are willing to pay, well-known science fiction directors in the industry can be invited to come over.
Mr. Pu’s eyes lit up!
"Okay! Then let Wu Ma do the filming! I think your view of people is too narrow. Doesn't it prove that you can't do it if you haven't filmed it? Is it right that this has been the case since ancient times? I saw Director Wu from the first time
From that day on, I felt like the light of science fiction was shining in his heart!"
"You gave Director Wu such a combination for this film, tsk tsk~ it's absolutely amazing!"
Absolutely awesome!
I don’t even know how I died!
Science fiction films are not like other types of films. They can be directed across genres. This requires extremely solid skills!
Shot scheduling, post-production, and the combination of characters and special effects are all extremely complex!
Why are there so few domestic science fiction films?
Isn’t it because the directors can’t film it?
Directors who specialize in science fiction may not be able to control it anymore. How can a small director who once specialized in filming for coal bosses make good science fiction films?
Do not make jokes!
Give it to me directly!
Mr. Pu’s statement shocked Liu Ming again!
This time, it not only impacted his view of screenwriting, but also impacted his understanding of film classification!
You can make science fiction movies casually???
Can Director Wu really do it?
If someone else said it, he would sneer at it, but Mr. Pu, he still has some illusions.
Zhang Yang didn't have many ideas, so if Mr. Pu said it would work, that would be fine.
"Okay, Mr. Pu! Then I'll make an appointment with Director Wu! Shooting will start immediately after I finish writing the script!"
"OK!"
Mr. Pu happily sent the two people out the door.
Feeling Mr. Pu's extra courtesy, Zhang Yang felt like he was walking.
This kind of treatment is outrageous even for Meng Xingkong, the department manager who makes the most money for the company. Liang Sepi and others have never enjoyed it!
It’s clear who is the talent in Mr. Pu’s heart!
"That's right! Zhang Yang, you have finished writing the final version of the script. Bring it over and show it to me again. Remember, this theme must not change."
Mr. Pu gave another instruction before closing the door.
"Okay Mr. Pu! Don't worry! The complete story will definitely conquer you!"
After closing the door, Mr. Pu breathed a sigh of relief.
He just thought about the last time he filmed "For Fans", the script didn't seem to be very good, very mediocre, but the final effect was staggering, and it became a counterattack classic of small-budget films, with a Douban score of 8.5.
This time, he must not make the same mistake as last time.
The final version of the script must be strictly controlled to prevent any accidents during this period.
You know, Duoyu Company has never been short of backstabbing monsters. An assassin might jump out from any corner and hit Mr. Pu hard on the back!
Have to guard against it!
After returning to the production department, Liu Ming finally dared to speak after being sealed for a long time.
"Mr. Zhang, I think something is not quite right this time! Mr. Pu is a little too casual."
Zhang Yang said happily: "This proves Mr. Pu's trust in us!"
"Okay, you can contact Director Wu for his schedule, and I will continue to write my script!"
"Uh okay."
Although Liu Ming felt something was not right, he still followed Zhang Yang's request and went to work first.
But there was already a trace of doubt in my heart.
"Does Mr. Pu really want such a simple story?"
"I don't think so."
He felt that there might be some shining points in Mr. Zhang's prototype of the script that he hadn't discovered yet, waiting for him to discover them.
"By the way, I just forgot to ask Mr. Pu, which young actor should we invite?"
Monday, November 25, sunny.
It is advisable to explore and avoid streaking.
There is a small island with an area of about 10 hectares 31 kilometers away from the southeast of Ningliao Province at an angle of 38 degrees.
This is a first-class island with rich natural resources and still maintains the appearance of a virgin forest. It looks green and vibrant from the air.
"It's really a pure land. It has not been polluted by humans."
On a white medium-sized passenger ship, Xiaoxing stood on the deck with a telescope and looked out.
Ahead is their destination: Mingsha Island.
They spent 600,000 yuan to rent this island for three months. They could do anything as long as it didn't damage the original landform of the island.
It is generally a vacation choice for wealthy people.
Build a temporary villa on the island with various facilities, and then hold a Haitian feast party.
Of course, there are also some scientific research teams that study professional content such as the microbial communities of virgin forests.
This is a beautiful island that does not allow development.
The program "Desert Island Survival" filmed by Wanhe Duoyu and the Duoyu Survival Four has already started filming.
In fact, they have been recording since the preparation stage. The camera follows the entire crew to record every detail before surviving on the desert island, striving to be realistic.
Wow~
The waves crashed against the golden sand of Mingsha Island. A white passenger ship carrying more than 100 people docked at the coast. The sailors disembarked and began to secure the ship.
On the shore, a muscular white man wearing a jacket was waiting for them.
"Hi! My friend Xiao Xingyi, I've finally waited for you. These are the wild giant earthworms I just roasted. Do you want to eat them? They are fat, plump and juicy. It should be rare to see them in your city!"
Xiaoxing's gaze followed Bell's back. Several stacked stones were covered with large leaves, covered with burnt yellow striped insects.
Suppressing the discomfort in her stomach, Xiaoxing nodded: "I can see that you are still a very good cook, so I don't need to. I just got off the deck and felt a little nauseous."
Bell took a leaf, grabbed two and threw them into his mouth, biting through the brown skin, the juice splashed everywhere, and the pulp exploded in his mouth.
"Well, this is a good thing. The protein content is 7 times that of beef. It is a good nutritional supplement in the wild. These days, the brothers who are adventuring with me must eat this stuff."
Meng Xingkong, Liang Sepi, who just got off the boat, outrageous, Miao Sang: "."
The four people looked at each other, were silent for a moment, and then all started to board the boat.
Especially Liang Sepi, who shouted: "I don't want to eat earthworms! I don't want it!!! Please Mr. Pu, please find someone else, I really can't do it! I can't do it."
Although the others didn't show it so obviously, the corners of their mouths were obviously twitching, which was hard to accept for a while.
They had read some wilderness survival knowledge from books before coming here, but the impact of a plate of exploding earthworms in front of them was still great.
After a lot of back and forth.
The four finally got off the boat and stood next to survival master Bell.
Li Ke took a deep breath: "I hope this time, I can bring a different surprise to Mr. Pu."