In recent chapters, I have seen a lot of book friends saying that the pace is good and the ending is bad. He has read it many times himself. But because of the real visual reasons, he thinks it is actually very good, but when he thinks about it carefully, it is wrong for readers.
It seems to be too fast...or too short.
His ideal rhythm is to fight the battle first, and only then come to the decisive battle to explain the past two months with the background, including historical secrets and other things. At first, it ended with daily life to achieve HE, but it was obviously not done well. He summarized everything.
There are two points. One is the writing method. You shouldn’t use flashback-like techniques. The other is the word count. Maybe if you add a few more chapters a day, we can read them all in one go. Is that too likely to cause such problems?
In short, the author has learned lessons and experience and revised (rewritten) the article. Give him 1-2 days and try his best to make up for the rhythm. The previous article has been published and it will not move. It is easy to be blocked. Later, he will find a way naturally.
A reasonable explanation is provided first to make the decisive battle less abrupt.
First of all, thank you for everyone’s opinions. Xiao Mengxin is listening and will not make similar mistakes in the future!