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9. It must be funny

PS: Brother Xiaobai, please give me a recommendation vote

Watching Scar's cute little boy, Little White Children's Shoes, turn into a little bunny and slip away quickly. Zhang Tan didn't understand what was going on, as if he was afraid of him. Wasn't it a relaxing conversation just now? Oh, Xiaomi was not relaxed.

The whole process was scary.

Xiaobai's machine-gun-like words just now made Zhang Tan a little confused. He replayed it three times in his mind before he finally understood that he was actually supporting Xiaomi, and she was quite ladylike.

Zhang Tan picked a movie at home and watched it on the sofa. Last time he picked a movie with high ratings, but this time he picked a movie with high box office. The ratings were relatively high and the box office was really high.

After reading it, it was already very late. Zhang Tan went downstairs and came to the activity area on the first floor. Some children had already gone back to their dormitories to sleep, while others were watching TV, sitting on their own small chairs with their little heads held high.

It's all black and white.

Xiaobai sat among the children, his big eyes glued to the TV, with nothing else in his eyes.

Zhang Tan couldn't help but look at her a few more times because she was so "domineering".

I saw Xiaobai's left hand holding Xiaomi, and his right hand resting on Meng Chengcheng's shoulder. He had a band-aid on his face. He was wearing Chinese clothes and looked like he was the big brother, which made people look at him.

Teacher Xiaoliu reminded her several times, but to no avail. He also saw that she only looked like a big brother and was not really a big brother, so he pretended not to see her.

Zhang Tan chatted with the staff for a while and told them not to let the children watch TV for too long. As a result, the staff turned around and turned off the TV, driving the children to bed like ducks. For a while, there was a lot of noise and protests.

And most of them looked at him who was innocent.

Zhang Tan:→_→

What do you mean? I haven’t even had time to leave! Won’t this make all the children hate me?

Xiaobai stared at the turned-off TV for several seconds, then ran to the staff and asked if she could watch it for another 5 minutes, or 2 minutes. She had to know if the little donkey would die, otherwise she would not be able to watch it tonight.

I can't sleep, all my dreams are about donkeys.

The staff member looked at Zhang Tan questioningly.

Zhang Tan:*&%¥#@

It's not enough for you to push me into a pit of fire. You have to use a loudspeaker to identify me! What will Xiaobai think of me? We just reconciled!

Sure enough, Xiaobai stared at him, grinded his baby teeth, pulled the staff to him, and asked: "Uncle, what is this?"

He stretched out two fingers and waved them in front of his eyes.

What does this mean?

Zhang Tan said: "2."

You say I'm a 2??Puerhei has just been cancelled, and a new nickname is coming?

After confirming that Zhang Tan was not drunk, Xiaobai felt relieved and asked to watch TV again to see the little donkey alive, otherwise she would not live well tonight.

Zhang Tan said: "Then watch for 5 minutes, start counting now."

He then said to the staff: "You can take the other children to the dormitory, and I will take care of them here."

10 minutes later……

Zhang Tan: "The 5 minutes have arrived a long time ago, and now it's already two 5 minutes."

Xiaobai stared at the TV and said without looking back: "But the little donkey hasn't been rescued yet."

Zhang Tan is also watching cartoons. He is a screenwriter. If he writes it, it will take at least two episodes for the little donkey to be rescued. He has to whet the appetite of the children before he is rescued. How can it be so fast? Only by suppressing it first and then promoting it can it attract people.

An innocent kid like Xiaobai.

"Go to bed, go to bed. I'll turn off the TV. You can continue watching tomorrow. I'll tell you, I've seen it. The little donkey is not dead. He will definitely be rescued."

After finally driving Xiao Bai to the dormitory, Zhang Tan also returned to the room, sat back at the desk, turned on the computer, saw the boiled peanuts in the bowl, pinched one, peeled off the shell, and revealed two plump cooked peanuts.

The aroma of peanuts wafts to the tip of the nose, making people want to put it in their mouths.

He moved the mouse and opened a real estate agency to check the house prices on West Chang'an Street. Indeed, as the private kitchen owner said today, the house prices in this area are ridiculously high and the rents are prohibitive.

Zhang Tan browsed for a while, but didn't see many houses for sale on West Chang'an Street. Most of them were for rent but not for sale, and were priced but not marketed.

Zhang Tan estimated that if he sold the land at Little Red Horse Academy, he would immediately be worth hundreds of millions. He would no longer have to worry about the funds for the academy or work, and could choose to live the life he wanted.

If he has passion, he can write a script by himself, organize a crew by himself, be the director by himself, start it, chase his dream, completely omit the starting and accumulation stages, and get it right in one step. Of course, I don’t know whether it will succeed.

Zhang Tan was very moved. His only concern was that Little Red Horse Academy was left to him by his grandparents, and although he didn't know much about it, he could guess that the two old men cherished it very much when they were still here.

Little Red Horse Late Night Academy is the result of the hard work of the two elders.

Zhang Tan hesitated, didn't think about it, closed the web page, and went to sleep!

When I came to the company early the next morning, a staff member brought me a new script.

Zhang Tan opened it and saw that the script was called "Under Tianyu Mountain".

Zhang Tan's work flow these days is usually to read the script in the morning and hold meetings to discuss it in the afternoon.

Others also received it. Jiang Rong, who was sitting opposite Zhang Tan, turned her head in front of the computer and asked: "Zhang Tan, what is the name of the script you received?"

Everyone does not necessarily read the same script. Sometimes everyone has a different script, sometimes it is the same script, sometimes it is the same for several people, and different for others, so Jiang Rong asked this question.

""Under Tianyu Mountain"." Zhang Tan said, "Where's yours?"

Jiang Rong showed him the script in her hand and said with a smile: "What a strange script. This is the first time I have seen such a long name."

Zhang Tan suddenly saw: "This brave man is obviously very strong but too cautious"!

Isn’t this the script that came with his resume??!!

He thought the studio had forgotten the script, and it seemed that he planned to evaluate it today.

"I think this name is very personal and will be remembered instantly. Moreover, it is very topical, strong and overly cautious. I think it is very interesting." Zhang Tan boasted silently.

Hearing this, Jiang Rong thought for a while, nodded and said that was true.

The scripts they evaluate all have no names of authors and are anonymous, so that everyone can speak openly without any worries.

The script in Zhang Tan's hand also had no name, but after reading it, he felt that it was definitely written by an experienced hand. The plot was rigorous, logical, and very attractive.

"Hahaha~~"

Jiang Rong, who was sitting opposite, suddenly laughed out loud, turned her head and said to Zhang Tan: "Zhang Tan, this script is very interesting and very funny. Do you want to read it? This brave man is very funny, the serious kind of funny, you know

How did he beat a slime at the bottom of the biological chain?"

Zhang Tan was very supportive.

"How?"

If you want to be praised, just work hard to the end. Zhang Tan pretended to think about it and asked again: "Use the ultimate move?"

Jiang Rong smiled and said: "I guessed a little, but it's not accurate yet. Keep working hard."

Zhang Tan made two mistakes. Jiang Rong couldn't help it anymore and laughed loudly: "He actually tried his best. Did you know that he tried his best? He is a brave man who was called to save the world, a peerless genius in the God Realm.

You have to use all your strength to kill a slime, haha."

Zhang Tan laughed twice, and Jiang Rong said again: "Did you know? When he fights with others, he needs to prepare three pairs of armors, one to wear, one for backup, and one for backup, hahaha. Who is this?

The person who wrote it must be a joke."

Zhang Tan:( ̄ェ ̄;)

Allows you to reorganize the language!

Zhang Tan didn't reply to her, and others interrupted one after another.

"Yes, yes, I am also reading this script. This brave man will make me laugh to death. I have never seen such a coward."

Another person said: "If you don't call him a coward, he is overly cautious. Who is this person? What has he experienced?"

Someone else answered: "He is just a person who is greedy for life and afraid of death."

"I don't think he is cautious, but he is definitely not a person who is greedy for life and afraid of death."

"Isn't this called greed for life and fear of death?"



Jiang Rong also joined their discussion: "He is a funny guy."

"Which script are you talking about?" Someone else joined in.

Because he has his own script, Zhang Tan is looking forward to the evaluation meeting in the afternoon.

In the afternoon, after lunch and a nap, at two o'clock, the deputy team leader informed everyone to go to the conference room for a meeting.

Zhang Tan took his laptop with him and sat down at his old seat. Jiang Rong sat on his right side and excitedly lowered her voice and said to him: "Finally, I want to know who wrote this brave book."

Zhang Tan stared at her and thought, are you sure you want to keep calling this author funny?

Team leader Liu was the last one to arrive. He sat down and said, "Come on, let's talk about the script you have. Zhang Tan will go first."

He always clicked Zhang Tan first.

Zhang Tan was already used to it. Hearing this, he said: "My script is called "Under Tianyu Mountain", and it is about... many advantages..."

After talking about a lot of advantages, let’s start talking about disadvantages.

Jiang Rong whispered from the side: "There are three shortcomings."

Zhang Tan: "There are three shortcomings."

Jiang Rong glanced at Zhang Tan proudly. She was used to Zhang Tan's habits and wondered if he had obsessive-compulsive disorder. Every time he evaluated the script, he listed three shortcomings.

As for the advantages, there may be one or many, but the disadvantages are always three.

Zhang Tan continued: "First, the whole story is a bit boring, lacks novelty, and is a bit boring..."

After the lecture, team leader Liu asked again: "Can you tell us how to solve these three shortcomings?"

Zhang Tan: "As for the first point, I think we can add a supporting role, whose main function is to activate the atmosphere, such as a pet..."

There are many such examples, such as the Mushu Dragon in the cartoon "Mulan". The addition of this small character made this cartoon much more lively and interesting.

Many animations have such a setting, not only animations, but also live-action movies and TV shows. They often set up a funny comparison next to the protagonist to liven up the atmosphere, such as the fat man in "Tomb Raiders".

After listening, team leader Liu nodded without comment and asked three colleagues who also received the script to share their opinions.

After everyone finished speaking, he said: "I will give all your feedback to the crew."

"The crew?" someone asked curiously.

Old Liu nodded and said: "This is actually a project that the factory is preparing to start. This script was written by the screenwriters in the factory. They came here specifically to listen to our opinions and suggestions. What you said is good."

Everyone was a little excited. This was the first time that a script they had evaluated was put into use.

Old Liu: "Okay, let's continue, Jiang Rong, I see you are eager to try, tell me about your experience."


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