"When the once most powerful conspirator returned in the most brilliant form, a conspiracy against him also began. Perhaps it had already begun. Everyone is a hunter and everyone is a prey."
This is the image I want to express at the end of the volume. I originally planned to write it directly after Lumian's silence as the final words, but I felt that this was too neutral and it might be better to leave it blank. After all, Lumian doesn't know yet.
What does 0-01 represent? We can only see that Morola, the city of exile that is closely related to the headquarters of the Church of Knowledge, is very similar to Trier. Therefore, we suspect that 0-01 has some kind of relationship with Trier in the Fourth Age. There is no way.
Thinking that this is a conspiracy against the "Red Angel", I can't say that.
However, it would be too much of a voiceover if the author uses narration to impose the words. It feels better to let the readers taste the meaning on their own.
For those who have read the first part, it should be easy to see that the stolen information represents a new conspiracy, corresponding to the one who just made a grand return with a big conspiracy. For those who have not read it, I will try to use seal 0-01
The method has many similarities with the Fourth Age Trier, which implies that it is related to the hunter path, involves the Fourth Age God War, and is a response to the return of the Red Angel, so the title line is highlighted.
This volume is very tiring to write. Conspiracies, large and small, are intertwined. Different people and different forces have their own plots. In the end, they become fireworks to welcome the strongest conspirator. Therefore, this volume is about conspirators.
The first level of meaning must be that Lumian has become a conspirator, the second level is the return of the Red Angel Medici, and the third level is what I just mentioned, big and small conspiracies, some have already broken out, some have just been revealed, and some
Some are still secret, some are brewing, and the one who seems to be the final winner is still involved in other people's plots.
Just like everyone has seen the bet made by the Church of Knowledge, but they have not seen why they are betting here, nor have they seen that a key premise of the hotel ceremony is that Lumian appears in the Iron Cross and appears in front of Gardner Martin.
They discovered that he was special, so which organization arranged for Lumian to go undercover in the Iron-Blooded Cross?
This part has added many alien forces, and combined with the existing ones, there are too many branch plots to develop, which caused a problem with the pacing for a long time in the middle. It was too slow and procrastinating, and there was not enough change. I originally planned
It was Chapter 123 that made Lumian a conspirator and digested the potion at the end. As a result, more and more branch plots were written, dozens of chapters more. Later, there was really no way, and some branch plots were
After cutting it off, I quickly threw out the hotel and pulled the main line back. The effect was pretty good.
In addition, there is a natural problem with sequel-type works, that is, everyone has seen very high-level and very intense things before, and if you go back to a lower level, you will feel that there is no tension and passion. I have no way to solve this, I can only be patient.
Write slowly, and you will eventually reach a high level in the future. Cherish the time you spend at a low level now.
Of course, as the end approaches, all kinds of conflicts will intensify, and Lumian and the others will inevitably be involved. Just like at the beginning of the second volume, when Lumian first arrived in Trier, I was actually thinking that under the current situation,
What does Medici want to do, what he will do, and how he will do it, so there is a detailed structure of the entire third volume, instead of just stopping at the name of the conspirator and a few key points.
Due to their own sequence level, in similar incidents, Lumian and the others often played a role in the corners in the previous volumes. There is no way around this, but they will definitely grow in the future and slowly enter the main stage.
I have said before that there is a line in this movie where the protagonist and the Red Angel have a battle of wits and courage. Now it seems that this is inevitable. Whoever loses will become a witch. (No.
Regarding this point, there is a hidden thread in both of them, and it is also a hidden thread that shapes the characters, but it does not shape them, but something else.
Finally, in general, I am very satisfied with the third part. Although it uses messy switching shots to correspond to the interweaving of large and small conspiracies, which is not suitable for following the reading, in the end it really converges into a strong note, and that is the only way.
Only the ultimate plot can create the ultimate characters. I am very satisfied with the Sun and Red Angel in this volume.
Writing that paragraph with an inner monologue and a lyrical way was also weighed repeatedly. I should have said before that introverted and sad feelings are suitable for line drawing, and for the silent blank space, just like a clown's flower presentation, while the flamboyant and wanton
Feelings need an explosion, a "scream".
Well, the title chosen for the fourth volume comes from Path of Outer Gods, which everyone already knows. The opening line of the volume is based on this. I modified a lyric by Jay Chou. A similar one has appeared before. I think it fits the final tone of the next volume very well.
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Part 4: The Sinner
Preface: Merciful Lord, please forgive me for the sins I have committed
Okay, it’s time to rest and organize the outline again. My children have been suffering from colds, coughs and fevers once a month since they started kindergarten in September. As a parent, I sometimes get infected, so I keep my manuscripts saved so that I don’t have to deal with them.
It's more, but I'm also feeling nervous and nervous, and no, I have runny nose again.
Please take an extra day off this time. Updates will resume at 12:30 noon on Thursday. Thank you all.
Finally, I have written a single chapter. Of course, I ask for a monthly ticket. Please give me a monthly ticket!