The writing of "The Continent of Origin: The Story of the Swallowed Starry Sky" has come to an end here. I am very grateful to all the book friends who have been able to read to the end. This can be regarded as a kind of recognition for me.
grateful:
The first ally in this book: Bone Book Friend. Bone Book Friend rewards almost every day. This is the first boss in this book. The next book will have to arrange a character named 'Kune Book Friend'. If there is anything
Ideas can be discussed and discussed.
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Friends, here is just a partial list, and I won’t list them all because of time constraints.
There are also those that are not listed below. I would also like to thank everyone. I would like to thank every fan book friend, including Qidian.com, QQ Reading and other reading group platforms. Thank you very much!
Let’s talk about this book:
This book was created on July 1, 2022, updated from July 15, 2022, to completed on May 31, 2023, which is less than a year.
Regarding the entire book, I personally feel that it is not well written, and it is very bad. Especially in the first part, the description of the continent of origin is not developed, and the grasp of Luo Feng's character is also not in place.
It should also be a point of regret.
I apologize to my friends who found this uncomfortable, but I guess I won’t be able to see this apology in this part, which is a bit regretful.
Regarding the analysis of the reasons, there are two points: one is that my personal level at that time was indeed relatively poor and limited, and the other was that I thought that I could not sign the contract at the time, and I made a promise to everyone to finish the writing, so I could only speed up the pace to finish it.
During the writing of the new book, when the number of words reached the requirement, I actually applied for it many times, but all of them were rejected. Because the book had not been signed for a long time, I thought that the application was hopeless, so many places in the origin continent were in outline form.
The narrative is not elaborated in many places. Luo Feng has no friends, and he almost came here with Morosa by himself. The whole process seems dry and lacks a strong storyline.
Regarding the continent of origin, many parts were not written according to the outline set before, so it seems a bit regretful that I personally did not write this part well.
Starting from the capital part of the Lushan Empire, the pace actually speeds up and deviates from the outline.
The Lushan Empire, to the Fusha Sea, to the Xingsha River, the Sea of Loss, the Tomb of the Luo Xing God King, the Heavenly Vault Palace, the Land of Chaos, the Ancient Swirling Eye, the Realm of the Gods, the Yan Grotto, Buzhou Mountain, the Temple, the Primitive Mountain, etc.
, the place is not developed, the characters are not developed, and all the plots are partially cut off compared to the outline, so the early content is basically very boring.
When the book received the signing notice, it entered the Hunyuan God Realm, so the plot unfolded in the God Realm.
Therefore, in this book, you can see that those who have entered the God Realm are basically die-hard fans of "Swallowing Stars". Thank you all for reading this book.
Let’s talk about the character issues. Luo Feng’s setting seemed very reckless and stupid in many places in the early stage. He acted without a plan or a strategy. He survived purely by luck and the aura of the protagonist. I really didn’t grasp this one well.
Because the strength of the opponent set for him every time is far beyond his own, which is a bit overestimating. According to the original work, the opponents Luo Feng encounters are also on par with him, so every time he encounters
You can break out of the situation by yourself, but in this sequel, you need to ask for help. This may not be recognized by everyone. After all, Luo Feng is the protagonist, so you can't always ask for help.
There is also the issue of Luo Feng's strength. This is because the opponent is relatively strong, so he often appears to be weak. However, his strength is absolutely invincible in the same situation. This is not reflected because of the difference in strength between the enemy and ourselves.
The brilliance of the protagonist comes out.
There are also some people who feel that Luo Feng in the early stage was incompetent and couldn't protect what he should protect. I don't want to say more about this. Maybe it was because Luo Feng had to do too much to prepare for the final step, and everyone felt that the sacrifice was huge.
Let’s talk about the “water” issue. In fact, there are a lot of parts in the early stage that have nothing to do with the development of the plot. Those parts deviate from the outline and have no effect. These are considered water. There are also too many repetitive descriptions and too many introductions.
There are too many descriptions of the environment, especially repetitive introductions. This may be a habit problem, and it does seem to be relatively weak. Everyone has raised this issue, and I am also working hard to improve it.
There is also one about aesthetic fatigue. Indeed, if you keep describing battle scenes, it is easy to get aesthetic fatigue, and it is also more difficult to write battle scenes because there will be a lot of repetitive adjectives for each battle, which some readers may be more concerned about.
A certain adjective is often easily offended, even to death. This is something I need to reflect on.
In the follow-up, I will also find time to write some extra chapters. This book does not explain how to deal with those supreme beings who have burned their origins. When the time comes, I will write some extra chapters about them. It also does not explain where the Fallen Star God King went. The later extra chapters will also
Note, of course, this book does not introduce 'Lord Luo'. This is what happened when he went to Jiexin Continent. I'd better read or write some extras in the future. Although I like Tomato's books very much, I really like Lord Snow Eagle.
I haven't read it. I wrote in the middle that someone said that Luo Feng appeared in Lord Snow Eagle, so I went to search and made up some things, so the two books may not be well connected. Please forgive me for this.
About the new book:
I will probably continue to create. I want to write a fairy tale novel. I have a prototype of the story a long time ago. I am now conceiving and preparing an outline. The background of the story is also relatively grand. However, I don’t dare to write it now because I am not satisfied with the whole story.
Before I conceived it, I always felt that I was still not confident enough. However, this book should be released at the end of June or July 1st. The sequel to Swallowing the Stars was also a book title that was created on July 1st last year. It feels quite meaningful, so
The new book should be released on July 1st. When the time comes, I hope you can help support and collect it. For the new book, I feel that I am more confident to write it well, and it will be more exciting.
Write at the end:
Although there are not many readers of this book, I still found some who are about to take the college entrance examination. It just so happens that the book is finished before the college entrance examination. Here, I wish all the students who are about to take the college entrance examination, and I hope you can pass the exam.
Ideal university, come on!
I wish all book friends that they will make academic progress in their studies, have a successful career, and have a happy family!
I wish you good health, a happy family, everything goes well, and a happy life!