Chapter 69 The end of the first life, Xianlu started a new beginning
Chapter 69: The first life is over, and the path of immortality has begun
Author: Flowing Water for Thousand Years
Chapter 69: The first life is over, and the path of immortality has begun
The foreshadowing is a bit too long, but with the addition of skill settings, it shouldn't be too boring.
I don’t really want to follow my old path, so this time I’m going to write about the mortal stream, a story that I’ve always wanted to read, but very few people have written about it.
Watching "Mortal Life", I felt bored every time I saw the Dan Yuanying. "Mortal Cultivation of Immortality" I barely got to the beginning of the spiritual world, and then I couldn't follow it.
However, the feeling in the early stage of mortal abortion was really great. Later, after watching Zifu Xianyuan, I felt it was very classic. Unfortunately, it has the same problem. It doesn't look good when you reach a higher level.
When writing the reincarnation stream, I also feel that this template is very interesting for mortals. The shortcomings of mortals are that their talents are too poor and the pace of the plot is too slow. If you are reincarnated, you don't need to be afraid of death or worry about taking the wrong path, and your talents can be improved every life.
In short, I feel that cultivating immortals is more attractive than being a mortal. It is very interesting to practice exercises, raise spiritual beasts, plant spiritual fruits, elixirs, and make little golden bugs to constantly eat and grow.
I'm just scratching the surface now, and I still have a lot of ideas later on. Although the realms are still very classic, such as Qi training, foundation building, golden elixir, and Nascent Soul, I have added a lot of changes to each realm, so it won't be something static.
Anyway, I hope you all like this story.
Finally, I fixed a loophole and wrote aquatic gold when I defeated the Wolf King.
I wrote it backwards, it means Jin Sheng Shui.
As an author, I always think about my own settings and write them smoothly.
The five elements in this book can be transformed into each other, and the water spiritual power can also assist the metal spiritual power, but it is not as effective as the earth-born metal, and there is a loss in transformation.
Likewise, even completely unrelated attributes can be converted into each other.
For example, when water is transformed into fire, the loss is extremely high and the gain outweighs the loss.
Finally, let’s talk about the results. The results of this book can only be said to be mediocre. When I asked about it a few days ago, I was pursuing more than 500 readings, and I failed to advance to the third round. I tried again for the third round this week, but still failed.
, the editor applied for the fourth round of recommendations, and only then did I pass.
I hope that when it is finally released, there will be 500 or 1,000 orders. I remember that the first order for Baishi was 1,300, and it was very mediocre. Only after writing 1 million words can it be a masterpiece, and then it will spin in circles.
Like Baishi, this book will most likely only contain two million words, so you don’t need to worry about the system collapsing.
I feel that before the system collapsed, it was more likely that my grades were too bad and my mentality collapsed, haha.
Go ahead and write the code. I will start tomorrow and continue with three updates. The pace is slow and I can only update one more chapter to renew my life.