End of volume testimonials you and flowers and you
On July 30th, the flower touch scroll was completed.
OK!!! (tremor)
Finally, I successfully adjusted the opening time of the new volume to the intersection of the end of the month and the beginning of the month, which completely ended the obsessive-compulsive disorder of finishing a volume in the middle of the month, and started a new obsessive-compulsive disorder of finishing a volume at the end of the month!
This month Maomao wrote 156,000 words, and he is still a hard-working cat~
But maybe it’s because this summer is extremely hot, humid, and stuffy, and I clearly feel that my physical condition is declining... so much so that I started to have high-intensity fatigue before the end of this volume, and I feel groggy and tired every day.
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First, there is a significant decrease in appetite, and then there is the confusion of the biological clock. For example, I just finished today's lunch before writing this speech, and I had breakfast at ten o'clock in the morning. I fell asleep at four o'clock last night, and nine o'clock.
I was woken up by the neighbor's lawnmower downstairs...
Ah, I hope that after summer is over, I won’t torture cats like this. I pinch them.
The theme of this volume is "love". In other words, it discusses "how far you can go for 'love'." The flower touch in the title of the volume is not only the psychiatrist "flower touch", but also the "love touch"
” and the meaning of the unique prosthetic “Strelitzia” created by Russell for Delphinium.
Well, just like what happened at the end of the last chapter (nods)
Russell is a very lonely and lonely soul. He longs to be loved. He also deserves to be loved.
This won't be a tragedy, so stop feeding yourself the knife...
What’s going on with today’s readers? Are they so good at committing seppuku? jpg
Maomao has written eight million words in his book, and this is the first time he has seriously started to write emotional lines.
The specific reason is that the player's emotional drama has obvious shortcomings, which drags down the development of the overall story and the fullness of Kaifuni. Some people will say, since you know the shortcomings, can't you skip it and not write it?
I divination.
I can't write, so I have to practice how to write.
To put it seriously, the premise for maintaining the normal development of the plot without writing an emotional line is, "My plot does not need an emotional line" rather than "I want to avoid the emotional line."
The two concepts of not writing because I can write, and not writing because I can't write are completely different. I may not be able to write emotional lines, play heroines, or give out sweets in the future, but I still have to be able to do this.
It's like if an author says to himself, "Oh, I just can't do daily work", "I can't write and fight", "My wits are so weak", "My copy has a strong sense of fragmentation"... My evaluation is that you need to practice
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Indeed, you may be able to write one or two books and completely avoid the things you are not good at. But if you want to stay in this field, no one can make up for the nutrients you have left unpracticed.
One day, when you are writing normally, it will suddenly jump out and become a "poisonous point". Do you insist on saying that this is poisonous? It may not be really that poisonous. But its level is far worse than your other writings.
plot, it will in turn drag down the performance and brilliance of other plots.
Mao was quite pleased. From the first volume to the fifth volume... within half a year, he had successfully achieved a breakthrough from zero to one. At least the emotional drama in this volume of Hua Touch has evolved compared to the previous "I didn't even see it."
To the extent of "barely okay".
The guarantee mission of this book is more than half completed!
It is not difficult to see that this volume is actually a branch volume. I am mainly dissatisfied with two points. One is that the story about Luo Su is not complete enough. She serves as a clue to the plot and cannot be added to the plot later in this volume. So
In fact, she should have exited in the middle so as not to distract the reader.
The other part is the part near the end, the battle with the "budding lover". I feel that the visual sense and rendering power are not strong enough.
I am a writer who is relatively good at this kind of special effects combat type, but this book suppresses it a bit. I haven’t written like this for a long time and I feel a little rusty. This also serves as a warning to me. When practicing new skills, I still can’t let go of old skills.
Review them from time to time. Cats cannot be broken off one by one like a bear breaking off a stick... Of course, I think there should be part of the problem here or that the condition is not good enough.
I feel like when the weather cools down and my routine is restored, I should go for a full physical check-up. I haven’t been there for two years.
But I don’t want to have a physical examination, and I have a vague feeling that a lot of diseases will be revealed...
Now the book has sold 930,000 yuan, and it is almost halfway through. I feel that I can write about two million words in this book, and the rhythm and structure will be much neater and more compact than that of Players.
Waiting for the next volume, Russell will officially leave (on a business trip?) Happy Island and go to other empty islands.
It’s a completely different customs, another model of the cyberpunk world~
Tomorrow is the usual day off, and the next volume will start on August 1st the day after tomorrow!
Try to finish a volume in thirty days, that will be perfect!