Two hours later, after refining a ray of spiritual power, Ding Chongguang walked out of the room.
It was already dark at this time, and an oil lamp was lit on a small stone table in the corner of the courtyard.
Little Qingyue was lying on the stone table, biting her pen and thinking hard, her delicate little face with a little baby fat wrinkled together.
When I walked in, I saw that the title on the paper was "Reflections on Reading the Story of the Little Mermaid"
"Have you written about the daughter of the sea? The progress is not slow."
Ding Chongguang praised it, saying that these were not copied from his writings.
The Ding family in Qinghe County has many branches throughout the counties of Qinghe County. He comes from a branch of Heishi County, which is mainly engaged in mining. This is why he is called a countryman by some people.
The countryman among the population of Qinghe City is also a local tyrant. Before he came to Qinghe Fairy City, he used his status to recruit people from all walks of life to run a small school.
In the eyes of outsiders, this is a place where he plays nonsense and plays with children of the same age out of boredom, but in fact it is his early talent reserve base.
Most of the people in the school have no qualifications and start working on their own after the age of fourteen or fifteen. Among them is a woman who wants to run a bookstore.
He casually made some summary of the story to help the other party, and by the way, he asked the eleven or twelve-year-old Xiao Qingyue to learn cultural knowledge and do some review work at the same time.
"Master, Qingyue doesn't like this story. Xiaomer has done so many good things, why should he sacrifice himself for a man he hasn't been with for long and an unfamiliar alien kingdom?"
When Qingyue saw Ding Chongguang, she felt a little dissatisfied with Xiaoxiao.
She is young, but she has been following Ding Chongguang and has a lot of experience. She knows a little about love and love, but she hates it.
"Don't you like it? Let me see."
Ding Chongguang took the manuscript on the other side and quickly browsed it using the spiritual power of a practitioner.
The whole story has changed beyond recognition, and the author has revised the brief outline a lot. For example, the witch was replaced by an evil monk who has an agenda for the kingdom. The demon kingdom of Xiaoyuren has enmity with the human race. In the dilemma, he chose to sacrifice himself and turned into a bubble sacrifice.
Destroy the conspiracy of the evil monks and bring the two countries back together.
It can be said that except for the beginning and the end, the whole story has no shadow of the famous fairy tale "The Daughter of the Sea". This is also because the author is a sentimental woman and also filled in some personal things. It is not so much a fairy tale as a fairy tale with a big heroine.
arts.
"Well, it's a bit outrageous, but it's not bad if it can make little Qingyue feel something."
"Anyway, I'm not going to copy it. In that case, let's get rid of the alien setting and change it to someone who has awakened the blood of the gods or some kind of holy body. Monsters do exist in this world, and there are many conflicts between humans and monsters. Most people are not interested in them.
The acceptance of the demon clan is not as high as that of later generations. I think the author reluctantly filled in the story like this because of the outline."
"The identity conflict between the male and female protagonists can be improved in other ways..."
After thinking about it, Ding Chongguang wrote down Party A’s revision opinions on the manuscript of more than 500,000 words.
Don't think that half a million words is too much. In fact, in the world of immortals with many long-lived people, a million words is just a detailed outline.
The longest updated novel currently on the market is a book with nearly 50 million words, titled "The Legend of the Islands".
This novel, in which the protagonist sails on a boat and travels to various islands and small worlds, is also very realistic and has been serialized for three hundred years.
The identity of the author is unknown. Sometimes the update interval is too long, and some people are worried that he is a eunuch.
Some people speculate that it was written by Almighty, because some of the cultivation plots are more realistic. Many people said that they have benefited greatly from reading this book.
Some people also say that this book, like other novels, was written by a small family. The father died and his son took over the writing position alternately.
"Then do I still need to write this review?"
Qingyue asked with her big eyes flashing and a little hope, no child wants his childhood to be filled with homework.
"When writing, just write according to this original manuscript. If you don't like it, don't like it. Just write down what you think after reading it. Once you've finished, send it over there."
Ding Chongguang touched Qingyue's round head, but did not express much opinion on the quality of the work.
Traveling to other worlds, learning other world languages, and mastering various skills in other worlds can be mastered as long as you put your mind to it. You can also use the mathematical, physical, and financial knowledge learned in previous lives. Only literature is extremely difficult to improve.
As a time traveler, he is certainly more steady and self-disciplined than other peers, and has an extra perspective on the world, but he inevitably has a fixed mindset.
Forget about science matters, it is difficult for him to avoid fixed thinking when it comes to liberal arts matters, and he cannot apply many cultural customs in this world.
As for whether his subordinates wrote the story well or changed it beyond recognition, Ding Chongguang didn't care, he just did it casually.
If he really wants to copy the text, he will naturally wait until he has mastered the land of a country and then directly transfer Chinese and various Chinese cultures there, completely changing the surrounding environment into what he is comfortable with and wants.
After writing the revision comments, Ding Chongguang said: "Qingyue, let's go, let's go to Third Uncle's place to have a meal."
"good!"
When Qingyue heard that she had to write down her thoughts after reading, her face became even more bitter. After hearing the words behind her, the clouds suddenly turned sunny. After happily putting away the paper and pen, she asked Ding Chongguang:
"Master, do you want to travel by carriage?"
Shanhai Inn mainly serves monster hunters and rangers, so it was opened outside the city, not too close to Ding Chongguang's residence.
Ding Chongguang shook his head when he heard this and said: "Without the spirit horse, the carriage is no longer suitable for my current status. I'd better walk, which can also comfort people's hearts."
Just like that, Ding Chongguang and Qingyue, one big and one small, went out without any bodyguards.
As soon as I went out, some familiar faces came up to say hello.
"Master Ding!"
"Brother Shigemitsu, is there nothing wrong with the pig farm?"
"My family also wants to order a few kilograms of pork!"
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This is the case along the way. They either want to know about the situation on the pig farm or want to order more pork.
For the former, he expressed his gratitude and concern, and said that he had already asked the family elders for help, and thought it would be solved soon. For the latter, he politely declined, saying that he did not care about selling it to external parties.
In addition to being the servants of big shots, these people also have affairs with the Ding family and are the shopkeepers.
The overall strength of the Ding family ranks third in Qinghe County. Big figures in the city and talented disciples are in large sects, or they stay in the spiritual energy formation and rarely go out. Every four or five houses on the street have a Ding family facade. Ding Chong
With just this Ding family disciple among them, it can be said that he walked sideways.
Soon, Ding Chongguang walked near Shanhai Inn.
I saw a group of people surrounding the inn, which was decorated in a simple and grand style.
"Surely something went wrong?"
Ding Chongguang knew at a glance that he had come at the right time, just in time to make a final inspection to see if the third uncle met his requirements for a clan leader.