With these two words, she didn't scold Lechao for teasing her, but she didn't say anything else except the word "congratulations", which not only showed her self-cultivation, but also showed that she should be unhappy at this time.
Too!
Being shaken like this, who would be happy if it were someone else?
Le Chao sent a smiling emoticon.
Then he wrote another sentence and sent it, "Are you angry? Don't be angry! When I get the money, I will go to your city to find you and treat you to a big dinner. How about that?"
About half a minute later.
Nangong Yan: "You came to my city? Just to treat me to a big meal?"
Le Chao: "Hey, what do I mean? You still don't understand? You understand! Right?"
Nangong Yan: "Are you serious?"
Le Chao: "Of course, what do you want me to say so that you can believe my sincerity?"
Another moment passed.
Nangong Yan: "Let's wait until you come to my city!"
Le Chao: "By the way, you have more coding experience than me. Please give me an idea! Okay?"
Nangong Yan: “What’s your idea?”
Le Chao: "Have you read my book "God of Fighting"?"
Nangong Yan: "I haven't finished it, I only read the first few chapters. What's wrong?"
Le Chao: "Didn't my old classmate ask me to delete the heroine into a single heroine? I don't want to change it beyond recognition, but I can't think of any good modification plan at the moment. How about you take some time to help me?
Take a look? Read all the chapters I have published so far, and then give me a suggestion on how to modify it better, okay?"
Nangong Yan: "How many words does your book have now?"
Le Chao: "About three hundred thousand."
Nangong Yan: "There are so many words, I can't finish them all at once, so let's do this! Please briefly describe to me the current emotional line in your book! I'll listen to it."
Le Chao: "This... okay! There are currently three heroines in total. The first one is..."
It took Le Chao a few minutes to explain the emotional line of "God of War" clearly.
After Nangong Yan read his brief description, he was silent for about two minutes and then sent him a suggestion.
"You probably want to make the changes as small as possible, right? If that's your idea, it's easy. All the current chapters don't need to be changed, but in the next few chapters, you let the heroine who appeared first appear again.
, in front of the male protagonist, kill the third female protagonist who just appeared recently. In this case, the third female protagonist will naturally receive the lunch box, and the first female protagonist kills the third female protagonist who the male protagonist recently liked.
, the male protagonist can naturally be disgusted with, or even hate, the first female protagonist, or directly write that the male protagonist discovered the true face of the first female protagonist through this incident, and was greatly disappointed in her, and felt for the first female protagonist in his heart.
The love of the protagonist disappears in an instant, and the remaining emotional line is naturally the emotional line between the male protagonist and the second female protagonist. In this way, your book will immediately become a single-female protagonist!"
In front of the computer, Le Chao was surprised after reading this suggestion.
I was surprised that Nangong Yan could come up with such an idea, and I was also surprised that this idea was brilliant.
The first heroine was actually asked to kill the third heroine, thereby eliminating both heroines at the same time.
But his brows were frowning tightly. He thought about this suggestion carefully and was not satisfied with it.
Le Chao: "Do you have any other suggestions? A gentler one. The first heroine kills the third heroine. It's too intense."
This time, Nangong Yan was silent for another two minutes before sending her second suggestion.
"If you think this is too intense, then I will give you the gentlest one! There is no need for the first heroine to kill the third heroine. You also don't need to modify the current plot of more than 300,000 words. You only need to add it to the male protagonist's story.
Psychologically, just castrate his feelings for the first and third heroines.
To put it simply: you can let the male protagonist be seriously injured or seriously ill, and then arrange for the second female protagonist to save him with great care and sacrifice. The male protagonist will be completely moved, and then the male protagonist suddenly
He realized that the second heroine was the one who loved him the most. At the same time, he suddenly felt that it was enough for him to have the second heroine in his life, making him realize that he should no longer think about the first and third heroines.
The master, otherwise I would be very sorry for the second heroine. Is this idea gentle enough?
As long as you let the male protagonist psychologically self-castrate his feelings for the first and third female protagonists, the book will naturally become a single-female novel. Anyway, in your previous plot, the male protagonist and the first female protagonist, the third female protagonist,
Nothing inappropriate for children has happened to any of the three heroines, right?"
Le Chao: "..."
After reading the second piece of advice given by Nangong Yan, Le Chao's eyes lit up and he felt joyful in his heart.
The second suggestion given by Nangong Yan won his heart. He felt that this suggestion was much better than the first suggestion. He really couldn't accept the suggestion that the first heroine kill the third heroine.
At the same time, because of the two suggestions given by Nangong Yan, he truly felt that Nangong Yan was much more experienced than him in writing articles.
Changing a story with multiple female protagonists to a story with a single female protagonist was something that troubled him endlessly. But here, she had two highly feasible suggestions at her fingertips.
The great thing about these two suggestions is that he doesn't need to make any changes to the currently published chapters of "God of War". He only needs to slightly shift the direction of the plot in the following plot.
At this moment, his desire to capture Nangong Yan was stronger than ever.
He had a hunch that as long as he could win over Nangong Yan, with this woman's talent and experience in writing, she would definitely become his good wife in the future and help him a lot in his writing.
In comparison, his current girlfriend Han Li is much inferior.
Nangong Yan is like a strong teammate, and Han Li is like a cheerleader who can only shout 666 for him at most.
On this long road of life, whether to choose a strong teammate or a cheerleader who only shouts and cheers, Le Chao doesn't know how others choose, but at this moment he is very clear about his thoughts. He wants to
A strong teammate.
"Swallow! Your wisdom fascinates me. What should I do if I fall in love with you even more? Hehe."
After a while, Le Chao sent such disgusting words to Nangong Yan.
Nangong Yan replied with an eye-rolling expression.
Then he sent another sentence: "I am older than you, you should call me Sister Yan!"
Lechao replied: "Okay! Sister Yan! Haha..."
Nangong Yan: "By the way, can you accept a sister-brother relationship? At most, how many years older than you can you accept a woman?"
Le Chao's next reply was amazing. He actually replied: "A female junior is holding gold bricks, why can't she accept the relationship between sister and brother? If the person is you, I think I can hold two or three gold bricks! Believe me, I
OK!"
Nangong Yan: “…”
A lot of people have said this about female juniors holding gold bricks, but not many people have followed up by saying that they can hold two or three gold bricks, right?
Seeing Nangong Yan replying with a series of ellipses, Le Chao smiled proudly.
He was very satisfied with his brilliant reply just now. He felt that his reply could almost be regarded as a textbook answer to the question of "sibling relationship".
However, the next sentence Nangong Yan sent made his smile freeze on his face.
Nangong Yan: "So... you can't hold four gold bricks at all, right? Then let's forget it, don't force it!"
Four dollars?
Le Chao's smile froze on his face, and he was dumbfounded for a moment.
He calculated silently in his mind, the female college student holds gold bricks, three, four, one and twelve, so, this Nangong Yan is 12 years older than me?
Is it that much bigger?
Can I physically carry so many gold bricks?
He suddenly felt a little weak.
At the same time, the image of an aunt in her thirties or forties also flashed in her mind.
Is Nangong Yan so old?
It’s not like that! She has photos of her life in her QQ space. She looks like she’s about 30 years old, right?
He was stunned for a long time, and finally gritted his teeth and replied: "In that case, it seems that I can only tell you the secret in my heart - in fact, my favorite is four or five gold bricks. I have liked them since I was a child! Hehe."
When this sentence was sent, Le Chao had a sad face, reached out to touch the cigarettes on the table, and lit one with a sad face.
Maybe there are women in this world who like four or five gold bricks, but he really is not one of them!
But thinking about Nangong Yan's approximate net worth, and the help she can give him in writing in the future, and... those photos in her QQ space that look young and quite beautiful, although the four gold bricks are a bit more
It was the limit of what he could bear, but he still decided to grit his teeth and endure it.
He took a few puffs of cigarette with a frown on his face, but it still failed to relieve his depression.
At this moment, Nangong Yan sent another private message.
"Haha, you really believe it? You fool! Haven't you seen the photos in my space? Do you think I am that big in the photos?"
"Huh? Did you lie to me just now?" Le Chao perked up, his eyes lit up, and he said happily to himself.
Blinking, he typed energetically and asked: "Ah? So how many gold bricks do you have?"
Nangong Yan: "Don't think about it, Jinzhu! I don't have it! Also, are you 22 this year? Or 23? I should be three or four years older than you at most! Haha, if I am more than ten years older than you, even if you can accept it, I
I can’t accept finding someone as young as you, hehe, if you really like a woman with four or five gold bricks, then we still don’t seem to be a good match.”
"Ha ha……"
In the rental house, Lechao laughed loudly.
She felt happy, not only because Nangong Yan said he was three or four years older than him at most, but also because based on the contents of Nangong Yan's recent private messages, she seemed to be willing to be friends with him.
Is it because my "God of War" is about to sell for 300,000 yuan in royalties?
So you are impressed by me?
…
This evening.
Le Chao, who was in a good mood, immediately scrapped the only 10,000-word manuscript he had on hand, and then rewrote a new plot according to the suggestions given to him by Nangong Yan.
He arranges a powerful enemy for the male protagonist of "God of War", and then the male protagonist will be seriously injured by that enemy. The second female protagonist, that "double"-style girl, will do her best to save the male protagonist's life.
Next, the male protagonist will be deeply moved by her, and then psychologically take the initiative to castrate his feelings for the first and third heroines.
Not a single word of the previous 300,000-word plot needs to be changed. When Le Chao thinks of this, he can't help but laugh.