Chapter 459 A different 'Raising the Spirit', help me!
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Sun Quan is reading Shenji's new book "Yang Shen".
Shenji's "Yang Shen" has not yet been officially listed, has not been published, and has not been listed online. The reason why the manuscript of this new book appeared in front of Sun Quan at this time is because Shenji found Sun Quan through QQ this morning.
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Shenji asked Sun Quan to help him read his new book and give him some opinions after reading it.
This situation is very common among online writers. After many authors write the beginning of a new book, just to be on the safe side, they will find one or two friends in the circle to help them write.
Because the longer I write the book, the more I understand what it means to be obsessed with authority.
When many authors are writing a new book, they feel very happy when they write it. When they get to the point where they are proud of it, they feel that they are so great. Once the book is published, it is likely to become a hit.
Then Tu Shen became enlightened, earned millions a year, lived in a villa, drove a luxury car, and all kinds of beauties were just waiting around.
This is an illusion that many authors are prone to in the new book period.
So over time, when many authors open a new book, they like to show the beginning of the new book to their friends in the circle, and then listen to their opinions from the perspective of pure readers.
Because the last sentence of "the authorities are confused" means "bystanders know better".
Shen Ji showed Sun Quan the beginning of the new book "Yang Shen" that has not yet been published, which was for this purpose.
Sun Quan readily accepted this.
He knows that "Yangshen" is a good book and has great learning value.
It had been a long time since he last read this book, and he had almost forgotten the specific plot and characters. Reading it again now must be a kind of enjoyment.
For this reason, he paused his coding work today and planned to spend a few hours to read through the hundreds of thousands of words sent by Shen Ji.
But as he watched, his expression gradually changed.
A little stunned and confused, he frowned and looked up at the ceiling from time to time, trying to recall what the plot of the version of "Yangshen" he watched before his rebirth was like.
But the last time he watched "Yangshen" was really a long time ago, at least ten years ago, and he had almost forgotten about the characters and plot of "Yangshen".
So his efforts to remember were all in vain.
In the original version of "Yangshen", he only vaguely remembered that the male protagonist and his biological father seemed to have become life-and-death enemies. The father wanted to beat his son to death, and the son wanted to beat me to death.
It just so happens that both father and son are very perverted.
Lao Tzu's magical power is unparalleled, and his qi and blood are as strong as a furnace.
But the son is gifted with extraordinary talents. He has trained his body and mind, and his skills have improved by leaps and bounds. Therefore, I can't kill my son, and my son can't kill me.
As for other plots?
Sun Quan only remembered Butler Wu and Champion Hou.
Can……
The plot of the version of "Yangshen" that Sun Quan watched today did not seem to be in the direction of father and son killing each other.
The relationship between the male protagonist and his father is actually quite simple and warm.
this……
Sun Quan patiently looked at this version of "Yang Shen" with doubts on his forehead. He really wanted to ask Shen Ji - don't you plan to modify the relationship between the characters in this book?
If "Yang Shen" didn't have the plot of father and son killing each other, would the early plot conflicts still be so intense?
As he watched the plot of this version of "Yangshen", the more he watched, the question in his mind gradually got the answer.
Shen Ji is indeed a master at inciting hatred and creating plot conflicts. In this version of the plot, although the male protagonist and his father are kind and filial, there is still a scum in their family. He is the uncle of the male protagonist and the relative of the male protagonist’s father.
The eldest brother has incredible powers and a powerful position, but he always wants to destroy the hero's family.
The reason is that the last magical power of their family's ancestral skills has been passed down to the male protagonist and his son. The male protagonist's uncle wants to destroy the male protagonist's family just because he wants to receive the last magical power of the family's magical skills.
From the plot conflicts of the story, Sun Quan felt that it was OK and there was no problem.
But when he watched the subsequent plot, he always felt a little uncomfortable.
Maybe it was because of preconceptions! He had read the original version of "Yangshen", so he was deeply impressed by the plot of the father and son fighting each other in "Yangshen".
As the old saying goes: Tiger poison cannot eat its seeds.
But in the original version of "Yang Shen", the male protagonist's biological father wanted to kill his son.
This is the main plot that is difficult to see in most online articles.
Because in the eyes of many readers, such a plot will definitely be very toxic.
Father and son killing each other?
Not many readers would want to watch such a plot.
However, the training system of "Yang Shen" is innovative, and Shen Ji's description of various fighting scenes is also particularly good. Therefore, everyone can tolerate the plot of father and son fighting each other, and after gradually reading it, readers will become the male protagonists.
The level of the plot is getting deeper and deeper, and if you take the role of the whole plot, you will feel the same feelings and share the same hatred and hatred as the male protagonist.
The version of "Yangshen" that Sun Quan was watching at the time had the male protagonist and his father as a loving father and a filial son, and the life-or-death enemy became an uncle, so there was no problem with the conflict in the plot.
But in terms of the unique novelty, it is a bit weak.
Perhaps this kind of plot would be more acceptable to readers?
Or maybe, this kind of plot will make "Yangshen" seem less special?
Sun Quan couldn't make an accurate judgment for a while, and he couldn't even give Shenji advice - let Shenji write according to the version of the original time and space.
Because how to say?
Tell Shenji - "Swap the identities of the protagonist's father and uncle! Let the protagonist and his father and son fight each other, it may be more interesting!"
If he really suggested this, Shenji might think he was a lunatic.
Who would suggest that others commit patricide? Even patricide in novels is unacceptable to many authors.
Because when the author himself writes such a plot, he will inevitably assume the identity of the male protagonist. Writing about the male protagonist’s patricide is no different from writing about his own patricide.
Therefore, he cannot suggest Shenji like this.
In addition, when Sun Quan watched this version of "Yang Shen", he also felt that Shen Ji's skill in writing fighting scenes seemed to have deteriorated a bit.
He couldn't remember exactly how the original version of "Yang Shen" was written.
But he remembered that when he first watched the original version of "Yangshen", every time he saw the fighting scenes written by Kamiki, he would feel excited and it would be very exciting and satisfying.
But when I watched the fight scenes in the current version of "Yang Shen", although I felt that Shen Ji wrote it very well, it just didn't feel like the original version of "Yang Shen" back then.
Has Shenji regressed?
Or have I read too many books over the years, so my vision has improved?
Regarding this point, Sun Quan could not accurately judge for a while.
The main reason is still the same - he can't remember how the original "Yangshen" was written. Without direct comparison, it is naturally difficult for him to accurately judge.
From his personal point of view, he feels that this version of "Yang Shen" is of good quality and well written, but it seems not as exciting as the original version of "Yang Shen".
He was still watching the rest of the plot when his cell phone suddenly rang.
I picked up the phone and saw that it was a call from Le.
Sun Quan was a little confused. Why was Le calling him now? It had only been a few days. Could it be that Le had already changed the plot of "God of War"?
He thinks this possibility is very small.
He didn't know that Le was getting advice from Nangong Yan, the female video guru, on revising the ideas for "God of War".
In Sun Quan's view, at Le's level, changing "God of War" into a novel with a single female protagonist is definitely not something that can be done in a few days.
Answer the call and put the phone to your ear.
Le's voice came from the phone: "Old classmate! Han Li just said she wanted to break up with me. Did you hear that? Oh!"
Sun Quan frowned slightly, a little surprised.
"No, what happened? Did you two quarrel?" Sun Quan asked.
Le: "Oh, that's right! She came to my place just now. I was wearing headphones and didn't hear her coming in. Then she saw the content of my chat with a female netizen online. Alas! As men, you should
It’s understandable that when chatting with female netizens on the Internet, it’s always easy to talk a lot, right? Han Li just saw the content of my chat with a female netizen who was talking too much, so she left angrily just now. Before leaving,
He said he broke up with me, alas! My head is getting big now..."
Sun Quan: "..."
Sun Quan didn't fully believe Le's explanation, but if the truth was what Le said, he could indeed understand that Sun Quan would occasionally talk and have fun when chatting with female netizens online.
"Do you want me to help you persuade Han Li? Or do you want my wife to help persuade her?"
Sun Quan asked after a moment of silence.
Le: "Well, if you can help me persuade her more, that would of course be the best. I'd like to thank you in advance, thank you! Really, if I reconcile with Han Li later, I'll treat you and my sister-in-law to dinner and drinks...
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"That's not necessary. Just eating and drinking is free!" Sun Quan just heard what Le said and interrupted with a smile and said no.
Le said on the phone: "You want what you want! I will definitely treat you when the time comes!"
Before Sun Quan could answer the question again, Le Hua changed his tone and said, "Oh, by the way, the plot of my "God of War" has been changed, and now it has a single heroine, old classmate! Can you do me a favor?
Let your studio staff review it as soon as possible, and then let's sign the contract as soon as possible! I want to get the copyright fee as soon as possible, and then buy a villa and propose to Han Li as soon as possible. Don't you know that before she just told me that we broke up, she also
She gave me a slap in the face, I guess if she doesn’t do something real this time, she might really break up with me, what about it? Can you help me with this?"
"Oh? Really? Changed it so quickly?"
Sun Quan was surprised again, quite surprised.
At the same time, I also mentally estimated that Han Li's breakup with Le this time was probably true, and how likely was it to be redeemed?
Also... Le is now anxious to get the 300,000 yuan in royalties. Does he really want to use it to buy a villa? And then propose to Han Li?
Or...he is just using this reason to take advantage of the fact that Han Li has just broken up with him. He is afraid that it will drag on for a long time, and if Han Li has not reconciled with him, I will not buy his adaptation of "God of Fighting" again.
Right, so you are anxious to get the copyright fee first?
Le: "Well, it has been changed. I have not changed the previous plot, but in the latest chapter, I asked the male protagonist to mentally give up his feelings for the other two female protagonists, so now it is a single female protagonist."