Chapter 602: Ren Lunxin, who has a good writing style
At dinner, Sun Quan met the boyfriend Dong Xiaoyu was talking about. The first time he saw this man, the word "complementary" flashed in Sun Quan's mind.
reason?
Because Dong Xiaoyu has a delicate face and a slim figure, while Ren Lunxin has a bun face and a chubby figure.
Standing next to Dong Xiaoyu, one is fat and the other is thin, the contrast is quite obvious.
Do fat people like thin people? Do thin people also like fat people?
Sun Quan didn't ask about this doubt. He must be polite.
What's more, although Ren Lunxin looks fat, he is not vulgar. He looks quite fashionable. He has a small braid on the back of his big head, a black jacket that is also quite fashionable, and a pair of black and red sports shoes on his feet.
Shoes, and on his left wrist, he wears a golden watch.
It seems that the family conditions are indeed very good, and he is worthy of being a resident of Qinglongwan Villa Park.
When they met, Dong Xiaoyu's cheeks were red and he was very embarrassed when he introduced them. However, Ren Lunxin was very generous and took the initiative to extend his hand to shake Sun Quan's hand enthusiastically. He said some kind words and even raised his hand.
Say hello to others.
It can be seen that this is not his first time at Xianyu Studio, and he is already familiar with other people in the studio.
As the host, Sun Quan also acted like a host, smiling the whole time and inviting the other party to have dinner with him.
Ren Lunxin did not refuse, and he was quite discerning. When everyone was bringing the dishes to the table, he also trotted to help with the bowls and chopsticks.
Because there were guests tonight, Sun Quan asked Xu Qin to get a bottle of wine. Ren Lunxin took the initiative to raise a glass to toast everyone, and thanked everyone for taking care of Dong Xiaoyu as a family member.
Sun Quan was a little curious about what he did, and felt that the scene was quite familiar.
Just asked: "What does Mr. Ren do? Can you tell me?"
"Xiao Ren! Just call me Xiao Ren!"
Ren Lunxin said with a smile on his face, "My family has a small company in the south. I have helped in the company for a few years, and I have been writing novels in the past two years. Haha, of course, I can't compare with you, the salted fish boss! Haha
.”
Sun Quan: "???"
"You also write novels?"
Sun Quan was surprised, really surprised. He looked at him and then turned to Fu Lei, because Fu Lei had never told him this before.
Logically speaking, Dong Xiaoyu’s boyfriend also writes novels, so Fu Lei should casually mention it to him, right?
but no!
Seeing Sun Quan looking at her, Fu Lei smiled and nodded, "Well, how is it? Do you think it's very friendly? I heard that he and Xiao Yu got together because of the common topic of writing novels, right? Xiao Yu?"
In the last sentence, she was asking about Dong Xiaoyu.
Dong Xiaoyu blushed and hummed.
Ren Lunxin also smiled and nodded, "Yes! In fact, I have known for a long time that your studio, Boss Xianyu, is in our community. I have always wanted to find an opportunity to come in and have a look. Unexpectedly, I met Xiao Yu first before I found another opportunity.
, I can only say it’s fate! Haha.”
Xu Qin interjected: "Hey! You didn't chase Xiao Yu just to sneak into our studio, did you?"
This is what I asked...
Everyone at the table wanted to laugh.
Some people looked at Ren Lunxin with suspicion.
In fact, Sun Quan had noticed a long time ago that several men in the studio were not very enthusiastic about Ren Lunxin. People like Hu Cong, Li Lixi, Tong Renhai, Fang Xingjun, etc. were all a little bit smiley.
Sun Quan thought about this and almost guessed what these people were thinking.
Probably because there were only a few young girls in the studio, there wasn't enough points for them. Unexpectedly, before they could catch one, Dong Xiaoyu was snatched away by a wolf outside.
Comparing one's feelings with others, if someone like him encountered this kind of thing, he would probably not feel very happy.
It is completely understandable that I feel unhappy and have some hostility towards Ren Lunxin.
"No! Of course not! This beauty, please don't harm me! Brother, if I have offended you somewhere before, please forgive me for being unintentional and let it go! Please let it go!"
Ren Lunxin seemed shocked and quickly begged Xu Qin with fists in his hands.
It made Xu Qin laugh out loud.
Dong Xiaoyu, who was sitting next to her, turned even redder.
Sun Quan also chuckled twice, and with a bit of curiosity, asked: "By the way, now that we are talking about this, tell us how you met! Can you tell me?"
As soon as he asked this question, Hu Cong, Li Lixi and others, including Fu Lei and Xu Qin, were all aroused with curiosity, and their eyes turned on the faces of Ren Lunxin and Dong Xiaoyu.
Ren Lunxin and Dong Xiaoyu looked at each other. Dong Xiaoyu, who was introverted, lowered his head slightly and did not dare to look into everyone's eyes.
Ren Lunxin was also a little embarrassed, scratched his head, and while getting up to pour wine for everyone, he said: "This... OK! Let me tell you! The thing is like this... I have just said that I have known for a long time that Xian
Boss Yu’s studio is in our community, and I have long wanted to sneak in and open my eyes, so I usually take a few glances here while walking in the community, intentionally or unintentionally. Because of this, I
Gradually I became familiar with everyone here.
As for how Xiaoyu and I met... Haha, it's actually simple. One day I drove down the mountain to buy something and saw Xiaoyu standing alone on the roadside. A taxi that seemed to have broken down parked not far from her.
The driver seemed to be repairing the car. I saw Xiaoyu standing there alone, probably waiting for the taxi to be repaired, so I parked the car next to her, introduced to her that I was from our community, and said I would give her a ride.
Procedure……"
"Then she got into your car like that?"
Li Lixi couldn't help but ask.
He glanced at Dong Xiaoyu with his head lowered with strange eyes.
Others, including Sun Quan, were also slightly surprised.
Is Dong Xiaoyu so courageous? She dares to get into the car of anyone who claims to live in Qinglong Bay Villa Park?
"No! I didn't get in his car that day."
Dong Xiaoyu seemed to feel everyone's strange looks and quickly raised his head to explain.
Ren Lunxin also nodded and said with a smile: "Yes! Xiaoyu looked at me with obvious distrust that day and didn't even get in my car. But when we met again in the community later, she seemed to recognize me.
Later, when we were walking in the community, we met several times by chance. After going back and forth, hehe, we gradually became familiar with each other..."
Having said this, Ren Lunxin did not say any more.
But everyone already understands how he and Dong Xiaoyu met.
Sun Quan noticed that Li Lixi and the other men looked at each other with somewhat depressed expressions.
Sun Quan felt a little want to laugh.
These guys have worked with Dong Xiaoyu for so long and dare not take action. Now they regret it when Dong Xiaoyu is taken away by others?
Should!
Sun Quan was funny in his heart and asked Ren Lunxin, "Since your family runs a company, why don't you continue to help in your company and write some novels? Isn't it bad to inherit the family business?"
Ren Lunxin shook his head and laughed, "My family is just a small company, and my parents are running it! When I was there, I just helped with sales work, which is not what I like to do, and I have liked watching it for a long time.
I started to write novels, and then I gradually heard that good novels could earn a lot of money, so I just went home and wrote them for fun. Anyway, in my company, if I am more than me, it would not be too much, and if I was less, it would not be too much, so it would be fine.
"
"So what exactly does your company do?"
Fang Xingjun asked curiously.
Ren Lunxin: "Produces woven bags."
This business was so unpopular that everyone was stunned on the spot, except Dong Xiaoyu, who should have known about it for a long time.
…
It was past eleven o'clock that night.
After Sun Quan finished coding today's manuscript, out of curiosity, he searched for Ren Lunxin's pen name on the starting point to see what novels this person had written and what his writing style was like.
Because when we had dinner together today, Ren Lunxin mentioned that he wanted to work at Xianyu Studio.
Sun Quan wasn't sure if he just wanted to come in and fall in love with Dong Xiaoyu, or if he really wanted to come in and do things, so he didn't agree at the time, but sent Ren Lunxin away with "We'll talk about work later."
Ren Lunxin's pen name was easy to remember. He said it once and Sun Quan remembered it.
——Jin Duoduo.
This pen name should be based on the character "Xin" in his name.
After a casual search on Qidian, Sun Quan discovered that there were three books under the pen name Jin Duoduo.
"Maoshan Taoist" has very few words, only more than 20,000 words. Judging from its last update time, it was also in December 2008. Sun Quan estimates that this is the first novel written by Ren Lunxin.
Because as far as he knows, many online writers' first books have very few words, and it is difficult to continue writing.
The second book has much more words, more than 200,000 words, and its title is "Superstar Jin Duoduo".
Sun Quan clicked on this book and looked at other data, such as total clicks, total recommendations, etc., and found that although the book had a lot more words, the total clicks and total recommendations were still not many.
The total number of clicks is a little over 10,000, and the total number of recommendations is only a measly 500.
Judging from the update time of the last chapter, this book should be the second one written by Ren Lunxin.
In comparison, the data of Ren Lunxin's third book is much better.
The title of the book is "The Rising Kung Fu Star".
The total number of clicks is over 1.82 million, and the total number of recommendations is over 130,000. Looking at the update time of the last chapter, it is today. Obviously it is still being serialized.
The current total word count of this book is more than 1.55 million.
There are more than 200 monthly votes this month. On the fan list, although there is no alliance leader, there is one leader, three elders, and several hall leaders and helmsmen.
Based on such data, Sun Quan looked at the number of words updated by Ren Lunxin every day based on his own experience, and estimated that he should be able to earn two to three thousand in royalties every month.
It may be because his family has money and no pressure in life. Anyway, Ren Lunxin’s daily updates are not large. Sometimes he updates one chapter a day, and sometimes he updates two chapters a day. Sun Quan glanced at his updates in the past month, and most of them were
I usually write one chapter per day, and the number of words in each chapter is pretty good, about 3,000 words.
Look at the review section of his book again.
Surprisingly, most of them have good reviews.
This surprised Sun Quan.
After thinking for a while, he clicked on the book and started reading from the first chapter.
After only watching for a while, Sun Quan stopped because of an accident.
I opened the drawer, took out a cigar and lit it. Ren Lunxin's writing style is actually very good, and the chapters are divided into chapters very well. The reading experience is good and very comfortable.
Based on his many years of experience in Qidian, Ren Lunxin’s writing style can be ranked in the middle or top of the entire Qidian.
It is very rare to have a writing style that is rated as average or above by someone like him.
Because in his opinion, the writing style of more than 80% of the starting points is unqualified. Is he too picky?
At first glance, yes, but he is not the only one who thinks so.
People who have been reading novels on Qidian for a long time should have the feeling that for every 100 new books published by Qidian, there are only a few that will eventually make money on the shelves, maybe three or five!
The other 90 or so books never made it to the shelves.
why?
Isn’t it because the data are bleak, readers don’t buy it, and the author can’t persevere!
And why don’t readers buy it?
Is it because I think the writing is not good enough and I can’t stand it?
There must be some good writing among them, but the number must be very few.
This is the basis for Sun Quan’s judgment that the writing style of more than 80% of the authors from the starting point is unqualified.
From the day it was born, online novels have been destined to be an industry that attracts readers based on their ability. In the early days when online novels were free, the number of readers was the best proof of whether a book was good or not.
Nowadays, online articles are no longer free. The amount of various data in the new book issue is the main basis for judging whether a book has potential.
Sun Quan's vision is indeed a bit picky. Among the many works that can be put on the shelves at Qidian, he also feels that the writing style is average.
Therefore, it is rare for him to consider his writing style to be above average.
Patiently, he read another dozen chapters of Ren Lunxin's book. After finishing more than a dozen chapters, he nodded slightly.
Are there any problems with Ren Lunxin’s writing style?
Of course!
No one dares to say that there is nothing wrong with his writing. In the online literary circle, he has never even seen an author who has no problems with his writing.
Who can write a novel with millions of words in it and eliminate every little problem in his book?
But overall, he feels that Ren Lunxin's writing style is very good and is more than enough for writing online articles.
It's just that the story is a little loose.
Such a loose writing style would not be a problem if it were placed in the middle and late stages of the book, and readers would be tolerant.
However, Ren Lunxin wrote relatively loosely in the first dozen chapters of this book, which is probably a major reason that restricted his book from achieving better results.
With such writing style, do you want to join my Xianyu Studio as a gunner?
Sun Quan thought for a while, and a smile appeared in his eyes.
He estimated that this Ren Lunxin was probably doing it to make it easier for him to fall in love with Dong Xiaoyu. He was so willful! However, he liked that this guy was so willful.
Such a gunman is rare to find!
Sun Quan casually put out the cigar in his hand in the ashtray, picked up his cell phone and sent a text message to Fu Lei - "Ren Lunxin's writing is good, please ask him to report to the studio tomorrow!"
After the message was sent, he got up and turned off the computer, preparing to go to the bedroom to rest. Before he left the study, he received a reply from Fu Lei.
"Are you serious? I feel like Li Lixi and the others are not very welcoming to him. Are you sure you want to recruit him?"
Sun Quan: "It's okay! Just let them compete and promote each other! Haha."