Yuan Shuiqing suddenly stood up, took the mineral water bottle in his hand, stood up and walked a few steps forward, standing in the wind, with his back to Sun Quan who was sitting on the bench.
As a result, Sun Quan couldn't see her expression.
You can actually smell the faint scent of perfume blown from her body by the sea breeze.
That was a smell he was familiar with.
For a moment, Sun Quan frowned and looked at her back, wondering whether he should go over and ask her? Or just sit here and wait for her decision...
Her back is very beautiful, she is taller than ordinary women, and she is slim and tall.
The sea breeze blew her hair lightly.
His hesitation did not last long, and he was not one to sit still and wait for death, so he stood up, threw away the cigarette butt in his hand, walked over hesitantly, walked to her side, stood side by side with her, and looked at the dark sea in the distance,
It seems that I am looking forward to the return of a ship.
In fact, they both knew they expected nothing.
If he had to say yes, it was the decision he expected from her, a good decision.
The couple just stood there for a long time. Finally, Yuan Shuiqing turned around, smiled faintly at Sun Quan, and said softly, "Go back! It's getting late."
???
A series of question marks popped up in Sun Quan's mind.
What does it mean?
What did she mean? Did she not forgive? Or had she already forgiven?
After frowning and staring into her eyes for a moment, Sun Quan asked, "Shui Qing, have you forgiven me?"
Yuan Shuiqing smiled slightly and asked, "Is your heart still with me?"
Sun Quan nodded quickly, "Of course! Of course! I can't wait to take out my heart and show it to you."
Yuan Shuiqing looked at him with a smile, raised her left hand and gently touched his cheek. Sun Quan thought she was going to say something, but unexpectedly she suddenly came over and kissed him on the mouth.
After the kiss, she pressed her forehead against his and said softly, "As long as your heart is still with me, that's enough. I'm glad you can confess to me, but come home with me tomorrow! You won't be allowed to do this in the future."
People come to the devil's capital, unless...unless we both come together."
Sun Quan "..."
At this moment, Sun Quan felt warm in his heart. He knew that he had done nothing wrong tonight, and he felt that the hearts of the couple were closer together again.
So, he opened his arms, hugged Yuan Shuiqing in his arms, lowered his head to kiss...
But to his surprise, Yuan Shuiqing put her hand in front of his mouth.
At the same time, I heard her chuckle, "You just smoked a cigarette, and I won't let you kiss her because of the smell of cigarette smoke."
Sun Quan "..."
Sun Quan, who was speechless and helpless, suddenly bit her on the shoulder. Yuan Shuiqing exclaimed and quickly reached out to push him. Sun Quan hugged her tightly and refused to let go.
"Let go! You are a dog...don't bite me, I will get rabies..."
On the beach at night, the sound of fighting can be heard far away.
…
Sun Quan had no objection to Yuan Shuiqing's decision to let him go home with her tomorrow, although if he stayed in the Magic City, it would be easier for him to communicate with Wang Zheng and others, and it would also be easier for him to control the quality of the second season of "The Last Wish of the Dead".
But since his wife has spoken, he will listen.
Compared with the quality of the second season of "Dead Man's Last Wish", for him, of course, the relationship with his wife is more important.
What's more, even if he returns to the city, Wang Zheng can send him the filmed scenes through the computer every day.
Has little effect.
…
A week after returning to the city, Xianyu Studio.
On the second floor, Sun Quan is typing in the office.
There was a knock on the office door suddenly.
"Please come in!"
Without raising his head, he shouted casually.
When the door opened, Sun Quan turned around and glanced. The person who entered was Dong Bao, a professional screenwriter that Fu Lei had recruited before.
There is only one word difference in the name of the villain Dong Tianbao in "Tai Chi Zhang Sanfeng".
Because of this, Fu Lei only told him this person's name once before, and Sun Quan remembered it.
The image of Dong Bao and Dong Tianbao are very different. Dong Bao is not tall and a bit fat. He is about 1.6 meters tall and weighs about 160 kilograms.
I also had a shaved egg hairstyle, or no hairstyle at all.
But he ingeniously grew a small tuft of beard on his lower jaw.
Wearing a pair of round-rimmed glasses, he had a smile on his face as soon as he entered the door.
Seeing him entering the door, Sun Quan continued to code and asked casually, "Teacher Dong, what's the matter?"
Sun Quan's tone was very casual.
Dong Bao quickly said, "Mr. Sun, please stop being rude to me. How dare I call you teacher in front of you? Just call me Xiao Dong or A Bao! Haha."
In fact, he is several years older than Sun Quan, already in his thirties.
Of course, for a man, being in his thirties is not considered too old. If calculated according to the standard of "a man with forty-one flowers", he is still a flower in his thirties!
Sun Quan chuckled. He happened to have finished writing a paragraph, so he stopped his hands and stretched out his hand to motion for him to sit down.
After Dong Bao sat down, Sun Quan glanced at the folder in his hand and asked with a smile, "What do you have in your hand? Are you going to show it to me?"
"Oh, yes! Mr. Sun, this is the first episode script that I tried to adapt based on your wishes. Haha, I would like to ask you to read it. If you think it works like this, then I will follow this style in the future.
Go ahead and write it. If you think it doesn’t work, just tell me and I will adjust it immediately until you are satisfied!”
In terms of attitude, Dong Bao's attitude is very good.
This is something that the screenwriter of "Dead Man's Last Wish" cannot compare to.
Fu Lei had previously tried to let the screenwriter of "The Last Wish of the Dead" work at Xianyu Studio, and help train a few newcomers to learn to write scripts.
But the screenwriter declined.
Although the tone was tactful, the attitude was one of rejection.
"Okay! Show me!"
Sun Quan stretched out his hand, and Dong Bao quickly handed the folder in his hand to Sun Quan's hand.
Opening the folder, Sun Quan could see that the script for this episode had probably just been printed out. The paper was very flat, with no trace of having been read, and there was even a little warmth left on the paper from the time it came out of the printer.
Just like a person who has just died, the body is not yet cold.
Uh, this metaphor seems inappropriate?
Well, don't worry about the details!
Drama title "This Daddy is Extraordinary"
Theme modern city
Original work "This Daddy is Extraordinary"
…
Sun Quan had just read a few lines when he suddenly remembered. He raised his head and said to Dong Bao, who was looking at him eagerly, "Well, I have tea on the table. You can pour yourself a cup and drink it. You're welcome!"
"Oh, oh, good! Good!"
Dong Bao responded repeatedly, subconsciously got up and went to get a teacup to pour tea. Sun Quan had a complete set of tea sets on the table. He had developed a habit of making a pot of tea before writing every day.
Dong Bao... this screenwriter, Sun Quan heard from Fu Lei before, was poached from a little-known small film and television company.
Unfortunately, not long after she hired Dong Bao here, the small film and television company closed down.
Therefore, maybe the reason why Dong Bao was recruited by her was because she knew in advance that the film and television company he worked for was going to close down.
From Sun Quan's perspective, Dong Bao's script was written in a very strict format, with no self-expression.
But the greatest advantage of this script may be its rigorous format.
The degree of restoration of his original work "This Dad Is Unusual" is extremely high.
It is adapted almost completely according to the plot trend of the original work.
At first, Sun Quan looked slowly and carefully.
But after reading it for a while, he realized that the plot trend in the script was completely based on the original work. He then read very quickly, reading ten lines at a glance, and he finished the entire script of this episode in a short time.
After scanning, Sun Quan closed the script in his hand and placed it on the table in front of him, frowning and thinking deeply.
Seeing that he had read the script of this episode so quickly and had this expression after reading it, Dong Bao, who was sitting aside, became a little nervous. He subconsciously put the teacup in his hand gently back on the table, and his posture became more straightened.
Sun Quan looked at the script that had just been placed on the table, then turned to look at Dong Bao.
I sighed secretly in my heart.
Sure enough...people with good attitudes generally have no abilities.
Those who are capable have a temper to some extent.
It seems that this is indeed true.
He liked Dong Bao's attitude, but Sun Quan really didn't see Dong Bao's talent in screenwriting.
If there is no self-expression at all, what kind of talent can be shown?
Speaking of self-expression, Sun Quan is actually afraid that the screenwriter will change his work beyond recognition.
But he doesn't need the kind of screenwriter who completely copies his original work.
An adaptation that completely copies the original work, for fans of the original work...what else is new?
Sun Quan decided to remind Dong Bao, or clarify his attitude.
He was a little suspicious that Dong Bao wanted to flatter him because he worked here, so he deliberately wrote the script according to his original work and suppressed his own performance.
"cough"
Sun Quan coughed lightly and said to Dong Bao, who was looking at him eagerly, "Well, that's it! I think the adaptation of online novels does not necessarily have to follow the plot sequence of the original work. For example, the opening of the first episode of the script can be tried.
If you change the angle of entry, other aspects can also be appropriately deleted to make the plot more compact. After all, there is a difference between online novels and TV dramas, what do you think?"
Sun Quan noticed that Dong Bao nodded once every time he said something. After he said this, Dong Bao nodded at least a dozen times, nodding, um, um, and responding accordingly.
He completely agreed with what he said.
The attitude could not be better.
This made Sun Quan secretly frown, but on the surface, he couldn't say anything. He couldn't scold Dong Bao because his attitude was too good, right?
There is no such thing as this in the world.
"Well, then you go back and change it again. Once you've made the change, bring it over to me for a look, okay?"
Sun Quan decided to look at the quality of his revised finished product.
"Okay, okay! Don't worry, Mr. Sun, I will change it right away until you are satisfied!"
Dong Bao quickly stood up and made a promise.
Sun Quan nodded slightly and handed the script on the table back to him. He watched Dong Bao go out as he nodded and bowed.
When he went out, Dong Bao consciously closed the door for him. Before closing the door, he did not forget to give Sun Quan a humble smile.
Little did he know that his smile fell in Sun Quan's eyes, making Sun Quan sigh inwardly.
Sun Quan could see that Dong Bao was not confident in his talent.
A truly confident person will not show such a humble smile.
…
Three days later.
Dong Bao knocked on Sun Quan's office door again and handed Sun Quan the revised and reprinted script.
He still has the same smiling face and humble attitude.
Sun Quan took the script he handed over and read it from beginning to end, feeling a sense of despair in his heart.
I want to ask if this script has been revised?
The answer is yes.
changed!
Moreover, the magnitude of the changes is not small.
But the direction of the change... left Sun Quan speechless.
The script this time did not follow the plot sequence of the original work. Dong Bao even used his own initiative to add some content at the beginning of the first episode.
In the revised script this time, the first person to appear is the daughter-in-law of the male protagonist Huang Shan...the daughter-in-law who is about to abandon her husband and son and run away.
The scene added by Dong Bao made Sun Quan smell the blood.
The script opens with a scene of Huangshan's daughter-in-law tossing and turning in bed all night long. At midnight, the woman who had been unable to sleep all night quietly got up and got out of bed, squatting next to her son's crib, looking at the moonlight shining in through the window with a look of dismay on her face.
Shirdi looked at the child in the crib.
Not only that, in this script, the woman shed tears silently, pattering down, and even made her mutter to herself. The words she murmured to herself were full of reluctance to let go of the child, and
Despair of the current life.
After reading the scenes that Dong Bao added to the "heroine" in the script, Sun Quan had a feeling that it was not her fault that this woman walked away with her money and abandoned her husband and son!
It’s even true!
It was this family that was wrong, it was her husband Huangshan.
Sun Quan seemed to be watching a bloody family ethics drama.
And this is where he feels despair.
He really wanted to ask Dong Bao - who is the protagonist of this drama?
Is it Huangshan?
Or this woman?
This woman was cleared up at the beginning. So when the audience watches this drama, how do they feel about the male protagonist Huang Shan who just appeared?
Deserve it?
Damn it?
The original work is a novel about a nanny! The woman is whitewashed at the beginning, so what’s the point of the male protagonist’s subsequent scenes?
Are the audience still interested in reading further?
What do you want me to do with the script written by my dad?
Do you have a brain?
Sun Quan really wanted to slap this script on Dong Bao's face and scold him.
But the despair in his heart made him give up this idea, and he was too lazy to lose his temper.
Just like when I was a student, there were always some hopeless students who were given up by their teachers. The teachers usually didn't even bother to teach them a few words.
In the final analysis, it’s all because it’s hopeless!
Holding back the anger in his heart, Sun Quan smiled. He could still laugh. He put the script on the table, turned to Dong Bao and said, "Mr. Dong, you go back to work first! I will review this script."
Take a look and I’ll give you my opinion when I’m done with it, okay?”
Dong Bao blinked, a little surprised, but his attitude was as good as ever. He quickly stood up and nodded, saying, "Okay, okay! Mr. Sun, you are busy. I will go down. I will wait for your opinion. Don't be in a hurry!"
Sun Quan smiled and nodded, "Well, you go downstairs first! Go ahead!"
After Dong Bao politely left and closed the office door, the smile on Sun Quan's face turned into helplessness. He sighed and looked at the script on the table speechlessly.