When Sun Quan returned home in the afternoon, he was a little dizzy because he drank a lot of wine at today's housewarming party, so he went to the bedroom to sleep after returning home.
When I woke up, it was already evening.
The sunset outside the window shone through the window and shone on his face. When he opened his eyes, he saw the orange sunset.
My head feels a little swollen and painful, but it's not serious.
Normally he has no interest in drinking, but on today's occasion, too many people toasted him, so he drank a lot without knowing it.
Lying on the big bed that smelled of milk, looking at the orange sunset outside the window, he felt relaxed both physically and mentally.
He likes to smell the smell of milk on the bed. He didn't seem to like it before, but since he had his daughter, he has never been disgusted by the smell of milk on his daughter. Gradually, he got used to it as he smelled it.
There were faint footsteps outside the bedroom, and the door was pushed open. Sun Quan didn't have to turn his head to look. Just by hearing the footsteps, he knew that his wife Yuan Shuiqing was here.
Sure enough, her voice came from the door, "Are you awake? It's time to have dinner."
Sun Quan turned around and saw her walking towards her with a smile. He blinked, stretched out a hand like a child, and said with a smile: "Pull me up."
"Ha... you!"
Yuan Shuiqing was a little funny, but she still reached out to pull him. As soon as she took hold of his hand, before she could exert any force, Sun Quan suddenly exerted his force and pulled her down. Yuan Shuiqing exclaimed and threw herself into his arms.
There was a feeling of warm and fragrant soft jade, but more of it was that she made my chest feel tight. After all, she was so tall. After getting married, she became plump and her weight was definitely heavier than that of ordinary girls.
But Sun Quan thought it was okay and he could bear it.
"What are you doing? It's time to go down and eat!"
Yuan Shuiqing glanced at him, complained, and stood up.
But she was destined to fail, because Sun Quan's hands had already wrapped around her waist.
and pouted at her.
The meaning is self-evident.
Yuan Shuiqing curled her lips in a funny way, and kissed him perfunctorily, "Okay? Get up quickly! The whole family is waiting for you to serve dinner!"
“Time is too short! Bad review!”
Sun Quan finished speaking dissatisfiedly and pouted again.
"You're almost done!" Yuan Shuiqing still wanted to get up.
But Sun Quan's hands were firmly around her waist. In this position, she couldn't use the strength to get up.
Finally, Yuan Shuiqing reached out and pinched his nose, lowered her head and kissed him. This time she was not in a hurry to separate, but not long after, the bridge was gone, but Sun Quan let go of her waist with both hands and pushed her hurriedly.
, wanted to push her away, but this time she held his head with one hand with a smile on her face, continued to pinch his nose with the other, and kept kissing him.
Sun Quan's eyes widened, and soon his face turned red. He thanked his parents for giving him a male body, and he was naturally stronger than a woman. No, after struggling hard, he finally pushed her away.
He smoothly slapped away the hand she was holding on his nose.
Panting heavily, he stared at her with evil eyes.
However, Yuan Shuiqing just chuckled and stood up without fear at all. After being married for so long, she had already figured out his temper. He may have many shortcomings, but he definitely did not beat his wife.
"Want to murder your husband?"
Sun Quan scolded her angrily, but Yuan Shuiqing chuckled, "You said the time was too short, so it was a bad review! Can I give a good review now? Haha."
Sun Quan glanced at her, got up and got out of bed depressedly.
On the surface, he seemed angry, but in fact, he was happy inside.
…
After dinner, Sun Quan and Yuan Shuiqing habitually pushed the stroller and took their three children for a walk in the community.
The native dog he bought before, the Black Warrior, followed them with its head and tail wagging. This dog was raised when Yuan Shuiqing was pregnant with his two sons. It was just a little one at the beginning, but now it is more than half a meter long.
, including the tail, it would be at least over one meter.
At first glance, it looks quite scary.
In fact, it is quite well-behaved, but in order not to scare other residents in the community, Sun Quan still tied a dog leash to it, and the chain was tied to his daughter's stroller.
"Does your head still hurt?"
Not long after coming out of home, Yuan Shuiqing whispered concerned about Mr. Sun.
Sun Quan shook his head, "Much better! Don't worry."
In fact, his head is still a bit swollen, which is one of the main reasons why he doesn't like to drink. Often after drinking a meal, he can't write a manuscript that day.
He had a hunch that he might not be able to find the code words tonight.
But I’m not panicking, I have a lot of manuscripts saved! If I only write for a day or two less, I won’t delay updates at all.
"Has the headhunting company given you the letter?"
Sun Quan suddenly thought of this question and asked casually.
Yuan Shuiqing shook his head, "Not so fast. The headhunters are still working hard to create opportunities to contact those three targets, those three targets... Haha, they are all talents who are not worried about finding a job. Even if they want to change jobs, they will definitely
I will be careful."
Sun Quan nodded slightly, feeling that it made sense.
He was not in a hurry, he just suddenly thought of this question, so he asked.
"Lorna is getting married, did you know?"
Yuan Shuiqing suddenly changed the topic here. Sun Quan was startled and turned to look at her. Yuan Shuiqing smiled slightly and nodded slightly.
This news was indeed a bit sudden for Sun Quan.
But thinking about it carefully, it didn't seem so sudden. He remembered that when his two sons held a full moon party in Shanghai, when Lorna came to congratulate her, she brought her new boyfriend with her.
What's that guy's last name? What's his full name?
Sun Quan couldn't remember it for a while.
"Really? How did you know? Did she tell you?"
Today, the company is relocating, and Luo Na specially came from Shanghai to attend. Sun Quan wonders if Luo Na revealed this to Yuan Shuiqing when she and Yuan Shuiqing were chatting at some time today.
Yuan Shuiqing hummed, "She invited us to attend her wedding today. Haha, will you go then?"
When asking this question, she quietly paid attention to Sun Quan's expression.
She had already known that Luo Na had liked Sun Quan. Although she also knew that Sun Quan and Luo Na had never dated each other, and there was no behavior that crossed the line. But when he suddenly heard the news that Luo Na was getting married, was he a little bit
regret?
Does Sun Quan feel any regret in his heart?
He didn't think so, he was more sighing.
When Lorna was in City M, her two boyfriends died unexpectedly. At that time, it really scared a lot of people, and they couldn't help but wonder if she was the legendary Ke Fu.
Later, when she went to the Magic City, he, Kuang Longfei and others were worried about whether she would still have the courage to date a new partner after experiencing the previous two tragic relationships.
Now that he heard that she was finally getting married, Sun Quan felt no regrets, only emotion.
Maybe a little relieved?
It seems there is!
He is not so selfish. He will not think that Lorna liked him before and hope that Lorna will never get married. His mentality is not so dark.
"Who is the groom? Is he the man that our Dabao and Xiaobao met at the full moon party?"
The gratified smile on Sun Quan's face fell into Yuan Shuiqing's eyes, and Yuan Shuiqing's smile also gained a hint of gratification.
Shaking his head slightly, "I don't know, I didn't ask. How about you call her now and ask her?"
Sun Quan thought for a moment and asked, "Did I tell you the time and place of the wedding?"
"Um."
Yuan Shuiqing nodded.
Sun Quan chuckled, "Then we won't beat her. When we go to their wedding, we will naturally know whether the groom is that person, what do you think?"
Although he couldn't remember the man's name, he still had some impression of the man's appearance. He believed that when Rona got married and saw the groom with his own eyes, he would be able to recognize whether the groom was attending the full moon party of his two sons.
guy.
"Okay, that's fine!"
Yuan Shuiqing had no objection.
…
At night, the moon has dimmed.
In the study on the second floor, Sun Quan made a pot of tea and turned on the computer. His head was still a little swollen. He didn't want to code in this state, but he was already used to going to bed late. He slept for several hours again this afternoon. At this time
I didn't feel sleepy at all, so I didn't go to the bedroom.
After turning on the computer, he logged into QQ to see if anyone had sent him a private message in the past two days.
Don’t tell me, there really is!
After briefly replying to a few questions from colleagues and book fans, Sun Quan looked at the last private message and did not rush to reply.
This private message was sent to him by Dayu, and it was sent at around four o'clock this afternoon.
——"I've made the outline of the script. Can I send it to you for review? If you think it works after reading it, I'll write it according to the outline. If it doesn't work, you can give me your comments and I'll revise it."
Under this private message, Dayu also sent him an offline file.
Sun Quan was not in a hurry to reply to his private message. He received the offline file first and then clicked to read it.
When he watched it, he was looking forward to it.
Dayu is indeed reliable in his work. Before writing the script, he actually made an outline. The screenwriter Dong Bao of his Xianyu Studio did not do this before. In contrast, he made a judgment.
Sun Quan was very satisfied after reading the beginning of the outline.
I feel that the beginning of this outline has more artistic conception and feeling than the beginning of his original work.
In the beginning, Dayu did not advance or postpone the time of the story, keeping it consistent with the original work. The story begins with the hero Huang Shan’s wife having taken away the money and running away, leaving the hero Huang Shan alone in the bedroom facing his sleeping partner.
Sweet baby, still a baby in swaddling clothes.
In this opening chapter, Dayu sketched out a picture in a few words. It was dark outside at night, the wind was howling, and the howling wind caused the windows to sway back and forth and make creaking sounds.
The male protagonist Huang Shan is sitting on the sofa by the window, his brows are condensed, and there seems to be an unbreakable melancholy between his brows. He holds a half-lit cigarette between his fingertips, and in the small cradle next to the big bed in the bedroom,
His infant son was sleeping soundly, with a happy smile even on his lips.
In the beginning of the outline written by Dayu, Sun Quan saw several sets of hidden contrasts.
For example: the dark night outside, the howling wind, and the lights and silence inside the house form a contrast.
For example: the depression on the face of the male protagonist Huang Shan and the smile on the lips of the infant son also form a set of contrasts.
Sun Quan remembered that in his original novel, he did not write about the howling wind outside, nor did he write about the smile on the face of the infant baby inside the house.
His writing style does not have so many skills. He focuses more on portraying the psychology and character of the male protagonist Huang Shan, while Dayu's writing skills are obviously much more mature than him.
Added some metaphors.
The strong wind howling outside the house indicates that the peaceful life of the male protagonist has ushered in the storm. The happy smile on the corner of the sleeping son's mouth and the depression on his own face, one symbolizes the beauty and hope of life, and the other symbolizes the male protagonist.
The protagonist's current predicament.
In addition, Sun Quan felt that there should be another metaphor: Can the male protagonist Huang Shan bear the burden of life, keep the smile on his son's face, and let his son have a happy childhood?
After just reading this beginning, Sun Quan felt that asking Dayu to help adapt the script was the right decision.
The plot outlined by Dayu is obviously more suitable for adaptation into a TV series.
As for "This Dad Is Unusual" written by Sun Quan, its writing style is not suitable for direct adaptation into a TV series.
…
When Sun Quan read the entire outline sent to him by Dayu, a satisfied smile already appeared on his lips.
Dayu's plot structure ability is indeed first-rate.
He didn't touch the big plot of the original work. It was more like he polished "This Dad Is Unusual", added some details, and transformed some of the psychological descriptions in the original work into the specific behaviors and lines of the characters, and... it's not awkward.
Sun Quan feels that it is rare to be "not embarrassed".
He had watched many TV dramas before and was often shocked by some of the lines in the dramas.
For example: "You only lost a leg, but she lost love!"
Lighting a cigar, Sun Quan sent Dayu a shaking window.
After a while, the bridge disappeared.
I saw Dayu's reply: "You are finally online, how is it? I sent you the outline, have you read it?"
Sun Quan replied: "I just finished watching it."
Immediately, he sent another thumbs up emoticon.
Sun Quan really liked the outline written by Dayu.
Dayu replied with a smiley face, and then replied: "Have you finished reading it all?"
Sun Quan: "Well, I've finished reading it all."
Dayu: "Don't you have any opinions? If you have any, just say it! Don't wait for me to finish writing the script before you tell me your opinions. It's just an outline now. If you have any opinions, just say it so I can revise it."
Sun Quan certainly had some opinions.
Although Sun Quan thought Dayu's outline was very good, it only meant the overall feeling it gave him.
As for the details, he definitely has some opinions.
They are all storytellers and they are good at finding faults.
For more than two hours, Sun Quan exchanged some details of the outline with Dayu on QQ and discussed with each other, especially the second half of the outline.
Because "This Daddy Is Unusual" is still being serialized, although Sun Quan has many manuscripts, the entire story has not been written out, and the outline given to Dayu is only an outline after all.
Therefore, some parts of the outline that Dayu wrote based on the outline at the back of his book must be different from Sun Quan's ideas.
Dayu was very patient, and the two of them communicated very selflessly. When they finished talking, they realized that more than two hours had passed.