Chapter 19 Is persistence the most important thing?
Under Ringer's explicit instructions, Oveira finally understood what he meant, and immediately blushed, feeling ashamed, angry and embarrassed: "You, you, you, how can you say that! What I write is not prose. This is not the case.
There is no doubt that it is a novel! Haven’t you noticed my characterization and plot design? In the narrative structure of the entire novel, I refer to the "replacing description with narrative" proposed by Master Michel in "Literary Criticism"
"You, you don't understand the basic principles of the law, so stop talking nonsense!"
She said angrily, implicitly accusing Ringer of not being a member of the literary world and not even understanding modern literary theory, so why should he speak so loudly about my works?
In this regard, Ringer's reaction was very calm.
"It's true that I don't understand the literary theories you mentioned, but as a reader, I think I have the ability to judge whether a work is good or bad. Your article -" He paused, and then chose a middle sentence.
Sexual nouns: "The article is a good prose, but it is not a qualified novel."
Olvera's expression is still very unconvinced, but it doesn't matter, Lin Ge will explain the reason to her.
"First of all, your vocabulary is indeed gorgeous and your descriptions are indeed beautiful, but they are empty. You just piled those nouns together and let them form the castle in your imagination, but you did not consider the existence at the bottom of the lake.
Or a castle appearing on the clouds is a very strange thing to begin with; secondly, you said that your plot design refers to the master's theory, but I only see the looseness of its structure. The novel is a literary genre with very strict narrative logic.
, and when you were describing the afternoon tea party with your teacher, you suddenly inserted a paragraph of at least 3,000 words describing how you searched for a black and white cat in the palace. It obviously violated its logic, at least.
I don’t see any need for this plot to exist in the entire article, or did this memory suddenly come to mind when you wrote this, so you wrote it down? Then this is undoubtedly its loose structure.
Proof."
"Finally, it's your characterization - for the time being, this is the only part of this article that can match the novel. You have done a good job in portraying the protagonist, that is, yourself, as well as the protagonist's parents, teachers, etc., at least it can
When people read it, they can describe the corresponding image. Perhaps this is because you decided to write this novel just for them? But there are still many subtle flaws, such as personal pronouns.
Only one personal pronoun is used in a paragraph of more than 800 words, which is she. This often makes readers have to stop reading and think, who does 'she' here refer to, and who does 'she' refer to there? In fact,
Can't say it's a good reading experience."
Ringer was like a teacher reviewing a student's work. Regardless of the increasingly ugly look on the princess's face, he gave his own evaluation in a calm tone: "To sum up, if this article is from St. Lowood National School
If it is a work by a fifth-grade primary school student in Green George International School, I will give it full marks; if it is a work by a middle school student at Green George International School, I can only give it a passing grade; and if it is written by a college student in the literature department of Linville University, then I will give it a passing grade.
I can only suggest that he go back and relearn the most basic knowledge of literature and grammar."
Does this mean that I am only at the level of a middle school student?
Olvera's face had become gloomier than the rainy season that had just passed on the Sicilia Peninsula. She slowly raised her hand and pointed to the door. Linger had no doubt that her next words were to let herself out.
Maybe he would also add some modifying adverbs, such as "immediately", "immediately", "hurry up" and so on. In fact, it was not that he had not expected this result, nor was it unacceptable, it was just that it suddenly felt strange. p>
It seems that I am here to comfort Olvera, right? But now it seems that her originally good mood seems to have become very bad.
Perhaps, as Saint Xalia said, he is a person who only makes girls angry?
However, even if you want to be unconscionable and use all kinds of flattering words to praise this novel that is not like a novel at all, or even tout her work as a treasure in the history of literature... it is absolutely impossible to do it. What's more,
Will this kind of meaningless praise be of any help to Olvera's future creative career? On the contrary, it will only lead her astray.
Therefore, I am just telling the truth, but unfortunately, if I want to rank all the things that make people angry in the world, then the first place is undoubtedly "telling the truth". This is in line with the social atmosphere
It has nothing to do with, it has to do with the nature of living beings.
Lin Ge was thinking endlessly while waiting for Oveira to give the eviction order. But he waited for a long time and could not wait until the princess squeezed out the words "Get out" from between her teeth. Instead, she originally stretched out her hand to point to the door.
Slowly letting go, it seemed that I finally broke free from the shame and anger of being criticized harshly, and gradually regained my composure.
The princess held her stack of manuscripts in both hands, lowered her head, and asked feebly: "Then what do you think we should do?"
"Huh?"
"I ask you, what do you think we should do?"
"You mean you want to listen to my advice?"
"That's right." Olvera raised her head and glared at him fiercely: "Or do you think I'm the kind of person who gets angry and gets into trouble when someone criticizes me a few words, and I have to be coaxed by others to be happy?
Little girl?"
"..."
Ringer didn't answer, thinking that I almost thought so. Your humble attitude of asking for advice surprised me.
However, the princess of Beimang came from an honorable background and received strict education from the royal family since she was a child. In addition, she had a pair of very good parents and a very good teacher, who taught her how to be a well-behaved and sensible child, so she never
You can tell what is good and what is bad at a very young age. Although the guards in the castle say they are doing it for their own good, their actions are exactly the opposite, so they are bad; and the young man in front of me
Well, although he speaks harshly, shows no mercy, and doesn't take care of girls' self-esteem at all, he does read his works carefully and gives sincere comments, so he is good. p>
The princess of Beimang knows very well who cares about her.
She whispered: "You said that my writing was not good, and you said it with reason. How can I refute you? However, since you can point out my shortcomings, you must also be able to tell me how to make up for it, right?"
?Don’t say you don’t know? Hum hum.”
Olvera glanced at Linger with evil intentions, as if to say: If you don't know, don't blame me for...well, I haven't thought about what to do to you yet, in short, don't even think about leaving this room.
!
Ringer was a little helpless: "I have just said that I know nothing about those profound literary theories. The evaluation just now is just my own opinion from the perspective of a pure reader. So, there is nothing
I can give you some advice..."
"Then you can give me suggestions from the perspective of a pure reader!" Olvera's tone seemed to be natural: "Isn't this the same? Don't worry, I will accept it with an open mind! Because since I was a child, my father has been
, my mother and teachers have told me more than once that I should be good at listening to other people's opinions, and that's what I do now. How about it, am I great?"
She held the manuscript, raised her head and held her chest high, proud and proud, with an attitude of "I'm very talkative and you have to thank me."
She didn't even listen to what kind of advice she was given, and started asking for credit. The triumphant expression on the princess's face once caused Ringer to have a hallucination, as if he saw the figure of a golden-haired maid again, but after rubbing his eyes, he found that
It was just an illusion, so I breathed a sigh of relief.
"Okay." He said to Olvera: "Since you insist on giving me advice, then I do have a suggestion, which is very suitable for you who are embarking on the road of creation for the first time and dream of becoming a great writer.
Beginner. Moreover, it is also very simple, I believe you can do it."
After hearing this, Olivia's eyes suddenly lit up: "What's your suggestion? Say it quickly."
"Persistence."
"Ah?"
"It's a very simple suggestion, but it's also the most useful one." Ringer repeated word for word: "That's persistence."