Last night, I read the comments given to me by some book friends. I looked carefully at the chapter about entering the ice and fire polar eyes. It is true that in chapter seventy-three, the protagonist suffered a serious mental decline. I made some changes. I hope everyone will read it.
Let's see if the protagonist's intelligence has been improved after the modification. I hope you can comment more.
Then today I may update at once or not at all, because of the four chapters in the past two days, I have to think about how to change them for the better. As many book friends said, my operation went too far to suppress the protagonist. At that time, I really didn’t
Thinking of this, I just feel that this place is a major crisis moment in the early stage of Oscar, and it must be severely beaten. Only in this way can the ideal ambition of Oscar in the early stage become more practical and step-by-step.
However, regarding some of the book friends’ thoughts on mirror-shadow intestines, I am actually not particularly interested in mirror-image intestines.
The first year limit is too low, only 20,000 years. This makes it a bit tasteless for a protagonist whose fourth spirit ring costs tens of thousands. It is tasteless and a pity to abandon. My original idea was that by the finals, the Oscar would reach five
Level ten, but instead of hunting for the fifth spirit ring, the focus of the spirit fighting competition has always been on Tang San.
The second effect is not worth it. You can think about it. A sausage that only lasts for three minutes requires one-third of the soul power. Oh my god, it would be better if you prepared it in advance. It would be better if you prepare it on site.
, I really can’t bear it. If you don’t defeat the opponent in three minutes, Oscar will feel very uncomfortable.
Thirdly, my fourth soul ring is a sausage that I want to replace the mirror sausage. The effect will be similar to the skill of lol Silas' ultimate move, which will make Oscar's changes even weirder. (Of course I will increase the amount he pays.
cost to achieve balance)
If you don't suggest me to increase the value of this 20,000-year-old soul ring, I might consider adding it.
Hey! In fact, the most uncomfortable thing is my saved manuscripts. I guess they are all scrapped. It is better for newbies not to keep too many saved manuscripts. Their ability to control articles may not be enough. Of course, I hope everyone will treat me well when reading articles in the future.
Be more tolerant. If you really can't stand the poison and die, you can just leave me a last word about the poison (talk more about poison and less about fragrance).
Of course, I don’t like to be influenced by readers when I write novels. I will read and think about the suggestions you give me. If there are indeed problems, I will tell them directly and then modify them. But if I think the problems are not serious, I will not change them. Furthermore, follow-up
Some people feel that I am skipping the chapters of emotional scenes that are awkward. I don’t want to give up writing emotional scenes just because they are awkward. I have already traveled through Douluo. I also write a single female protagonist, but I always feel uncomfortable. Especially especially
I am really annoyed by the role of Bibi Dong, and I think about it physically, but if I really dare to accept it, I am afraid that I will die from poison and be entangled.
As for those who say that I would rather open a harem and return the original character, I just want to say that he is a scumbag and I am a scumbag. They are both toads who want to eat swan meat. Why should I let it go? Is it because a certain toad is uglier?