To be honest, I don’t know how I arranged this relationship line. Anyway, I feel very good about myself and I think I wrote it very well, because I have written a lot of scenes with Xiangling Hutao before. I have finished writing this. Can't stand it any longer.
Therefore, even if the writing is really not good, you still have to say "good" to me!
I am an author, and I want to arrange what I think is the most perfect emotional line for the protagonist in my novel!
But this is my first time writing a book, so the emotional line may be a little dull, but I really tried my best to describe what I think is sweet. (The loser author sheds tears QAQ)
Of course, there will definitely be some readers who are dissatisfied with too many female protagonists. This is normal. After all, the pure love party and the harem party are the same as sweet and salty tofu and salty and sweet rice dumplings. They are almost irreconcilable partisanship, so everyone who loves the pure love party Squirt if you want, I'll bear with you.
In fact, at the beginning, I really didn't think about whether to arrange a female protagonist. The initial description of the interaction between Xiangling Hutao and the protagonist was just to facilitate my own plot. After all, there must be an entry point into the plot.
At that time, I even thought about writing it as a pure friendship.
After all, it was my first time to write a book. I couldn’t control some of the plots. I just followed my own thoughts and slowly wrote it, and it ended up like this before I knew it. If I say now that their friendship is pure, I’d be really sorry. The characters in my own writing.
So I ask all readers to bear with me, and I will try my best to present my fantasy world to you.
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Then here are some explanations of some of the questions I saw in the comment area.
I saw some people saying that Inazuma looked aggrieved. If this is really the case, I would like to apologize to everyone. In fact, I just described the reaction that the protagonist should have in my eyes.
After all, the protagonist is away from home alone, and he is still the heir to the supreme leader of Liyue, which must represent the face of his country.
Some people say that they dare not resist even after being cheated by Yae Shenzi, but I think there is nothing wrong with what I wrote. People have to bow their heads under the roof, and they should accept their coercion. Why do they have to pretend to be cool all the way and get slapped in the face? Everyone wants to Fight it.
Moreover, Yaegamiko's own character is just to tease people, and he is not an evil villain. Most of them are just words. Think about it, a senior official of the same level as you in the next country greeted you and asked you to If you take care of a junior, how can you let this junior have trouble on your own territory? The most you can do is scare him.
To sum up, my book is not a brainless Long Aotian cool novel, it is a fanfic of two of my favorite games, so there will definitely be some tolerance or cowardice in some places, although it will be a little less aggrieved. It's cool, but that's also normal human behavior.
Then there are people who say that my book has always followed the main plot, and it feels like I am not the same as me. I strongly agree with this. I am not strong enough in writing and have no ability to be original. I can only get some ideas by following the plot.
The most important thing is that following the main plot allows me to include some personal things, such as beating up the lady and killing the Winter Archaeologist. I don’t know how others will see it, but I am indeed very relieved. After all, it was the first time I wrote it. This book was written for myself because I couldn't find any other interesting fans. I've wanted to arrange it for them for a long time!
So I will continue to follow the original plot in the future. Although it is a little bit watered down, I will try my best to write some of my original plots. After all, people are always making progress. Maybe I can write something very amazing in the future.
It's an original plot, right?
There are also some people who say that I like to hide things and don’t say anything when I draw them. Then there is nothing I can do about it. I like to dig holes. You can’t hit me~ I can’t~~
I also asked why I didn’t arrange more for the protagonist to earn crystals. This is a good explanation. I don’t want to open too many cheats for the protagonist, otherwise the combat effectiveness will easily collapse. After all, the combat effectiveness gap between Beng 3 and Genshin Impact is a bit big.
To be fair, I think the powerful sword that the God of Thunder slashed out the Wuxiang Blade Gorge didn't even have the first rated power of the Seven Thunders of Purification, let alone the Heavenly Fire Holy Judgment's earth-centred sword and the Simulation of the Star of Eden.
Black holes or something like that, it would be too much to write an invincible article.
Then there is the point where the protagonist is clearly a time traveler but knows nothing like the natives. Here I solemnly declare, please don’t read The Crimson King. I wrote that when the protagonist traveled through time, the plot only reached the rice wife level, so I only read it sporadically.
There have been some famous scenes, so don’t say that the protagonist looks like a native or something. After the beginning of Rice Wife, he is just a native and doesn’t know anything.
Then about some bugs, I wrote before that Liuyun Jiefeng Zhenjun gave the protagonist a small prop in advance, and the protagonist used the arm of the skirmisher in exchange for two storage pendants. I'm sorry, I really forgot about these two things.
I will fill in the two small holes here. You can think that when the protagonist died, these things were destroyed along with the original pendant...
There is also a place where I teach Noelle the Cunxin Quan technique. I did write it before and cannot repost it, and later I wrote about teaching it to Noelle. I would like to thank the readers in the comment area for helping me fill in the gaps. I will shamelessly use your help.
I explained it in a filling-in-the-blank way, assuming that after the protagonist has become proficient, I can teach him a little bit, and I bow to everyone!
There is also the issue of the protagonist's strength. I have already patched this and corrected the system. The direct effect of the super variable factor has been weakened a lot, and I have focused on the growth plug-in of being resurrected and becoming stronger.
There are only so many questions that I still remember. I will check the comment area later and if I think of any new questions, I will post my thoughts and explain them~
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Next are some follow-up plot arrangements. There are not many plots that can be written now. I can also add some event plots and daily routines. The next step is to go to Xumi. The mysterious high-level golden props will be used in Xumi.
, I can tell you clearly that I plan to use it to arrange skirmishers. You can guess what it is, and there will be no prizes for guessing correctly~
And regarding the plot of the experiment on the Qiuqiu people, I'm very sorry to everyone. I have little talent and knowledge, and I will soon be unable to grasp it, so I plan to temporarily stop the plot of the experiment to save myself the chance to find something to fill in if I haven't finished it.
Bury yourself in the deep pit that you can't climb.
Then I would like to say hello to everyone in advance. If Mi Huyou doesn’t update the new map after I finish writing all the plots of Xumi, then I may have to temporarily stop updating, or write some side stories.
Or try to open a new book, so be mentally prepared.
Of course, it will definitely not be a eunuch, unless Mi deceives the eunuch.
But if Mi Huyou is really a eunuch, then it will be easy for me. Then I can let myself go, and the subsequent plot will not be left to my imagination!
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That's probably all I can think of. Here I would like to thank the readers who have always been willing to read my book and thank you all for your support.
I'm a bit of a salty person, so I'm not interested in asking for monthly recommendations. I just hope that everyone can leave a comment with their own thoughts, letting me know that some people are still reading my book and that some people are willing to read it.
For me, comments are what keeps me going.
Again, we’re not asking for monthly recommendations, just comments!