After five hundred years, Lao Lu has finally concluded the long second volume. First of all, I would like to apologize to everyone for not giving everyone a pleasant update experience.
Feel sorry.
In this volume, Aoi Keisuke and Hoshino embark on a journey to Yuzawa, get closer to each other, witness Toyatsu God and Osawa Mountain, and further reveal the mysterious side of the world view. It can be said to be an emotional line and a plot advancement.
roll.
As the main character of this volume, Hoshino Fujiko's main goal is to fill in her family information, growth environment, perfect part of her character, plant the seeds of her gradual growth and transformation, and make her image more vivid and full.
From the beginning, I was not prepared for her and Keisuke Aoi's relationship to directly enter the next stage.
Hoshino is emotionally traumatized. She is sensitive, lonely, and resistant to contact. In comparison, the so-called "tsundere" is ranked lower.
Their relationship should be slower, more subtle, and more tacit.
(And if there are many female protagonists, the progress needs to be controlled, otherwise it is easy for one family to become the dominant one)
So overall, I am satisfied with the progress of the relationship between the two people in this volume.
By the way, it was Shiraishi who was chatting next to the tent with Aoi Keisuke at the end. After the chat, it was natural for them to sleep together.
Of course, I didn't choose to do this in the end.
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After summarizing this volume, let’s talk about some questions that everyone has received feedback from.
Maybe it's because I personally like the characters a lot, and I neglected that some book friends didn't like a certain heroine that much, which affected everyone's perception of the book.
Of course, the final analysis is that my skill in shaping the character is not perfect yet, and I failed to show the charm that the character should have.
I will seriously reflect on it and strive to make improvements in the next volume.
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Finally, let’s talk a little bit.
I, Lao Lu, should be a disgraced person with hundreds of orders, I am very naive, but there is nothing I can do about it.
Ultimately, it’s because I can’t write fast enough or well enough.
But I'm more worried that writing a book will become a painful thing.
Especially after a busy day at work, it is really a torture for me to have to continue typing.
It’s not that I’m tired of writing novels, but that my whole person feels like it’s been flattened, my head is filled with a bunch of things, my energy is exhausted, and when I put my hands on the keyboard, I feel numb and seem to have lost the ability to think.
What comes out has absolutely no publishing value.
I thought about resigning several times, but in reality I didn’t have the capital to indulge.
(Of course, this is not to shirk oneself, but to have a reason)
I just sincerely thank you all for being willing to forgive me for being like this, and for continuing to support me who is shameless.
grateful.
grateful.
Going back to the novel itself, the main character of the next volume has been determined to be "Kobayashi Rena". To be honest, I was worried that the main plot was not "mainstream" enough, but because it suited Reina too well, I did not change the outline in the end.