The fourth summary and asking for leave and asking for a monthly pass
In this summary, I wanted to praise myself at the beginning. Since everyone didn’t see it, I can only point it out myself and praise myself. Starting from the third part, I have been trying a new technique to write about the inner feelings of the characters.
The new technique is to not do inner monologues or direct emotional elaborations most of the time, but to express the inner feelings through pure movements, expressions, language, environment and atmosphere rendering, so that the characters' emotions can be expressed.
The psychological drama is left blank to make it appear more tense.
You can read the last chapter of the third part, the description of Lou Cheng when he left school. I didn’t write about what he recalled at all. How sad, emotional and lamentable. There is not a single word like this in the whole article. I just wrote it.
What he saw, his actions, but just like that, the deep and implicit emotions naturally accumulated until the four words "Goodbye Songcheng" burst out at once.
I am not from a major, so I am semi-literate when it comes to writing. I can only rely on reading some books and figuring it out on my own. Anyway, I may have used this technique before, but I don’t have such a clear understanding. I think it is most suitable for people who are deep, restrained, and sentimental.
The psychological drama does not have a monologue until the final explosion, which will appear very powerful, because the joy is explosive and the depression is continuous.
Therefore, during the period when Lou Cheng was at his lowest point, before the chapter "For Me", I only wrote a few sentences about his and Keke's psychological activities from beginning to end, all of which were promoted and rendered with actions, language, expressions, etc.
, the most satisfying scene is probably the scene of Lou Cheng leaning back and closing his eyes after posting on Weibo. There is no need for other descriptions of any mental activities, all the emotions are vividly written on the page.
However, due to the lack of direct psychological drama, this writing method will appear abrupt, discontinuous, and not smooth enough when changing scenes, so that there is no feeling of transition and foreshadowing in the middle.
I haven't thought of how to solve this problem in the future, so I can only continue to think about it (scratching my head).
Well, coming back to the fourth part, it is an important process for Lou Cheng’s psychological transformation into a master. It is also my preset turning point for the entire book. It is the second part that connects the past and the future. It is not long, but important enough.
For this plot, I was prepared to drop the subscription for 24 hours. Fortunately, everyone still believed in me. Maybe they were numb to my willfulness. Most of the time, there was no decline.
That small part of the time, it is rising, rising...
In addition, this section is also an in-depth exploration and enrichment of the characters of Cheng Zi and Ke Ke. Their thoughts, their three views, and their personalities should be more three-dimensional than the previous three parts. I feel that the writing is good.
To be honest, before I started the book, I was thinking that if my martial arts results were not good, then it would be over here. Although Lou Cheng had not become a grandmaster yet, he was mentally and mentally prepared, and it would be over.
good.
But, sometimes I have a reputation for being upright, so I think so, but when I create characters, more than 60% of the characters are strong Wai Gang, top professional Wai Gang.
A strong person, so I think I should keep writing regardless of whether my grades are good or not. Of course, my grades are good now and I am very satisfied.
As usual, I will take a day off on August 1st. This period of writing is very stressful and tiring. I have to sort out the third and final part of martial arts in the future. Let’s see you at 12:30 on August 2nd for the fifth part.
"The original dream will definitely come true"!
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