After finishing each book, I always felt empty inside. After finishing Immortal Mortal, I still didn't want to move, I was still at a loss, or I didn't know what to do.
Many readers have pointed out the shortcomings of Immortal Mortal. Some of them I think are right, and some I think are different from mine. If you say that the ending of Immortal Mortal is not good, I agree. If you say that the ending is bad, I really disagree.
I am quite satisfied with the ending where the calamity brings about the nirvana of the universe. Because here there are all kinds of human nature revealed, and the fragility of human nature in the face of life and death.
Everyone, even a monk, has a mortal desire hidden deep in his heart, and this desire is also a manifestation of human nature.
Some friends said that some of the subsequent life or arrangements between Mo Wuji and the heroine should be explained.
I think this is really unnecessary. If I really write like this, it will be a failure. In fact, it doesn’t take many words to write like this, at most a thousand words. Just write that the mortal universe has taken shape, and Mo Wuji takes his family with him.
Traveling in the mortal universe, happily appreciating the vast scenery of this newly created universe, I feel infinite satisfaction and happiness in my heart.
[To be honest, I have been using Yeguo to read and catch up on books recently. I can switch sources and read aloud with many sounds. www. Android and Apple are available.]
But is this really good? At least I don’t think it’s good.
I think it is not a good ending if there are no unfulfilled expectations after the end of a book. Only the kind of ending that makes readers look forward to it, reflect on it and even feel a little dissatisfied has some charm. Of course, I can’t say that this kind of ending is the best, but it’s just that
There are thousands of endings, and everyone sees them differently.
There are also some readers who think that the reason why the ending is not good is because there are still some holes that have not been filled, such as the black dragon, such as the Seven Realms Stone... In fact, they all ignored that I still dug a hole in the last chapter (not Hou Yu Chenghe Demon Road
Then). As for what this pit is, I won’t mention it. If any readers see it, please reply to me below.
The reason why I do this is probably inseparable from my bad habits. I always hope that after I finish a book, if I write it again in the future, there will be somewhere to start, such as a side story or a sequel.
.Leave a few insignificant pitfalls. If you are writing a side story, you can just pick them up. Leave a hole in the last chapter and write a sequel. You can continue it when writing a side story.
No matter which idea you have, there is no problem with the ending of Immortal Mortal.
In the last chapter, I originally wanted to write that Dahuang also merged with a Dao Principle and turned into the Lingyuan Dao Principle. Later, I restrained myself from writing it like this, trying to reduce some sadness.
Regarding the story of Hou Yucheng, the outline has been changed. The original outline said that Hou Yucheng practiced the magic way, but his character was incompatible with the magic way. In the world of immortals and gods, the magic way is shameless, and it is risky to associate with the magic way.
The world was in disarray. Mo Wuji acted based on his heart, but ignored this rule and became friends with Hou Yucheng. As a result, Mo Wuji became a bad guy (please allow me to use such simple words to describe it).
The reason why the outline was changed later was that it did not fit Mo Wuji's view of the mortal world. Secondly, this kind of plot was quite cliche and not interesting to write. Later, when conceiving the ending, Hou Yucheng explained the formation of the universe in the mortal world.
Transformed into the principles of magic.
There is also a fifth outline. In fact, this is not the outline of Immortal Mortal, but the outline of The Strongest Abandoned Young Master. It is only because the Strongest Abandoned Young Master did not write it out that it has been delayed again and again. Is Immortal Mortal the ending?
It really has nothing to do with this part of the outline.
Of course, I can also continue to write this part of the outline after Immortal Mortal, and I also have a way to continue it. I have already mentioned the reason for not continuing it, so I won’t say more here.
What touches me most about Immortal Mortal is the support and encouragement given to me by many readers and friends in the last two months.
Many books are sold out on the first day they are opened, but Lao Wu will say in the future that my book will be sold out all of a sudden the day it ends. There are so many books opened that are sold out, have you ever seen a book sold out on the day it is finished?
?This is a surprise and a touch.
The book is over, please allow me to send my most sincere thanks.
Thank you to every reader who likes my books, to every friend who subscribes to my books and votes for me, to every friend who supports Lao Wu, and to every friend who follows my public WeChat account!
Thank you, we have spent every inch of reading time together!
I don’t know when the new book will be released. I am a mortal, so why not enjoy the tranquility of this moment.
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Finally, if something happens, I will announce it as soon as possible on the public WeChat ID. My public WeChat ID is eslw26, or search the official account "Goose is Lao Wu".