Open a single chapter and talk about the problems pointed out in it.
1. The problem of gods.
Some people say that what I write is not about gods. Well, in a sense, it is indeed not about gods. After all, Xiaobai’s thinking is still human thinking. I don’t want to write the kind of novel where my body changes and my thinking changes accordingly. So what else should I write?
For time travel, it would be better to just write a fairy tale, since there would be nothing to worry about.
Strictly speaking, this is a god. It depends on how to answer the gods. For example, the gods in Nordic mythology. Everyone should have seen the gods in Avengers: Endgame, including Thor and Loki. Do they look like gods?
?What about majesty? Especially when Loki was thrown around by the Hulk, is it possible? A mortal threw a god?
But in Norse mythology, Thor and Loki are serious gods, and they were once the main beliefs of the Vikings.
In fact, no one has seen the gods, and they don’t know what the gods think. So is only majesty the god?
I feel that this is a misunderstanding. Rather than calling it majesty, it is better to call it contempt. I feel that the biological level of human beings is not high enough, so I just disdain it.
Then it makes sense to think about it the other way around. Am I writing about a serious god?
No, he is an otaku, a time traveler, with human thinking, and comes from a world where everyone is equal. Therefore, why do you look down on human beings? How do you think you are superior? This is why I don't write about the "majesty" of the protagonist.
2. The growth of the protagonist
Some people say that half a year or a year has passed in the book, and the protagonist is still so childish...
I feel there is nothing wrong with being childish and I can live a happy life. Do I have to write a protagonist who looks sad every day and is as tired as a dead dog?
I don’t like cold protagonists. I like a guy like Luffy, or a guy like a guy with a flat head. It’s my fault that I didn’t write that feeling. I admit that I have many shortcomings, but I’m trying my best.
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Since junior high school, I have seen a lot of darkness, which makes me tired. Why can't there be more sunshine?
Life is already very dark. Do I want another iceberg-cold, dead-faced protagonist in the novel?
Sorry, I can't do it. I want to spread laughter and love even more.
If you are more naive, the novel will be easier to read and more enjoyable.
3. The problem of going home
Someone has said that other worlds are great. In other worlds, you have everything, including strength, women, and tribes. But what are you when you go home? You are nothing!
But isn’t this the ideal that we Chinese people have always kept deep in our hearts? Fallen leaves must return to their roots!
Is it wrong for the protagonist to want to go home?
I think there is nothing wrong at all. The root of Chinese children is called family, and the emotion of loving their parents is called filial piety.
Can a person really abandon his parents, relatives, and friends, abandon the world he once lived in, and go live in a completely unfamiliar world?
I personally feel like I can’t!
So the main character’s goal is to go home. I feel like there’s nothing wrong with it, so I’ll just do it.
4. The problem of magic
I have to admit that the book friend is right, you can indeed fall into a dream, but everyone has different ideas. It is more comfortable for me to use a systematic method to teach. This is just my personal idea. I always feel that if I fall into a dream, I will write a fairy tale, so
Forgive this...
5. The problem of being an otaku
I’m going to put three exclamation points here. I don’t mean to insult otakus, and I don’t even mean to insult fat otakus!!!
Because, I am a deep fat otaku, the type who can stay at home for a year and a half!!! Thank you, insulting a fat otaku is equivalent to insulting yourself, I am not that stupid yet.
Why does Xiaobai stutter when talking to others? It’s simple. I look at it from my own perspective. As otakus, we definitely don’t come into contact with many people. Most of them are online. So the question is, isn’t it okay to speak in public? Nervous?
I already have social barriers, but I still have to speak very fluently in public?
So I think it’s normal for the protagonist I wrote to stumble when he speaks in public. But later he becomes fluent because he’s used to it... Should this be called growth?─━_─━
6. The problem of jumping on the street
Judging from the current results, it is destined to fail.
However, I never thought that this book would have good results!
I didn't even think about signing a contract. I would never sign a contract. To me, being able to sign a contract this time is like winning the lottery super jackpot, clearing the prize pool, or a meteorite falling from the sky and hitting my feet.
So, why write this book?
It's very simple, I want to finish writing the book!
I have been reading novels for fifteen years, and I have tried to write them, but without exception, they have failed.
I just want to finish this book, this is the purpose of writing it!
As for my grades, I am very satisfied with having perfect attendance.
Basically, I explained the problem clearly. The idea is just this idea. The writing is not very good. I am not very satisfied with it myself. I feel that a lot of things have not been written out and I have not written it clearly. But I am persisting and struggling. .
I don’t know how many people have read this single chapter, and I don’t know what they thought after reading it. Anyway, there aren’t many reviews for the book, and I don’t know much about this chapter. I guess you don’t want to communicate with a second-rate person like me.
Let me write something grumpy by the way.
Some people in the book group once said that writing novels is for money, but I am not. I really write novels for my dream!
Because I have experienced a lot, I have experienced the era of Long Kong, the era of Fantasy Sword, the era of the Three Networks' struggle for hegemony, and the era of the rise of Dian Niang. It was watching "Tian Mo", "Piao Miao", "Alien World", "Fantasy Beast Boy", "Super Brain Legend", "Sky Eagle", "Hershey's Disciples", "Purple River", "Lynx"... so my understanding of the novel is different from that of many people.
Nowadays, many authors regard writing novels as a tool to make money and as a part-time job.
I'm not!
I regarded it as a dream, so I was a second-rate person and mentally retarded.
I adhere to the most original and fundamental principles of the novel!
Internet article! It’s YY, it’s imagination, creativity, it’s the ivory tower, it’s the last pure land in the author’s heart!
No matter how well written it is.
I'm just writing the story in my heart, that's all.
One final word: I say it with a smile, I take it with a pinch of salt for myself.