Over at the Liyuan, the script of the play was quickly sent over.
There are two about glass and one about Simao.
One of the books on glass is called "Glass Vase", which is pretty good, but the other one is incomprehensible.
Her idea was to write the entire story around a piece of glassware, in the style of a "treasure legend" to highlight the novelty of the glass. The story should also be beautiful, and the lyrics should be good so that it could be sung.
This one basically meets her requirements, with only minor modifications needed.
Yan Shiyue wrote annotations directly on the play notes, asking him not to highlight the "preciousness" of the glass, but to highlight the novelty and beauty.
This will coordinate with subsequent publicity.
The story of Simao is totally useless. Although the story is still readable, changing the profession of the protagonist has no impact on the whole story.
She didn't want this simple protagonist to be a Simao official, but the whole thing had to be closely related to Simao.
Yan Shiyue called back and asked them to rewrite, and then asked Yiye to reward the person who wrote "Glass Vase" and told them to be more relaxed. Many small bags from the market can be used. After all, they are not going to be placed in the pear garden in the future.
It's sung inside.
The people in the Liyuan all stood respectfully and listened to Yiye Chuan's words.
As Yiye walked forward, someone said coldly on the back: "Shen Shuanglou, you're awesome! I didn't realize that a biting dog doesn't bark!"
The man named Shen Shuanglou only bowed his hands in a seemingly respectful manner, did not answer, and went back to his desk to write.
The man wanted to say more, but someone else stopped him and dragged him out.
The man still said angrily: "If you can't prevent it for a moment, let him take the lead!"
"Okay!" the person who persuaded him said: "Since he has registered with His Highness, he may be able to reach the sky in one fell swoop. If you offend him now, aren't you afraid that he will gain power and retaliate against you?"
The man was speechless for a moment.
Wherever there are people, there are rivers and lakes. This Shen Shuanglou was not from a good background, but his writing skills were good. Many of the scripts he gave to Yan Shiyue were written by him, but his name was not on them.
He has been keeping silent, just like a good old man, even if someone robbed his work, he didn't react much.
Unexpectedly, he was waiting for this time! He took a leave of absence today, and it was not until the boss left the house that he stepped forward and handed over the play script he had written, and he succeeded in just one play.
Yan Shiyue received the new "Glass Vase" one day later. It completely met her expectations.
She immediately told them to arrange music as soon as possible and learn to sing as soon as possible.
Another day later, the newly written Simao story also came, but it still didn’t work, it felt a bit different.
Three copies were sent in succession. Later, it was said that the person who wrote "The Glass Vase" also wrote one, but it still didn't work.
Yan Shiyue thought about it and decided to write it himself.
So she spent two days writing it, well, it was just a cool novel, and a story came out.
That night, when the group came back one after another, Qu Sinian was talking to Xu Wenqu, and he saw Yan Shiyue looking here with a smile.
Qu Sinian immediately distanced himself from Xu Wenqu, and after confirming that she was looking at Xu Wenqu, he breathed a sigh of relief and slowly leaned back.
Xu asked the channel: "What are you doing?"
"You don't know," Qu Sinian said with a wry smile: "Whenever the Prime Minister smiles at me or takes the initiative to pour me tea, there must be something wrong. I feel scared when I see him now."
Xu Wenqu smiled lightly and said, "You can hide away even if you are scared?"
Qu Sinian glanced at him: "You don't have to say sarcastic words. I'll ask the Prime Minister to ask you to come to Simao some other time, so that I won't be too busy every day."
Xu Wenqu smiled and said nothing.
During the meal, Qu Sinian took the initiative to ask: "Master, do you have any more information that you want to ask him to write? I saw that you smiled just now, but you were very kind."
"Look what you said," Yan Shiyue said, "Am I that kind of person?"
Qu Sinian stopped his chopsticks and thought to himself, isn't it?
Then she deliberately said with a serious face: "Why should I laugh when I write a book? I write a book or an article, and it's not for me. The treasury is rich and everyone has a responsibility. Isn't this what Mr. Xu should do?"
Qu Sinian couldn't stop laughing, and Xu Wenqu also laughed and said, "Yue'er said that."
Qu Sinian was just watching the fun and didn't think it was a big deal: "I'm not writing a book, but you still laugh. The prime minister is already laughing, and he even gives you food. This must be more difficult than writing a book."
Xu Wenqu said with a smile: "If I have a lot of talent in my heart, of course I can laugh out loud."
Qu Sinian: "..."
It's as if he doesn't have it!
Seeing that he stopped asking, Gu Hengsha gave him a chopstick and said, "You should continue to ask."
Qu Sinian said: "Do you think I can ask?"
"Yes!" Yan Shiyue said: "You don't need to ask, I can tell you that I wrote a play excerpt and asked Mr. Xu to fill in the blanks."
Qu Sinian asked: "What is 'fill in the blanks'?"
"I write the story and he writes the lyrics."
Qu Sinian raised his forehead and asked, "You call this 'filling in the blanks'?"
She nodded matter-of-factly: "Sir, don't worry, I will not erase your efforts. I am ready to join forces with you! Even the protagonist's name is also a joint one."
Even Xu Wenqu became interested: "Oh? I wonder what it should be called?"
Yan Shiyue said: "Shuiyue Immortal!"
Everyone: "..."
Qu Sinian sighed: "I can solve this mystery. You are 'water' and 'human', and she is 'moon' and 'immortal', right?"
Yan Shiyue nodded: "Si Nian, you are really getting smarter and smarter!"
"Thank you for the compliment, Prime Minister!" Qu Sinian handed over his hand and asked, "I wonder what the 'protagonist' is called?"
Yan Shiyue compared the opera excerpts next to him, and Qu Sinian finished his meal quickly, picked it up and read it, while reading it to them.
This play excerpt tells about a young man named Tang Yingjun, whose nickname is Shui Laoer, who was born as a merchant. He has been very talented in business since he was a child.
Then his father owned a cosmetics shop that was about to close down, but he saved it on the spot with a strange move. Then he used more strange tricks to turn this small shop into a large and famous store.
Then one day he heard his father looking at the moon and sighing, and asked, his father said, everyone said that my son is smart, but why doesn't he study if he is smart? It is your father's lifelong wish to study, become an official, and honor your ancestors!
From then on, Tang Yingjun became determined and began to study.
Gee, how in line with the mainstream values of this society!
Anyway, it was this Tang Yingjun who started studying and expressed doubts at the same time. I am also loyal and filial, but I just want to be a businessman. I think what businessmen do is also very interesting... If I can be a businessman and an official at the same time,
Just fine.
Then this person went all the way to the imperial examination and then to the imperial examination.
In the middle, he met a beautiful businesswoman who understood him, and there was a short romance in the middle.
Then when he heard that the imperial court had opened the Simao, Tang Yingjun was overjoyed and wanted to go there. Unexpectedly, he met someone else slandering the Simao, so Tang Yingjun worked hard to get better... Yes, he worked hard again and decided to take the top exam first and then join the Simao.
trade.
Then he really got the No. 1 exam, and when he was parading across the street, he met the official Nian Si and knelt down in public to plead with him. Then he joined Simao, and then he started doing business as an official, fulfilling his beautiful dreams, and so on. (Unfinished)