I don’t want to say whether it’s a success or not, but at least this story is what I want to tell. But to be honest, “Overwatch” has received a lot of criticism, and many times it’s so severe that I almost want to give up.
But I still insist on at least telling the complete story.
If the first part of "Overwatch" is a war surrounding the core of the Black Sun, then the second part of "Overwatch" is a series of conspiracies surrounding Peacock and Shimada Ryuya. So, in fact, in the second part
There will be much fewer big scenes.
Moreover, this part also exposed a lot of problems on my part, in terms of writing method, writing style, and experience. If I were to write "Overwatch" again now, I estimate that I could reduce the number of words by about one-third.
Because when I re-read this part myself, I really felt that the amount of information contained in each chapter was too little.
This made me directly feel that the plot in many places was a bit unsettled, and I was very tired to write it. Therefore, there are too many areas where I still need to improve in this aspect. Only then did I realize that Jin Yong, as a master of a generation, could only write a few hundred thousand words.
I can describe a martial arts picture scroll with ups and downs, but I can only write about one stage with hundreds of thousands of words. The gap is too big.
However, the reason why the second chapter of "Overwatch" is longer is because it describes too many characters. Among the ten ninjas, except for the four soldiers and the six soldiers, there is some space to describe the others. This makes
I was struggling painfully with wanting to shorten the length of the story and also wanting to write the entire plot. So I still couldn't write a lot of things in the end.
For example, I originally wanted Hanzo and Genji to fall in love with Peacock at the same time, and then have a conflict. But in the end, the plot ended without any problem after Genji confessed to Peacock, because if the plot continued, it would really be unbearable.
Lived.
So to sum up, I am very satisfied with the first part of "Overwatch" and it is relatively compact. I can only say that I am very satisfied with the design of the second part of "Overwatch", but I thought too much, even too much.
Let this chapter be too scattered and too slow.
Therefore, you need to make your language concise. This is the first thing that needs improvement. In addition, you also need to avoid the multi-clue approach of the second part of "Overwatch" in future plot design. This is the second thing.
Needs improvement.
However, in the second chapter of "Overwatch", I am quite satisfied with the characters created. Peacock, D.VA, the girls Kubei and Jubei, as well as Ryuya Shimada and Zhang
Feng. I also used a lot of pen and ink to portray the characters of these people, and in the end the characteristics became more distinct.
Then there is the question about D.VA.
In fact, the decision to send lunch boxes to D.VA was decided a long time ago. She must be a woman who will appear in the early stage of Tang Yu, because in the later stage, her abilities will be very embarrassing.
In terms of multi-line operation, reaction speed, and operation speed, can it be compared to a computer? In fact, after Tang Yu installed a photon computer in his brain, his combat effectiveness surpassed that of D.VA.
In this case, I still have to take care of D.VA's appearance count, so that she can have some achievements and not become a vase, which is really difficult.
So you can imagine how embarrassed she would be if D.VA was brought back as an 'L'. The most likely result is that she would sweetly say "Honey, you're back!" every time she comes home, and then start having sex.
It’s RBQ.
It would be a very cruel thing to leave her in the world ten years ago. Because she would see another D.VA grow up slowly, enjoy a happy life that she had never lived, become a big star, and put her
All the halo she had before was taken away. This feeling was more terrifying than killing her.
Therefore, D.VA disappears, but some of her memories affect D.VA in this timeline. The two merge into one to some extent, which is the best result.
So that’s all I want to say about “Overwatch”. Give me a dozen Philips blades.
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Then it’s time for the extras you love to see on camera!!
Character 1: Hank
Actor: Book Friend——Uncle Zhang
Xiao Jing: So Uncle Zhang plays Hank! He became Soldier 77 in the first part of Overwatch, and he also stood firmly behind Jack Morrison! He appeared in the Battle of Sejong City Laboratory and the Battle of Inchon.
In the next chapter, there aren’t many scenes, but you still do your best to protect Special Envoy Rogge. What would you like to say about this part of Overwatch’s journey?
Uncle Zhang: I just can’t reconcile myself to Resident Evil: Operation Raccoon City. This is the only one where I have the protagonist. The other Resident Evil series are just soy sauce. That’s why I suggested that the author add such a supporting role, and it’s also a reference to Overwatch.
I am very satisfied with this Blizzard work, so I have always wanted to explore its background story. Unfortunately, when Blizzard released this game, it may only be a trial version of an FPS game. The background story is limited to a small part of the explanation of each character, plus
There are no official novels or comics about Overwatch on the Internet. I would like to thank the author for giving me this opportunity to make up for some of my regrets. Sincerely.
Xiao Jing: So the prototype of Hank is the fourth survivor in "Resident Evil 2", the Death God Hank (Hunk)! However, because of the needs of the plot, this character is more like a veteran. The image of the Death God Hank is still the same
There is a difference.
Uncle Zhang: It doesn’t matter. At that time, I decided between Master Chief and Hank in Delta Force for a long time before I gave the answer of Hank. I was very happy to be able to participate in this plot!
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Character 2: Zhang Feng
Played by: Book Friends - Arms Detroit
Xiaojing: Then there is Matsushima Kaede who is so bad in this plot. Oh no, it was Zhang Feng who said~~~As such a big bad guy, what do you think?
Arms detroit: I was originally content with being a bit player, but I was very happy to suddenly become a villain with a plot in the world. I still have a good impression of the author's setting of Peacock and his own innovation. After all, reasonable innovation is unlimited.
Flow is an interesting point.
Xiaojing: But I am asking Zhang Feng!
Arms detroit: What is my evaluation of my role in the plot? I am a very normal villain, but I felt the deep malice in Zhang Feng’s final ending. Haha, but I am still very happy to read a novel that I participated in. I will always
Big support for the author.
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Role 3: Martin Hrafford
Played by: Book Friend——Asphyxia-Suffocation
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Character 4: Zhou Qing
Actor: Book Friend——Zhou Young
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The interviews with the above two characters will be posted later after they organize the language!
So, "The Mechanic of Infinite Legend" is about to enter the next volume, promotion battle!!!