Doesn’t it feel very abrupt? Just after unfolding the background of the Immortal Court and the vast world sea, the book suddenly ends here.
Frankly speaking, the ending now feels a bit unfinished.
But actually, finishing it now is the best option.
On the one hand, when I started the book, my original idea was to complete the main plot line of conquering the Kui Niu Demon King and becoming a true immortal, but then it became more and more biased in the end.
On the other hand, now is the best time to end this point. The protagonist has realized all the early plans and even suppressed the Kui Niu Demon King. Moreover, while holding on to his thick legs, he also climbed onto the big stage of Immortal Court and Boundary Sea.
Carrying forward the past and linking up the future.
And if you continue to write, it will definitely collapse to an unimaginable level, and the rest will only be repeated one world after another.
In fact, I had the idea of becoming a eunuch many times a long time ago, but I persisted in it.
Even from the perspective of royalties, if I continue to update in June, the half-year bonus plus full attendance plus subscription can help me realize my dream of earning more than 2,000 a month at a time, making it easier for me to change my mobile phone without having to talk to my dad.
Mom wants money.
To do this, it is very simple. I can open another copy at will, and it will be fine. But it is pointless to do so. There is no need to destroy the original good ending for a little royalties.
For example, The Demonic Monk's Huang Ting, I originally subscribed to this book and was influenced by it, so I changed my style to Xianxia Infinite.
Yao Monk himself said in his closing remarks that the best ending point is to end Huang Ting when the protagonist returns to Xianqin to reunite with the heroine to suppress everything.
And now, my book is also at a similar plot point. It is the best choice to finish it at this point, and writing further will only be watery and unfinished.
Moreover, my recent state has been really bad. It’s the cultural festival finals soon, so I really don’t have much energy left.
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First, let’s talk about this book in terms of style and rhythm.
When I started this book, I actually wanted to write about an orthodox mortal style.
This is a story about a protagonist who is not very talented and comes from a small family, and practices steadily with a system that has an idle function. (Deduct a 1 if you want to read it. If it exceeds ten, I will write it in the extra chapter.)
But how should I put it, I had just entered the industry at that time and was a complete novice. First of all, I made a fatal mistake.
The hooks are too big, and it is difficult for me to grasp the plot based on my ability. Moreover, the hooks are quite complicated, such as caves, strict attribute checks, etc.
The most important thing is that my brain suddenly twitched and I turned the general direction of the book to Zhutianliu when there was already a problem with the early settings.
Just at this moment, all the mistakes made in the early stage were revealed.
First of all, changing the protagonist’s name without changing it completely affects everyone’s reading experience.
Secondly, the style has changed from the system mortal flow to the fairy infinite flow. The big change in style has caused many readers who originally wanted to read the mortal flow plus the system to leave. (Of course, I later revised the beginning four times, and the current beginning is already the third one.
There are four versions, and the number of words is less than 20,000.)
Due to these errors that occurred in the early stage, and the control of plot rhythm and other aspects at that time was far less than it is now, the result was that it was top-heavy, and the main world and dungeons were not prioritized.
Especially in the early stage, the Chiming World, Daqian World, and even the Xianming World have a strong sense of separation from the main world. (I bet someone must have forgotten the plots of these worlds. (￣3￣)
snort!)
Of course, I have tried my best to correct and improve this point in the later period. The linkage between Qingyun World and Dongchen World is an attempt.
The establishment of the connection between Xumi Realm, Immortal Court, and Leize Realm is the application after mastering it, and an attempt to save the plot from collapse.
Facts have proved that this move was very successful. Even though the early plot of Xumijie was set to a new low due to my own rhythm.
However, the recent plot has doubled the number of orders, and I have barely guessed everyone's taste for once. It is no longer an embarrassing scene that I wrote that is exciting but that you are indifferent to.
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Now that I’ve talked about the change in style of the book, let’s talk about my character creation.
How should I put it? It’s probably because my writing skills are not up to par.
Although I have the plot of the entire book in my mind, due to the above-mentioned problems and my own abilities, many places are not laid out properly, and the character creation is too underwhelming. There are few characters that leave a deep impression on everyone.
For example, Chen Xiangshan, this character was an old man from the early map when he was first set. Even his age was specifically set to be about 220 years old. By the time the protagonist reaches the age of seventy-seven, there are only a dozen years left.
Shouyuan.
But it is a pity that many details, including having the protagonist live in Lingxi Fang for personal guidance as mentioned in Chapter 6, were not described in detail, so maybe everyone did not leave much of an impression.
Including the middle period, I described the closeness between the two in their many interactions, but there was really no foreshadowing and portrayal, which was a bit uncomfortable.
Just like Chen Wanqing's death, the foreshadowing was not done well. (This paragraph is excerpted from the writer's remarks in Chapter 1 of Volume 11, with slight modifications)
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Then there is the update. Originally, there were more courses after the class started, and the book has also reached an advanced stage, so it is difficult to update.
I happened to encounter the finals of the Cultural Festival recently, and I was really busy, so I had to update several times.
This month I took two days off and owed four more updates. Now it seems there is no way to pay back these four more updates.
ennnnnn, please make an IOU here and pay it back next time.
Next, some extra episodes will be released one after another, you can take a look.