As you can see, this is a belated review of the book (with shame⊙﹏⊙∥)
The book has been officially finished, and the final ending can be regarded as a happy ending. The author has tried his best, so it should not be considered a bad ending...
The main plot of this book has always been very clear. It is a very cliché journey through another world, upgrading all the way to the pinnacle of life, and becoming the strongest in the world. Of course, the companionship of a confidante is indispensable along the way...
After all, this book is my debut novel. It was a story that the author, Zhan, took up his mind and wrote in his spare time after the college entrance examination in 2016. He was still too young at that time, and many of the frameworks he set seem to be old-fashioned now.
My writing skills are also limited, I can only write to this extent, there is no other way.
A full four years have passed, and the journey has been bumpy, with interruptions and interruptions for more than half a year, but now it finally has a complete ending.
It is a gratifying event for both the author and the book friends who have persevered and worked hard to catch up to this point...
I would like to thank you all for being able to accompany Xingkong to the end. I am very ashamed that I cannot present you the most perfect story.
Starry sky thanks you all!
ORZ…
Limited by various factors, in fact, there are still some parts of this book that are not well written, and some of the author's original whims and whims are not presented.
For example, at the end, in order to fight against the Realm Demon Clan, Feng Zichen decided to use the forbidden technique of dirt reincarnation and summon the souls of the dead.
In fact, Xingkong originally wanted to write about something else here, such as the underworld!
In addition to the human world, the world of stars actually also has the Netherworld. I have written about the Netherworld before!
In the early days, when Feng Zichen was choosing a spiritual cultivation method in Tianxing Academy, he saw a volume of ancient Tianhe meditation method, which recorded this -
It is said that in ancient times there was a Milky Way, which connected the stars above and the underworld below...
The Netherworld here refers to the Netherworld. The souls in the world of stars have returned to the Netherworld, just like the Pure Land in Naruto.
It is not easy to summon the undead from the Netherworld and use the dirty soil to reincarnate and resurrect. It will encounter resistance from the Netherworld, and may even anger the Netherworld and cause great terror.
Originally, the story of Feng Zichen setting off to the Netherworld for the art of reincarnation in the dirty land should have been set here.
but……
In the end, I cut it off and didn't write it out.
Because it was too troublesome and I didn’t have much time to properly design the Netherworld, so I had to skip it...
Fortunately, so far, the game is running smoothly overall, there are no major BUGs, and the previous regrets have gradually been relieved.
Some people may ask whether there is a second part of this book? For example, the story of Feng Zichen taking the girls to the Supreme God Realm and trying to reach the top again...
I just want to say, there is no need!
Feng Zichen is already in the realm of the Creator God, transcending causality and destiny, transcending the long river of time, and being eternally free and at ease. Why should he be allowed to lower his level and do some meaningless things?
After all, in my setting, although the Supreme God Realm is the highest level world in the world, there can be no existence beyond the Lord God Realm.
Even the Goddess of Dark Night and other rulers of the Supreme God Realm have only achieved enlightenment longer than Feng Zichen and are stronger, but in the final analysis they are still in the realm of the Lord God.
The difference is just the level of the Lord God Realm. Feng Zichen has gained eternity. After spending some time, he can naturally catch up and reach the top of the Lord.
There is no need to write too much in detail, just keep a little sense of mystery and let him play freely...
OK, this is the end of the book, a perfect ending. Some people still ask questions about Xingkong's new book, uh...
This question is also very troublesome, because I know that my writing skills still need to be refined, especially the lack of experience in plot outlines and emotional lines. Sometimes it looks awkward (yes, I sometimes have this problem myself).
Feel!)
It was originally planned to write a Hokage novel directly after writing the next one, not this kind of alien Naruto, but a real Naruto fanfic, writing the story of the Naruto world, but...
I always feel that I can't control it, and if I try to write it forcibly, it may be nondescript and full of errors and omissions, so I can only shelve this plan for the time being (￣^￣゜han)
Next, I may open a vest and go to other platforms to practice my writing and get a feel for it.
When I feel that my writing skills are mature and I am experienced, I will return to .asxs. and start to enlighten myself again!
After all... this is my natal home. I have feelings after staying here for so long, and I will definitely come back!
If you want to know the specific situation, you can also join the book club group of this book - 1035998942, the group name is the Second World Naruto Senki Book Club Group 2. There are some old book friends and Naruto lovers in it. Everyone is welcome to join the group to chat.
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PS: One group has been blocked, and only two groups are left. Stay tuned and cherish them!
PPS: Although the second group is about to become a gaming group, those who don’t like game robots can block group messages and don’t have to rush out of the group. After all, there are multiple channels to contact the author...
Okay, that's about it. This final review should be over. (This is the first review in my life. I'm a little excited. I actually wrote 1,500 words. I'm so awesome. (????????
??) La la la)
No kidding, thank you all again for your support all the way. It’s a long way to go, I hope...