Every time at this time, I always feel exhausted. I have a lot to say but feel like I don’t have the energy to say it. In the past, postscripts were not long, maybe a thousand words.
This one is particularly tiring because it is the longest to write...
It's like running a marathon. The first half is always easier, but the second half becomes more tiring. Every meter adds to the tiredness. But this book has millions more words... I really admire those who can write millions and millions of words.
The macho guy is so awesome.
I really can't do it and just want to rest.
By the way, this book is indeed my best one... In terms of reputation, some people say it is not as good as the Spring and Autumn Period, and some people say it is worse than the Spring and Autumn Period. Anyway, everyone has their own tastes. There is no need to argue about this, but I am not very satisfied with it. .
It’s not that there’s anything wrong with the writing, it’s mainly that it’s not the story I originally wanted to write.
In fact, this book cannot be regarded as an upgrade stream in the true sense, it is actually a travelogue.
As soon as these two words came out, I wonder if many people would suddenly realize: That’s it.
Many people said before that they couldn't see the main line. It is true that the main line is not very obvious, because the main line is to explore the world. Shenzhou, Netherworld, Great Wilderness, East China Sea, Beiming, and Heaven. Every time I go to a place, I will describe the local customs and construct a story.
The three-dimensional world emerges, and then Qin Yi's harvest is finally formed. Thousands of lines combine to form the final creation. This is the real main line.
Collecting materials for Bangbang to shape his body is just a superficial story line.
It's not about upgrading or fighting monsters, so there aren't many battles, and there's not much rendering involved because what I want to write about isn't there.
Although it is a travelogue, it must have a story to become a novel. What is the original story... In fact, Qin Yi is just a witness clue to observe the stories of everyone in every place.
The original plan included many independent supporting character stories similar to Li Qinglin's, such as Electric Mouse, Jingze, Gusong Jushi and Ye Farewell, Yuzhenren's obsession, the good, evil and ambition of Beiyuan and Hemo, Tianjizi's conspiracy... all were thought of.
It needs to be expanded to become an independent story.
For example, if we add more foreshadowing of Yu Zhenren at the end, write a little more stories about him and his wife, and finally add some memories to highlight it, the artistic conception and emotion will definitely be stronger than now.
But people don’t like to watch it. There is a high probability that during the preparation process, people will criticize me for playing a supporting role.
The experimental field in the first volume told me that I couldn’t write it like this.
As we all know, the style of the first volume is very different from that of the later ones. The reason has also been mentioned, because the first volume was not only criticized but also had poor results - even now, every time Qidian recommends it, the recommendation effect is at the bottom in the same period.
It’s because the initial pushback was severe.
There are a lot of old readers who trust me who can't stand it. Let alone new readers, the retention rate is very low.
Because it is slow to get started, and it does not feel like a refreshing article, it is completely wrong in terms of reading expectations.
At that time, many people felt that the protagonist's brilliance was overshadowed by Li Qinglin, and their expected reading goal was to see when the protagonist would slap Li Qinglin in the face...
This kind of reading expectation left me speechless, and I was not on the channel at all. You can imagine the impression I got...
In addition, there are many other points, such as Qingjun's recklessness in the early stage, Minghe's awesome coaxing in the early stage, which makes people uncomfortable, Cheng Cheng's "green tea" feeling in the early stage, as well as "dog-blooded" and "entangled", etc., to persuade others to retreat.
, without waiting for the transformation or reversal of the character, it is judged as "poisonous".
Until a fire broke out, everyone discovered that the overall meaning of this volume is actually just telling a story. It is not a slap in the face, nor is it a bloody attack. It is just a simple story. Everything in the previous article is just foreshadowing, so after thinking about it
It feels a bit interesting... At this time, the reputation of the whole volume has been restored, but it is too late. People who have left cannot come back, and they cannot see this.
This is a situation where the long-term foreshadowing writing method is incompatible with today's online reading expectations. At least my "godhead" is not enough to support people's patience. I am afraid that I have to reach the level of Cuttlefish Beacon. I am indeed far worse.
So I had to start adjusting my writing style.
The overall outline of the story has not changed, but the way of expression and writing has changed. In fact, it is a matter of emphasis on writing. Just like the first volume that focused on Li Qinglin, everything was reduced and the focus was on Qin Yi himself and his women. It should have been "
I won't press the "pressure" part. If there are no twists and turns, then there will be no twists and turns. After all, I don't work hard to write things just to find criticism.
When the small town's erotic temple meets Jingze, it is the final transition point in style. Part of the artistic conception continued until the first time I met the senior sister.
The subsequent plot remained the same, but the focus changed. The tone also changed from a slightly serious and thoughtful one to a mostly humorous one.
Some people say that it is boring to watch, the supporting characters are boring, there are too many emotional scenes, too many jokes, they prefer the early stage, etc. But it turns out that this is what most people want to watch, because the results are indeed real
After changing the pen and ink, it improved, doubled and went up.
In fact... as long as you don't write the plot part of the emotional drama between the male and female protagonists, pay attention to any plot part, there will definitely be the same impatience as in the first volume, and some people will not even wait for the explanation in the next chapter before starting to approve it. A little bit
Frustration doesn't even need to be a setback, as long as the villain is successful, a group of aggrieved parties will appear.
What's more, a large number of readers disliked the main line of decryption, and I was quite convinced.
But once I write a male-female scene, basically nothing happens and everyone is happy.
It goes without saying what everyone likes.
Since you don’t want to read stories about supporting characters, then don’t write stories about supporting characters. It’s very simple.
Maybe someone has said that after all, only a small number of people can speak, and we cannot be influenced by them... But I can ignore the comments, but I can't ignore the data.
The subscription data for male and female protagonist scenes is much higher than the subscription data for any other plot. You might as well be scolding me for skipping subscriptions. If you can scold me in the chapter of the day, you are not skipping subscriptions, right?
Some people say it's too much to play jokes, but the excitement of every chapter comes from this.
This is everyone's choice.
Perhaps this is also an inevitable evolution after the emergence of Zhang Shuo. Nowadays, on the starting point list, the silly style has begun to occupy an increasing proportion, and this is the reason.
In the end, it became the current "Ask the Red Dust".
To say that I cater to readers, I do cater to readers, because I want to eat...
Those who feel disappointed and left can only say sorry, although those who left cannot see the postscript...
Of course, the existing writing style is not bad. The fact is that it has a wider audience and more people like it. Many people see it and make my aunt laugh and laugh happily. I also feel happy and happy. It is quite good. After changing the style, it is originally
For this, just relax and have fun.
The plot is still the direction planned by the outline, and the overall structure is quite complete. One circle after another, one foreshadowing after another to fill in the pits. I am personally satisfied. For an online article that is updated daily, I am quite satisfied that it can do this.
There is a sense of accomplishment.
It's just that it's not the original intention after all, which is a bit regretful.
In the end, only one volume was left, proving that Ji Cha is not just a writer of romantic dramas and girls, and can be considered as someone who has "been here before".
These words are just a summary of the writing process of this book. They have no real meaning, let alone anyone to blame. The current Wendao Hongchen is just as good.
Anyway, online articles are mainly based on public preferences. When I no longer need to think about eating, I can slowly write the stories I want.
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The second thing I want to say is an appeal to the current harem literature. I hope everyone can be more tolerant of the already difficult harem literature.
I don’t want to say anything about being extremely negative and trying to protect the Party. I’m tired after talking for so long. I hope these brothers know that their own stabs are really more harmful to the author than the moralists who report the Party.
Heavy. Because the author knows what those people will criticize, but he doesn’t know which sentence he wrote will be criticized.
I can't spend three or five times as much brain power. Every time I write a sentence, I have to consider whether this mount will be criticized, whether the two balls squatting together will cause discomfort to anyone, and whether it is heaven to write a mythical restoration of the cow circling the piano.
thunder……
As for that?
We really don’t have the brainpower to deal with these things that normal people don’t need to consider at all. This makes people unable to write at all, and they are simply at a loss as to what to write.
I don’t want to say too much about this, let’s just say something normal.
I said in an interview before that the harem party does not have high requirements for works. As long as the girl writes well, many others can be forgiven.
I don’t feel it anymore now.
As mentioned before, no matter what the plot is, whether the party is reasonable, the party is logical, the party is aggrieved, the requirements are no lower than those of single-woman and no-girl works.
The plot requirements are not that low, but the character requirements are hundreds of times higher.
I rarely see requirements for characterization in stories without a heroine, but in harem stories... I won’t mention the characterization of the heroine. They also often ask for the characterization of the supporting characters. You don’t look at the characterization of the supporting characters, but you demand... anyway, everything is improved.
Go by the standards, regardless of whether this is just a daily online article, not a classic.
Some of the requirements are standards that even classics cannot meet.
For example, the heroine cannot have a vase, and she will be criticized if she has one. I think that Jin Yong has a vase and Zeng Rou, and no one requires all characters to be colorful. When it comes to harem online novels, not only do the female characters need to be outstanding, but even the electric mice are just tools.
I'm not satisfied, saying that I can only write about women and not enough characters... I really don't understand how this request came about.
Could it be that the heroine is not considered a character? If other people’s articles without a heroine portray a few supporting male characters, they are just like a group of people. If we portray more than a dozen female characters and have no words for supporting male characters, it means that we have not portrayed characters?
There is also a requirement that the heroine cannot disappear into the crowd or disappear in the later stage. I thought that even the colorful Shi Jin and Wu Song in the early stage of Water Margin did not show much in the later stage. How come a mere harem online novel actually requires the characters in the early stage to be as exciting in the later stage?
There are only so many characters, no matter they are male or female, after the exciting scenes are over, they will naturally not be outstanding all the time. Isn't this common sense? Can you allocate a little role from time to time and do your best?
We are really just writing a few thousand words of online articles every day. We are not writing something beyond the classics, and it is impossible to be of that level.
Can you not mention some requirements that go beyond human limits?
Now that harem literature is so difficult to navigate, not only are there no tolerance, but they are becoming more harsh. I really find it strange.
This is an appeal, please be more tolerant and gentle...
Well...it doesn't make any sense, and no one listened to my appeal. Some people said that I was the one carrying the flag in the harem, so I was so busy that I quickly removed the flag. I really couldn't afford it. When I was reported, I was like a target.
Dazzling, holding a magnifying glass when demanding, but the results are several times lower than others eating in silence.
A buddy in the quagmire said that newspaper sellers should carry the flag now, so hurry up and take over, thank you, good man, my writing skills are really not good, so let the newspaper sellers with strong writing skills bear this heavy honor.
Unexpectedly, the postscript this time has more words than the main text... I have really held it in for too long... Well, the negative energy is too heavy, which is not good either.
I am sincerely grateful to most of the brothers for their continued support, otherwise I would have died long ago.
Now let me rest first...
When I used to work part-time, I would take a break for half a year. Now that I have to work full-time, I can’t be so willful... This time I will take a break of about two or three months (including the time to structure the new book). The next book will be in September at the earliest and mid-October at the latest.
, October is more likely.
Brothers who still trust me... See you there or see you.