As Starry Appreciation came to an end, it was officially announced that the winter season of 1996 was over, but the biggest winner, Rinto Chihara, was unable to take advantage of the victory and participate in the spring season. He was supposed to start preparing for a new drama after the filming of "Unnatural Death" was completed.
But I was injured and had no choice but to go to the hospital. I still have difficulty moving, so I could only miss it.
Hitomi Konoe was released from the sterile room, and immediately limped to find the master, showing the script he had written so painstakingly to Rinto Chihara, who was really speechless. You read a few introductory books,
Then I actually made a script!
Hitomi Konoe was very excited, but she was very polite to her master and asked respectfully: "Master, do you think this drama can be filmed?"
Of course we can’t film it. If we can film it, I’ll eat this script! Qianhara Rinto really wanted to say this, but looking at the half of her face that was still in a state of maintenance, she felt embarrassed and said with a smile: “Don’t worry, I’ll take a good look.
"
After all, he was his disciple, and he was really dedicated. He took the script and read it carefully.
The script has not yet been titled, it is a literary script, but if converted into a shooting script, the episode is quite short, ranging from about fifteen minutes to half an hour. Maybe Hitomi Konoe is a newbie and can't control it properly.
Chihara Rinto asked while watching: "Is it a morning drama?"
This length is usually a morning drama, and Hitomi Konoe immediately said: "No, it's a night drama. Master, you started with night dramas. I want to learn from you and start from the worst time."
Qianhara Rinto nodded lightly, feeling that she was somewhat self-aware, and knew to practice the night drama first, and then read two pages before hesitatingly said: "Teacher-student love? It involves ethics..."
It's not that it's impossible to film. The selection of Japanese dramas is quite broad, and the constraints are relatively small. However, as a newcomer, this kind of slightly heavy subject matter is not a good choice. But before he finished worrying, Hitomi Konoe said immediately:
"No, this is a romantic comedy!"
That is to develop towards youth. Chihara Rinto nodded and said he understood. He turned over two pages and found that it was indeed the case. A cute college girl from a poor background met and fell in love with a young male teacher who came to teach.
When he looked at it, he felt pretty good. Thinking about it, he had a vague feeling of being in love.
He looked at Hitomi Konoe with admiration, feeling that she was a drama queen with a talent for telling stories, but after turning two pages, he found that the two people met and fell in love very smoothly, and they had already made a lifelong agreement, with almost no twists and turns, like an old man.
It was as if Tian deliberately wanted them to be together, and he couldn't help but smile on his face.
After all, I am a newbie with no experience. Who doesn’t have some difficulties in falling in love in a TV series? This way of handling it is too lack of drama and cannot attract the audience to follow the series. I feel that it can progress to kissing just by turning the page. It’s too bland.
Yeah, kissing is okay, but you have to do it at the climax or put it at the end. In the first episode, they met and fell in love, and in the second episode, they started kissing. It was too fast!
But he didn't say anything. It's normal for newbies to not handle it well. It seems to be okay so far. Although it can't be regarded as a formal script, it is quite satisfactory. It can be said that a newcomer can perform well like this.
He turned another page. If he found that it had always been so ordinary, and the hero and heroine just met, fell in love, got married and had children, then he would have to talk to Hitomi Konoe about the basic principles of drama. But unexpectedly, after turning the page, the painting style
Suddenly, the actor's new identity was revealed. He couldn't help but ask: "Ah Hitomi, as the heir to Japan's top chaebol, why did the actor go to a public university to become a teacher?"
“Experience life!”
Qianhara Rinto was silent for a moment, feeling that it was a little bit bloody, but it still made sense.
He then read on and found that the hero's mother was opposed to the marriage and gave out one million yen to let the hero and heroine break up. He couldn't help it anymore. It's okay if the plot is so bloody, but if you insult the audience's intelligence like this, the audience will
Furious!
He quickly reminded: "One million is too little and does not match the magnanimity of a top chaebol."
In fact, Hitomi Konoe had never seen many rich people, so he immediately humbly asked for advice: "What do you think is appropriate?"
Chihara Rinto pondered for a moment, feeling that it was not appropriate for him to be an asshole. In the 1980s, TV dramas would not dare to be filmed like this. It will soon be the new century of 2000. Do you want to be scolded by the audience for doing this kind of plot?
But as a newcomer, he endured it and said hesitantly: "It's too little anyway, more would be better."
Bear with me, everyone grows up step by step. It is understandable that the early works are very childish! When I first started learning to make up stories, I also made a mess and ignored many common sense. It is normal for her to be like this.
!
Hitomi Konoe took the script, took out a ballpoint pen from nowhere, and casually added a zero after one million. After thinking about it, he added another one, then he looked up and thought about it, and then added another zero.
Then he asked: "How is this, Master? He looks like a rich man!"
Chihara Rinto didn’t know whether to say yes or not. If you write like this, how will you shoot it? Do you know how much a billion yen is? How should an actor who plays the hero’s mother take out a billion yen from his bag and throw it at the girl?
In front of the protagonist?
Does she usually carry a sack when she goes out?
She fell in front of the heroine, could the table bear it?
Are you two?
If an ordinary person dared to write this kind of script, he would dare to throw the script on that person's head, and then let him roll to the wall to reflect. But this silly apprentice who is trying to create for the first time needs to be calm and not dampen her enthusiasm for creation.
He resisted the desire to complain and took back the script, nodded and said: "Okay, that's enough."
He continued reading and found that the plot was as expected. The heroine refused, saying that pure love cannot tolerate the insult of money. However, the hero's mother immediately pointed out that teacher-student love is unethical and that being with the hero would harm her.
Social death of the male protagonist!
Chihara Rinto couldn't help it anymore and reminded softly: "This plot is inappropriate. The teacher-student relationship is no longer a problem now."
"Ah, have you given permission?" Hitomi Konoe scratched his head: "We can't do it there, but can it be done in Tokyo?"
"This is very common in Tokyo. Many teachers have married their own students." Chihara Rinto told the truth. In Japan, there are really many such people. After all, a lot of Japanese high school students become housewives after graduation, which is inevitable.
Teachers who meet their own teachers on blind dates are also hot commodities in the blind date market and are very popular.
Hitomi Konoe thought for a while: "Then how about we push the time forward a little bit?"
Qianhara Rinto nodded and said helplessly: "That's still reasonable."
Okay, it’s your first try, it should be encouraging! He continued to read, and the more he read, the more surprised he became. The heroine did not want the male protagonist to die socially, so she decided to break up with the male protagonist, but the male protagonist was an infatuated person and refused to do so.
Agreed, it's a bloody joke here, but it still makes sense. It's just that the heroine started running, so why was she hit by a car?
Being hit by a car was fine, but why was he struck by lightning again?
He couldn't bear it anymore and asked: "I have written so much before, isn't this the heroine?" It has been foreshadowed for so long, and now she is dead? So are you wasting your emotions by spending so much time on her?
Hitomi Konoe quickly shook her head: "No, no, she is the heroine, she is not dead, she is just injured and hospitalized."
Chihara Rinto immediately put her finger on being struck by lightning and wanted to ask her how she came up with the idea of being struck by lightning after being hit by a car. And even though it was like this, the heroine was not dead yet. Why was she okay?
The romantic drama turned into a ghost movie, but I hesitated and gave up.
It's her first time creating. It's normal not to think comprehensively. It's also normal to fail. There's no need to catch her and ask her harshly. And if she continues to ask her questions one by one, she probably won't have to do anything today. Just worrying about the rationality of various plots in this script will be enough.
How can this script be reasonable if it's not enough?
He flipped through the pages quickly and found that the back of the script was really full of twists and turns. In order to highlight the steadfast love between the male and female protagonists, various disasters and accidents occurred one after another. Conflicts for the sake of conflict. To put it simply, this script only contained two words:
Damn it!
The creator has no humanity and doesn't care about the audience's feelings, so he showers the audience with vats of dog blood and has to force the audience to move.
This script only started at the beginning, and stopped when the heroine was hit by a car for the third time. Probably because of lack of time, Konoe Hitomi bit the pen in the sterile room and stopped there, and Chihara Rinto didn't want to do it later.
After watching it, I feel that if it continues like this, in order to progress step by step and forcibly create a climax, Konoe Hitomi will inevitably arrange for the heroine to be run over by a train, hit by an airplane, and even not rule out the possibility of the heroine being attacked by a meteor shower.
He closed the script and said nothing for a while, mainly because there were too many flaws and he really didn't know where to start. Hitomi Konoe asked: "Master, what do you think? This script has been made into a night drama.
Is it possible?”
This was because she wanted to eat the peach, but her round eyes were sparkling, full of expectation. Chihara Rinto looked at her for a while, and couldn't help but smile. Everyone hopes that the fruits of their labor will be valued, and of course Hitomi Konoe does not.
Exception, and she didn't mean to do such nonsense. She came up with such a bloody script just because she was writing for the first time and had a lack of education and knowledge.
Maybe this script is indeed terrible, but who dares to say that what he wrote when he was eighteen or nineteen years old is perfect? In ten years, when he is twenty-eighty-nine years old and reads it again, he might want to go back and kill eighteen-nine-year-olds.
Older self, right?
Human life itself is a process of growth, and when doing something, there should be a process from unfamiliarity to proficiency.
Therefore, there is nothing to criticize in this script!
Qianhara Rinto touched her head and said with a smile: "The writing is very good, much better than me before!" After a pause, he asked again: "What do you think?"
Hitomi Konoe nodded vigorously: "I think it's very interesting. Making up stories is fun, and writing scripts is also fun!"
"Then write seriously and stick to it!" Qianhara Rinto smiled calmly, really like a master, "I am afraid of taking everything seriously, and you need to persevere in anything you want to accomplish. Since you like this story very much, you should read it well.
Keep writing it until it is finished, and treat it as your first work."
Hitomi Konoe nodded seriously: "I will seriously create a brave and strong character, and I will definitely insist on finishing the story!"
Chihara Rinto smiled with relief. Hitomi Konoe is very bad now, her performance is very clumsy, so clumsy that anyone who reads this script will laugh at her, but what about ten years from now? If she can really persevere, how will she behave in ten years?
?
Maybe it’s worth looking forward to!
He said seriously: "Come on, Ah Tong!"
"Yes, Master!" Hitomi Konoe immediately lowered his head in agreement, then raised his head and said cheerfully: "Master thinks it's great, then when the script is written, will you come and shoot it?"
Qianhara Rinto raised his eyebrows and wanted to complain again. It was not easy for him to gain such a reputation. He didn't want to ruin it, but he thought about it and did not object directly. He smiled and said: "If you really finish writing it, and you still have it ten years later,
If you want to film it, I'll be your director and let Ms. Murakami be your producer, and we'll really make it happen."
"Is it going to take that long?"
"Yes!" Chihara Rinto estimated that his stupid apprentice would regard this script as black history. Not to mention filming it, he would tear it up and eat it alive, directly destroying the body and destroying all traces. But Konoe Hitomi could not think of this.
I thought it would be great to be able to shoot in the future, so I happily said, "Then it's a deal!"
"It's a deal!" Chihara Rinto made a promise. After all, I don't know if Hitomi Konoe can stick to it now. Giving this kind of promise can be regarded as a little encouragement from the teacher to the students.
Hitomi Konoe touched the script gently and fell into delusion, happily saying: "One episode a day, double the rest days, one season will be broadcast for a year, then a big movie will be released, and then the second season will be filmed..."
What she said was the routine of a nationally popular drama. The first and second seasons are TV dramas, and the third season is a big movie. No matter whether it is successful or not, the fourth and fifth seasons will be turned back to TV dramas to continue to consolidate the popularity. Of course, she is obviously thinking about eating the peach.
But Chihara Rinto did not break her fantasy. Who is a newbie in the industry and has never had the dream of becoming famous overnight?
He ignored her and also started to think about it. The silly apprentice had something to do, so what should he do next?
Of course we have to move on, there is still a long way to go!
He moved his legs and felt that he was getting much better. It seemed that he was only about a week away from being discharged from the hospital. He patted Konoe Hitomi's head hard and said with a smile: "If you are ambitious, we masters and disciples must work hard. In the future