A description of the plot of the first thirty chapters of this book
Many readers have complained about the plot of these 30 chapters. The main point of dissatisfaction is that the protagonist has no magic power at the beginning and needs to exchange it with the system.
But this part of the plot will not be very long. I had already thought about this when I made the outline. The protagonist can have magic power in less than 100,000 words.
The reason for designing this plot is very simple. I want everyone to have a more personal experience of the protagonist's feelings in the magical world. He is just an ordinary person. He may be good at reading, but other than that, he is not much special than others.
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This is a very common soul-traveling story. He would be nervous and panicked after discovering that he had no magic power. The system came to save him and gave him a lot of hope, allowing him to continue to explore and move forward in the magical world.
The origin of magic can be said to be the important goal of the protagonist Joel in the first half of his first year. Selling playing cards, signed books... are all plots triggered by his efforts to obtain the origin of magic.
In the process, he will meet good teachers and friends, and gain a new understanding of the magical world. Our protagonist Joel will continue to grow until he has the strength to face Voldemort directly.
This book will be very long, and the proportion of this plot is less than 1/20. If you really don't like it, you can also move to the plot after obtaining the source of magic.