Continuing the past, making up the small theater 16
"Ani, Amy, it's almost time for her to come back, right?"
"Yes, things over there will be over soon, it's time to come back."
"So, what is the relationship between the God of Creation and the Evil God?"
"Uh... do you want me to tell the truth?"
"Of course, isn't this the place to tell the truth?"
"Okay...actually, the creator wanted to write a craft-style horror story, but because I am not a fan of that series and have read relatively few related works, I still didn't get the essence of the story in the series. So...
... Just think that the evil god is a hidden plot created by the programmer girl, nothing special."
"That's right, that world belongs to us, there won't be any secrets."
"No, no, no, it's hard to say, Ling Mei. It's a fact that our goddess likes to be lazy, that's why we have the theory of 'I only know what I know'~ Maybe there are some unknown horrors in that world,
After all, we won’t take the initiative to know everything, that would be too boring.”
"That's okay, anyway, we are born to overcome the fear of the unknown."
"Hehehe~ That's right. So fans of the Tentacle series, please don't worry about this. Our setting does conflict with that series."
"Yes, we are unknown, powerful and lovely."
"What the hell is this!"
"It's the god Aini, not a ghost."
"No, I'm not talking about this..."
"It doesn't matter, anyway, the plot about Pachi and Ellie is finally coming to an end, and our nominal protagonists can finally appear again."
"It's too miserable to say that, right? Ling Mei..."
"What I said is the truth. If this continues, I will think that Pachi's child is the protagonist."
"I can't help it~ She is the first beautiful girl friend that Amy has made based on her ability. It's normal to value her~"
"What's Ellie?"
"Ellie is my sister~"
"So this is why Amy wants to stay with Patsy?"
"Yes~"
"Is Pachi that good? Which one of us is not a beautiful girl?"
"Isn't that the point? The point is that she is Amy's first beautiful girl friend! For a fat nerd...she wasn't fat before, right? Anyway, for a fat nerd, it is such a dream to have a beautiful girl friend.
It’s something!”
"Isn't it more dreamy than a super beautiful girl goddess whose body is the world coming to your door to be your wife?"
"This is different!"
"Why is it different?"
"It's just...it's just...you're backstabbing! And Pachi was conquered by Amy herself, which is of course different!"
"Is that so? Okay, I understand. From now on, I will set my favorability towards Amy to zero."
"No, no, no! Stop making trouble, Ling Mei! If this is the case, then we really have no chance to appear! According to the principle that top beautiful girls will attract each other, girls with different attributes will appear around Amy one after another. Let's
The goddesses have very similar personalities due to common traits, so wouldn’t we have no advantages at all? Do you really want to become the background setting? The content of our book will really become 'you'
Look, they are the legendary goddesses!"
"Really? If that's the case, then I'll just kill Amy. From now on, I will record the story from my perspective."
Stop being ridiculous, Ling Mei! I will never allow Amy to be killed! She is my projection in the world over there, and her happiness is my happiness!
"That's right, Ling Mei, don't be jealous! Amy is us in a sense. Are you trying to harm yourself?"
"I'm a girl, and I want to be willful!"
"We just look like girls... No girl will be as reasonable as us."
"Are you discriminating against women? Ani, do you want to cause trouble for the creator?"
"I...I just want to express my true thoughts. I don't like the disharmony between face and heart. Besides, according to the inherent concept of the creator's world, women are inherently inexplicable and illogical creatures.
Many women even evaluate themselves this way. So just from the point of view of our logic in doing things, we are definitely not girls."
"Where is the logic in what we do? Aren't we just doing whatever we want without any reason?"
"That's right...but at least we should be logical when doing it, right?"
"Really? Then why does the creator's world think that girls are weak at heart?"
"You are really illogically jumping on the topic! It's not because of the reason, it's because of gender roles~ To put it bluntly, it's based on statistical results. Regardless of the reason, it is a fait accompli that most girls are weak, so for this kind of
The conclusion drawn from factual observation is that 'girls are all weak'. Although the current trend is to ignore objective facts and force consistency, I think this hypocritical trend will not last long."
"After all, it's a world without God, and only those who can fight have a say."
"Yes, only those who can fight have the right to define... Oh no, isn't that the same here? Because we are the best at fighting, we are the gods~"
"Really? I don't think we are very good at fighting. Look, so far, has there been even one wonderful battle description in this book? Every battle is an instant kill with one move."
"That's why we said we can fight!"
"Doesn't being able to fight mean being able to fight for a long time? How can one count as being able to fight if the battle ends with one move?"
"Your understanding is wrong! Being able to fight means having high combat power! We are all characters who can punch 999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999.
"But we are not bald."
"That's not the point!"
"What about Ellie and the others? They should be able to hit twice in mortal mode, right?"
"They are also set to be the strongest, so they can't be beaten..."
"So our setting is really terrible. Such perfunctory battle scenes cannot attract readers at all."
"Oh, there's nothing I can do. The creator doesn't know how to describe battle scenes at all. Even though he's read a lot, he still can't write. Am I right?"
Yes Ani, it is very difficult for me to describe a series of actions in words. I have images in my mind, but even a simple action of slapping Ellie away requires a lot of words.
To describe. My writing is not good, so I find it difficult to describe this way. The disadvantage of writing is that it is a single-threaded linear information dissemination method. You cannot use words to describe two parallel things at the same time. This is also
Why do the characters in this book stand and speak honestly during conversations, or hide their continuous movements such as walking and eating? I am a very dull person, and I just stand and speak honestly when talking to others.
There are no random little movements when speaking. As for expressions, I think the expressions people usually make in real life are "smile", "frown", "open mouth", "no expression" and so on.
It’s unreal to have eyes wide open at every turn, smoke coming from all the orifices, etc., right?
"Look at Ling Mei, the creator is such a calm person, don't expect him to describe any small movements or expressions. Our emotions are all contained in the dialogue, which is why this book has so much nonsense...
"
I don’t think those dialogues are nonsense. The most important way for people to communicate is dialogue. Without dialogue, how can we show the interaction between characters? Is it necessary to understand it by heart and have a clear understanding? That’s nonsense!
"Yes, Reimei, wouldn't that just turn into a meeting in our heads, and it would be over in a second without anyone speaking?"
There is another most important reason, that is, I think describing fighting is the only way to make up the word count. As I mentioned above, a simple action requires a lot of words to describe, so a complex series of actions like fighting requires even more words.
Use words to describe it. The books I studied and studied can only cover seven or eight chapters once I type it, which is really annoying. In the end, I found that even if I skip these chapters and don’t read them, the plot can still be followed. Doesn’t this mean that
Is the word count for the fighting chapters made up? As for our dialogue, if you skip it and try it, you will definitely miss watching the next chapter. Of course I know that some readers just like to read descriptions of fighting, and they like to imagine intense scenes.
But I am very confused that this book of ours does not exist, and there will probably not be other books in the future. Ours is a cute novel, and what needs to be imagined is the cute image of the girl and the orange atmosphere between the characters, such as fighting.
does not exist.
"Ani, can I not be the protagonist of this book? I feel there is no future here. I want to write a biography of Zero Beauty myself."
"Huh? Are you serious? But what's so interesting about your story?"
"I can write the story before I came to Amy, such as how I was born."
"Isn't it just that he was born with a bang?"
"...Ani, you are also a boring person. No wonder you deal with machines every day."
"Don't underestimate the machine, you guy! Isn't your rubbish classical Chinese very literary?"
"You fools, how do you know the elegance of the Lord of Heaven?"
"I am you, you are me, don't get mad!"
"Will you be warned by a lawyer's letter for your words?"
"No way! This is Chinese!"
"It's not Chinese. Ours is an imaginary world. There is no such thing as Chinese."
"Okay, okay, you are right~"
"is that so?"
"That's right... I said we have to end with this sentence every time!"