This is another hurried review of the book, uh... Anyway, I would like to say sorry to everyone_(:з」∠)_
Then let’s talk about why this book doesn’t look good later on, and the difficulties in writing this book.
1. First of all, the most fatal point is - the sense of humility
Humility is really important in this book.
The reason why everyone thinks the Wanxiang chapter is good-looking is because of the various emotional resonances and contrasts created after I maximized the protagonist's sense of humility.
The protagonist's sense of humility is very important to this book.
But as more and more girls are lost through the strategy, and more and more girls are willing to give benefits to the protagonist, it becomes difficult to create this sense of humility.
To put it bluntly, the protagonist with two beautiful girls chasing after her is considered a dog licker? Doesn’t it count?
No matter how much I write that the protagonist is pitiful, but when I think about the fact that the protagonists include Xiaoyu and Wanxiang, it seems very contradictory to add the humble aspect of chasing other girls.
The solution to this problem is actually to give the girl a BUFF that causes amnesia.
This is a good solution, but there will be many other problems if written this way.
2. Regarding another issue, it is the career line of this book - Wenzhaogong.
The subject of Wenzhao Gong is poorly written in many books, especially the copying of songs and movies.
I think everyone is reading this book not to read the text, but to watch the dog-licking and emotional drama.
But another problem arises...
That is, every emotional release of the protagonist is achieved by copying.
Ren Ying - copying paintings of starry sky
Lin Wanxiang——Copied this song
Bai Xiaoyu - the movie god of medicine
Zhao Kewei——Variety show, copied many songs.
These copied literary works are all designed to make the protagonist transform from being a licking dog to a medium that makes girls feel regretful and eager to get things.
But doing this will not avoid the repetition of routines, which can be seen from the Kewei chapter.
After copying the song Chengquan in Wanxiang, the effect of copying the song in Keweipian was much smaller.
This is the most difficult part of the emotional release at the end of the story.
This directly led to the fact that when I was chasing Lin Wanqiu, I could no longer think of any way to make Lin Wanqiu really fall in love with the protagonist, desire and then hope to get the protagonist.
The transformation of Lin Wanqiu here is not only to make the character look like this, but also to make the readers identify with it.
Let the protagonist copy a song? Copy a movie? Copy a variety show? The effect will be greatly reduced.
3. There is also the issue of repetition of routines.
This book is essentially a fantasy article with only one formula. If you want to write it longer, there are many ways.
As many readers have told me, slow down the pace, add some daily routines, and write more subplots.
It is undeniable that the current creative environment for online articles is indeed like this.
After all, the more words you write, the more money you make.
But Tuberose Xiaoyu and even Kewei, the connection between each chapter in these three articles is very important.
It's so important that if I include a subplot in any chapter, it will make the whole story loose and less flavorful.
So rather than a long story, I prefer a well-written story.
Therefore, the plots of the three chapters are pushed very quickly, and at least the Wanxiang chapter and Xiaoyu chapter have absolutely no unnecessary chapters.
4. Questions about the author’s creative ability.
It is undeniable that my creative ability in the city is indeed a bit poor.
If the city focuses on the family and the family, and the supporting characters are created, many extended stories can be written.
For example, this book has no supporting actors at all, and there are no branching storylines about supporting characters.
I can only say that I have too little life experience.
5. In short, this book still has many shortcomings. I would like to thank the readers who have been with me until now.
The results of this book are actually quite good.
The first order is 8400, and now the average order can be 7100.
Later on, I worked really hard to create the same feeling as before.
During the time it was released, I was really...in a state of extreme anxiety.
But it was still an early stage of planning, coupled with the difficulty of writing imaginative writing itself, and the urban writing creation was too weak, it failed to do a good job.
Anyway, thank you all for your continued company.
6. The new book will be released to you in the next few days. This book will be merged into the large "Sister's Bride".
The new book is a bold and somewhat suicidal attempt, a genre that has never been attempted or written by very few people at this stage.
It is a type of book based on the world view of my previous work "Cultural Invasion of Different Worlds".
Readers who love reading about the city may not like it a bit, and it is very, very, very niche, but I still hope I can have fun writing it...
In short, my third thank you to the readers who have been with me until now. See you in the new book soon!
