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1. After writing for so long, I thought it was time for some feedback, so here’s the title.

2. I originally wanted to write a...sense of suspense, yes, a sense of suspense. The first half of the overall outline of the book is a flashback, exploring the events of the Night of Holy Advent little by little until they are all revealed in the end.

3. But obviously this method is not suitable for writing online articles, so I changed it. Many foreshadowings have to wait a long time, but they are all in advance.

4. But I still like to write a strange sense of suspense and let everyone guess each other.

5. This is a very strange phenomenon. I wrote it very well, but everyone was confused when they read it, and thought I was a fool.

6. Of course, some people say it’s pretentious and the foreshadowing is too long.

7. It is difficult to reconcile the opinions of others.

8. I have no choice but to compromise with the market, so I try to control it as much as possible.

9. The protagonist is not a time traveler. Let me confirm this for everyone. Mainly, I think the world view of this book is relatively rigorous. It is a closed circle, so the particularly inconsistent setting of a time traveler will not appear. The protagonist

They are real natives.

10. In fact, this worldview is...larger and more complex than everyone imagines.

11. There may be some plots of "hypocrisy, literature, youth and bad taste".

12. In fact, many setting words are not just jokes, they have their own functions, but they have not been written yet, such as the name of the protagonist.

13. I actually don’t want to write anything complicated, but I can’t help it.

14. Because I have to read it several times when I write it, and when I send it out again, I am already numb, and sometimes I can’t find the mistakes. It depends on you. Generally speaking, I will change it immediately.

15. If it cannot be changed, the chapter is locked.

16. This requires an editor, but after I added the editor, I only said two sentences in total.

17. You may not believe it, but after this book was approved by internal submission, my last editor was transferred. At that time... I felt very confused.

18. People sometimes don’t understand the speculation about identities... Actually, this is for this effect, because the plot in the next volume is to name the identities.

19. But obviously this way of writing is very desperate and goes against the mainstream.

20. But I just can't control these hands.

21. Here I am more envious of authors who have a fan base.

22. Because this is a daily series of online articles, I don’t have much time to polish the articles every day, not to mention that this book is mainly story-based, so it is inevitable that there will be some irregularities in the rhythm.

23. In terms of setting, everyone has also said that there are many shadows of AG works, but in fact, most of the settings of this book escape from the stillborn book. After changing the modern setting to magical wind, it becomes

It has become like this, which is quite touching.

24. Actually, I still want to write the book that was stillborn, and I want to express my grievance for it.

25. Maybe rewrite it next time.

26. I think Legend of Sword and Wind is a good thing that everyone should check out.

27. In fact, there are no Cthulhu elements in this book. To be precise, it has a Cthulhu-like...thriller style?

28.Wouldn’t it be nice for him to write something original?

29. The main feeling is that when writing this kind of inherent setting, I feel restricted.

30. The points that everyone has doubts about have actually been explained, but they haven’t been explained yet.

31. In fact, I read book reviews. After all, I myself will not notice the logical loopholes in some articles. This is all up to you.

32. Crowdfunding to write a book.

33. Some strange settings are not explained, but they are actually special plots in the later stages.

34. The main reason is that I think it would be too stupid to list the settings in dozens of chapters.

35. To a certain extent, I think this kind of "mysterious and mysterious, not speaking human language, and full stream of consciousness" is more like the "indescribable" style of Cthulhu.

36. After all, the ancient gods are everywhere now, and everyone knows that Ke Zong is weak, and there is no longer any indescribable feeling.

37. Of course some people will say, "What a shame, bad review."

38. There is no way I can control these hands.

39. In fact, the origin of this book was inspired by an SP project.

40. It’s not too much to think that the two or five guys who run away with the foundation should be downgraded to D level.

41. The recent plot feels a bit draggy, mainly adding new plot points, and the insertions are a bit stiff.

42. Some people say that the style gap between the first half and the second half of the book is a bit big.

43. Mainly due to personal habits, I like to start a story with a fast pace, show everything that can be shown, and then slowly tell the story.

44. This book is not entirely steampunk. It is at the transition of an era, with the end of steam and the rise of electricity. After all, Tesla has come out.

45. You have no problem understanding this book as a history of the development of the technology tree of a magically modified world.

46. ​​From another perspective, this book is a science fiction story.

47. For example, change erosion to radiation?

48. It’s just a fantasy novel, don’t go into too much detail.

49. (Actually, I want to write about the kind of person who messes with someone.)

50. Currently, the number of stable daily updates is around 4,500.

51. In fact, the updates of this book are mainly based on the rhythm of the plot. For example, if the plot is more important, a big chapter will end.

52. I can't split the 4500 into two, it's so inhumane.

53. Adding more updates mainly depends on the rhythm of the plot.

54. This is a cool article, and I wrote it myself.

55. I would like to thank all the readers here. Although this book is still a novel, it is at least one of the bigger novels.

56. To be honest, it’s pretty awesome. Most of the books written at the same time as mine have been beaten to death.

57. Look up to the sky and laugh.

58. Thank you for your support. Maybe with everyone’s efforts, I can work on the game plot? To be honest, game art is not done by humans.

59. A game company that I really like is looking for a screenwriter. Give me a chance.

60.Thank you again.

61.Dong dong dong.

62. By the way, the group number is 707415581.


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