Bang gongs and drums, I'm so happy and congratulated, this book actually survived the second volume. You know, I died in the second volume of the last book. I didn't expect to be able to survive.
And as you can see, the second volume of this book has come to an end. I think my writing is okay and at an average level. After all, online articles need to be updated every day, and there is no room for modification, which leads to a lot of writing.
It can't be changed.
Since I’m not very good at writing my reflections, I just wrote whatever I thought of. After all, I really like interacting with all the viewers.
First of all, in terms of torture, Lorenzo was so miserable. He died and lived again, lived and died again.
In fact, my own understanding of abuse is this.
The kind of abuse that everyone doesn’t like. I think this kind of thing is when the protagonist is frustrated in the process of reaching a goal and ends up not completing it. It’s like Li Zongsheng’s song, where you want it but can’t get it. This kind of thing should be hated by everyone the most.
Moreover, the most criticized aspect of my last book was the abusive master.
So in order to make it both sad and exciting, I studied one. The protagonist was frustrated in the process of arriving at a place, but finally completed the goal. Not only did he complete the goal, but he also cut down all the obstacles on the way.
Judging from the comments in this chapter and the feedback, it is indeed feasible. This kind of torture is more acceptable to everyone. After all, who doesn’t love a battle-damaged macho man? This can be seen from the excellent sales of the battle-damaged energy angel.
Let’s talk about the protagonist’s fights and killings along the way. It doesn’t feel like abuse. Basically, everyone who faced Lorenzo along the way is dead, and those who are not dead are also half-dead. It’s a win that makes you gain blood, and a loser doesn’t lose.
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Then in terms of setting, in fact, the current setting of this book has been revealed a little bit. As said, this is the transition point between two eras.
One thing I dislike very much about some novels is that there are many settings that go beyond the worldview and appear too abruptly. The fall of steam and the arrival of a new era all require a process of foreshadowing. I think the foreshadowing is okay, so that the newly emerged
The setting is not obtrusive and logical.
Of course, thanks to "King of Light" here, the burning chariot in the sky in myth is actually an airship with four engine ports. I really like the deconstruction of elements.
There are also emotional scenes.
This is also a taboo in online writing. In order to avoid emotional drama, some guys even directly state in the introduction that there is no female protagonist.
In fact, it’s understandable. If it’s well written, everyone will like it. If it’s not well written, it’s just literary, pretentious, and deliberately sensational, which will only make people feel disgusted.
So I wrote very restrainedly, trying to restrain the expression of these emotions as much as possible. So far, it looks pretty good.
There are also some weird background board settings.
For example, the protagonist obtains Weapon A, not that Weapon A. A long description of how awesome this weapon is, but the result is just a flash of surprise and will not appear again in the rest of the article. This is just a water word count, so for now, what appears in this article
Weapon settings and so on are actually used in the end, not background settings.
After all, this is a steampunk style, and steam needs to be developed.
Then there is the arrangement of combat power settings. Personally, I like low-demon battles, because the main reliance is not on superpowers, but on more variables, such as the weapons mentioned above, the venue during the battle, and various other variables.
This factor can make the battle situation changeable, and it can also appear to be a bit of a battle of wits.
In fact, the trap in the last paragraph, I just wanted to write a feeling of a battle of wits, but the feeling was still far behind.
Of course, the setting of low demons will also give the story more directions. After all, when it comes to high demons, I am a bit lacking in language. I really don’t know how to describe it other than the two sides destroying each other’s paths.
Just like the classic Japanese RPG, fireball, big fireball, super fireball, spiral red lotus burning sky, big pyroblast, etc. This is just a replacement of vocabulary, but it has no meaning.
There is no upgrade system, no solidified strength class, so even a giant dragon will be knocked down by the turret as long as its health bar is high. There is no absolute advantage, and ordinary people have a chance to resist when faced with forces beyond common sense.
I write wherever I think.
Of course, another point is to use the existing settings to create tricks. A question I often like to think about is how a useless superpower can use useless superpowers to make tricks.
There is also the aspect of characterization. I hope to write flesh-and-blood characters, which will be more interesting. Otherwise, it will be like some books where you change the protagonist to a talking dog and you can still read it smoothly.
I need each character to have his or her own past and future.
Then it’s about the next volume. I expect that the next volume will be very long, and I will collect a lot of foreshadowings, and then dig a bigger hole and expand the whole world even more. However, I am a little panicked and afraid that I will not be able to control it.
, I try my best.
And the next volume is very likely to be a failure. After all, for an excellent story, its prequel must be inferred from the existing articles. If you calculate it this way, the next volume should be the prequel of this book. Yes.
There are many interludes and flashbacks that are taboo in online novels, so I tried my best to grasp them.
There are also some issues related to the lack of information. I tried my best to create a sense of suspense in this book, so many things cannot be named at the beginning. At this time, some people will say that something is unreasonable... There is no way.
Of course, a lot of people have come across this book about Taboos on the Internet, so all of you who read this must be in the same boat.
When this book was put on the shelves, it was ridiculously poor, with about 150,200 orders. This was a hit in the online literature world, and it was considered a Shudra of online literature! But so far, with your support, this book has been able to survive.
At order 860, there are still two alliance leaders.
Do you know how awesome this is? It’s a huge class leap for you to do it without any recommendation. From a commoner to a Kshatriya, I’m crying.
My health is not very good recently. When I have enough energy, I will update as much as possible!
So I really want to thank you all here. Without your support, Lorenzo might have died in the shelling. Then he will open a new book 23333
This is it in the end. In order not to disappoint you all, I will carefully plan the next plot.