1. The current plot progress of this book has almost reached the middle stage, so it is time for a round of feedback.
2. The title of this volume is "Inside the Soul".
3. In fact, after writing this, you can also see some metaphors. The main plot of this volume is that Lorenzo realizes himself. Who is this lost demon hunter?
4. Of course, I think the ending will be quite interesting based on my idea.
5. I have discussed with another author before how to write a good story, and in the final analysis a story is about making readers feel emotions.
6. For example, it’s cool, and it’s funny, but these two emotions are easy to elicit. I want to challenge it and write something different.
7. After all, I consider myself a more ambitious author.
8.So the exciting part of this volume has probably just begun.
9. By the way, this book is expected to cost between 2 million and 3 million.
10. In fact, I don’t really want to write too long, so I try to streamline the plot as much as possible. In fact, the current plot of this volume, except for the transitional chapters, echoes all the plots in the following chapters.
11. So I feel that what I wrote is not considered bad. After all, I have already started the Dark Angel, and I can write a lot of words about the story of Gundam fighting demons.
12. However, this is a bit unnecessary, don’t you think?
13. I am a pursuing author, let me emphasize again.
14.So I want to write some different stories.
15. I also tried many new writing ideas in this book.
16. For example, taboos in online writing, interludes! Flashbacks!
17. In fact, I was very hesitant when writing this volume, because from a certain perspective, this volume can be written as a prequel to this book, but such a large-scale flashback would definitely be overwhelming, but in order to recall the past, it also moves forward in parallel with reality.
, so that readers’ senses are not so bad, I made a new attempt.
18. Such as the uncanny valley plot.
19. This is about ten chapters in length, a memory of the past.
20. But I think it is definitely not good for the senses to write "Lorenzo fell into memories" at the beginning, and then insert a plot abruptly.
21. So here I suddenly thought of some scenes of solving crimes in American detective dramas.
22. The protagonist states the murderer's motive and method of committing the crime in front of the camera, and the scene behind changes at this time to simulate the crime scene at that time, thus achieving the simultaneous advancement of memories and reality.
23. But that is a film and television drama, and this is text.
24. Fortunately, after finishing writing, everyone's senses were also good, and it seemed that the experiment was successful.
25. I like to translate some images into words.
26. You may not believe it, but I am an art major, and painting will lead to a dead end.
27. However, I am invincible.
28. You say I am bad at writing, but I am a painter! And vice versa.
29. Back to the role.
30. I want to write something different, such as focusing on plot and characters.
31. Internet writing is an extremely long creative process.
32. Therefore, in this long process, it is easy for unexpected things to happen, such as characters that you cannot control, which is also known as writing failure.
33. So I don’t want to decide on a heroine or a final boss at the beginning.
34. Because this thing is a foundation, once it is set, it is bound. Without it being set in advance, everything will be determined according to the direction of the plot to confirm the final identity of each character, but there may be some new tricks.
35. I also want to create some interesting characters, like "group portraits" that will die if you try it.
36. Just kidding, give it a try and finally come back to life, but you can’t kill yourself, right?
37. Speaking of uncontrollable characters, there are actually many in this article, and the results are surprisingly good.
38. For example, Saab, I just thought that there should be a mini-boss battle. As I write this, it’s out of control with the original idea, but it’s not bad.
39. By the way, let’s talk about this book. The creative process can easily get out of control.
40. The birth of this book was purely an accident.
41. In the beginning, there were no demon hunters, and the era was not the Victorian era, but a group of super-powered beings called the Twisters who lived in modern times.
42. I have always felt that there is a more important category missing in urban abilities.
43. He is very rigorous, low in magic, and uses his only abilities to fight a battle full of calculations and suspicions.
44. And of course there is a group of cheerful trash-talking contemporary college students with super powers.
45. I think this category is quite interesting, because it has more or less hamster attributes. I thought I would save enough manuscripts before posting them, and I wrote almost 200,000.
46. To be precise, it is the plot of the first volume.
47. After all, people have dreams. I want to write a perfect volume as much as possible. I will trick everyone into it first, and then if the cover does not match the actual thing...hehehe.
48. Unfortunately, this one didn’t even get signed.
49. I was actually quite disappointed at that time.
50. My roommate and I had a sudden idea. We were just idle. I asked Brother Cai, how about the whole game?
51. Brother Cai: “Get it right!”
52. The result is that making games is very difficult, requires a lot of money, and can’t even make a demo.
53. Brother Cai said we should outsource.
54. Outsourcing can cost money.
55. So I became an idol because of the perfect attendance bonus of 600 yuan.
56. So the question is, what to write?
57. I seem to have mentioned in the group that this book was originally about a cyber detective.
58. Watson is a top hacker girl who lives in a rental house, and Holmes is a mechanical transformation man who carries a plasma shotgun with him when he goes out. Under all surveillance, he is an unrecognizable mosaic.
59. However, science fiction becomes very earthy if it is not well written, so I gave up.
60. Then I changed the setting of the superpower book, and the Ember Gun was born!
61.Applause!
62. Then, then...
63. Then Ember Guns is still being serialized, but the game’s unity project has not been updated for several months...
64. Life is a ruthless knife~
65. Let’s talk about this book.
66. I think every character should have a past and a future, rather than a simple display card.
67. The same goes for the protagonist. He should have a vivid personality and not be a tool to promote the plot.
68. Of course, if you write in-depth about the psychological activities of some characters and some thoughts, you will easily be accused of being literary and pretentious.
69. So where is the boundary between literary youth and hypocrisy?
70. Of course it’s just an online article, why is it so profound?
71. I am very ambitious!
72. But there is no way, he gave too much.
73. Just kidding, crowdfunding to write a book, crowdfunding to write a book.
74. But to defend myself, this is my second book!!!
75. I have a lot of strange ideas.
76. For example, I have conceived the beginnings of several new books.
77. Of course, I will write Ember well!
78. But I also want to write some short stories. I have conceived one now and have a vague outline.
79. Then there are some stories about writing practice in high school, which seem a bit immature now. I will delete them when I find time.
80. Then I set up a public account and will probably randomly update some strange stories.
81. Its name is!
82. Chocobo Breeding Center!
83. Yes, the name of the official account is Chocobo Breeding Center!
84. The official account ID is andlao00r, which is my pen name plus 00r.
85. Although I say 00r, I prefer Unicorn Gundam.
86. Orewa Gangdamu!
87. By the way, let’s talk about the data. At present, this book has finally collected 50,000 people, and it has barely climbed to the average subscription of 1,800, which is still a few hundred million points away from that premium badge!
88. Crowdfunding to write a book, dong dong dong.
89. Then, it’s about this book, because unlike conventional online articles, the highlight of this book is not the fragments copied one after another, but a whole volume of stories.
90.So…so…crowdfunding to write a book!
91. Actually, I want to collect 9 more feedbacks to make the total 100, but is it interesting for you to see if I only give 9 feedbacks?
92. Anyway, this is a free chapter, so I think it’s a waste of everyone’s time.
93.I think it’s quite interesting.
94. Do you want to yell or not?
95. Then I would like to thank you all for your support so far. After all, this book has really climbed out of being stuck on the street step by step.
96. 4!
97. 3!
98. 2!
99.1!
100. 0!
Go to bed, good night.
ps:
A group of friends just raised an opinion, and I thought it would be appropriate to explain why many places in this book are a little sloppy.
Well, this is actually my fault. The essence of this book is an online text, and the online text is updated all the time, and I wrote the online text in a style that is similar to the real thing, so my plot is based on the volume.
Maybe in the first chapter, I suddenly wrote an inexplicable paragraph "a", but "a" corresponds to "b" about chapter 50. When the two plots corresponded, it felt like a sudden enlightenment.
For example, the prologue and end of volume two, those related to the Stuart family.
I tried my best to express a slightly shocking feeling. Chai Geng may have a weaker feeling, but I feel that after reading it in one go, I might be able to have this kind of experience. This is what I tried my best to express.
The readers kept pulling and pulling on the information they got, and it took more than ten chapters to get feedback. Maybe this is the reason for the sluggishness.
Solution.
I updated it in one go. You guys are happy, but I'm dead.
Talking about the carrier, a web article needs to be constantly updated, and its story needs to be read in one go. This contradiction may create a sense of fragmentation in reading.