I haven't rested for a long time and I want to rest for two days.
I was also a little confused and wanted to avoid the limelight.
Because how to say it.
When I write about a different person in the novel, I think the readers’ response should be one of curiosity and a desire to explore.
For example, Huang Jinmo actually broke the life limit of Shenlin and lived for more than 900 years, but she was still in the realm of Shenlin. This should be very dramatic.
What I thought was the reader’s reaction was, why? Is there any story in the past? I’m really curious!
But the reaction I saw was that the writing was fucking broken again! He’s over 900 years old and doesn’t even have a hole! Is Huang Jinmo a waste?
That's roughly it.
Today, Brother Sun sent me a red envelope. Let me stop him and say, don't comfort me. It will make me look weak.
Some alliance leaders suggested in private chat that if Ah Shen writes this kind of plot in the future, he could put some previews at the end, such as what on earth is Zhuang Gaoxian thinking? How could Jiang Wang be injured? Why on earth is the Mo family like this? Please tell me tomorrow
Come and see on time.
This way people might not complain.
But I think... is this still interesting to read?
I confidently told him that it would be okay. When I finish writing this plot, the controversy will naturally disappear. I will not be affected.
But as I sit here now, I really don’t know what to write.
I sat there all day.
I can't understand.
Indeed, recently I have been working hard to hide in the world of novels. I have always done this, and responded to controversies with great efforts.
I think I have really devoted myself wholeheartedly to the novel. As a player who can do 4,000 times a day, being able to update 8,000 times a day means that I have cut off the time for exercising, cooking, daze, and chatting with friends.
.These days I order takeout every now and then and hardly ever go out with others.
I confirm that I am writing this paragraph very seriously.
But it is indeed controversial.
I think I should seriously discuss the plot design during this period with you to see what the problems are.
Today's chapter has almost completed the plot line, so there will be no spoilers, so it can indeed be discussed.
First of all, Chu Yuzhi’s line is a concrete manifestation of the national contradictions in Chu State, so there is the scene where he cuts off the seats at the meeting house. It makes the Chu State more three-dimensional.
At the same time, Xiao Shu's foreshadowing was laid in Chu Yuzhi's place.
Therefore, there is a plot of stealing pills and coming to the Unredeemed City, and spending forty days to attack the gods.
Xiao Shu and Zhang Xun should have written it, and also outlined a country like Dan. At the same time, it further clarified the pattern of countries in the world.
Jiang Wang's character determines that he will collect Xiao Shu's body.
Next comes the controversial part.
Zhu Weiwo's character is very proud. When he became a god, he wanted to kill Du Ruhui. Because Du Ruhui was so close to the world, he often ran around, and Du Ruhui must be very aware of Jiang Wang's threat. Because of these two points, he might
Conspiracy against Jiang Wang
This is the basis for Zhu Weiwo's plan to ambush Du Ruhui.
The article explicitly hinted at Yi Shengfeng's investigation of Jiang Wang many times, including blocking the road to ask Taiyin. Of course, he would not miss the information from Zhuang Guo, so he also had communication with Zhuang Guo...
When being hunted everywhere, he chose to hand over some of the preparations made for himself to Zhuang Guo and let the enemy's enemies help him hold the enemy back. Of course, it would be better to kill him. This was Yi Shengfeng's logic.
The Yong Kingdom sent Mo Jingyu here to recruit Xiao Shu. Here is a little profile of Han Xu. The reason why they sent Mo Jingyu instead of other gods was because Buhu City was a lawless place after all, and Du Ruhui was so close to him.
Sending others is likely to cause trouble. Mo Jingyu's background in the Mo family also makes him relatively safe here. This is Han Xu's line of logic.
The thinking of Zhuang Gaoxian and Du Ruhui has been very clear in this chapter. They just want to get rid of Zhu Weiwo. They failed in the Tongmo case and lost miserably. They can no longer take advantage of Jiang Wang's ideas in a short time.
But I can’t get rid of Zhu Wei, who has already arrived. It will be even more troublesome if he clings to Chu’s lap in the future. They are both overlords, and Chu is closer than Qi.
They are not the kind of bosses who will sit still and wait for players to level up and get equipment before gaining experience. They have always been ambitious, courageous, clear-minded and ruthless. They also snatched the pills of the Bone Evil God and became real people.
Just like in the national war with the Yong Kingdom, Jiang Wangdu won the championship on behalf of the Qi Kingdom, and they still created a Tongmo... These are the continuation of their behavioral patterns.
They originally designed a very strict conspiracy, but during the implementation process, they suddenly discovered that Mo Jingyu was coming. They came up with new ideas and implemented them immediately. This kind of ability and decision-making to seize opportunities is what they really have.
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In the process of getting rid of Zhu Weiwo, Du Ruhui first wanted to make Zhu Weiwo's judgment wrong, so he really wanted to get Jiang Wang. But he didn't want to cause trouble, after all, he had only been beaten in Yujing Mountain. So this matter must be
Lin Zhengren and Du Yehu made their own decisions. Whether it succeeds or fails, there is no loss. But success or failure is a test for Lin Zhengren and Du Yehu. It is a test for these two people at the same time.
These are the logical lines of Zhuang Gao and Du Ruhui.
Lin Zhengren had no choice. Lin Zhengren had to show his worth, otherwise he would be killed. Because he had been proven to be a disloyal person, after the Yellow River Meeting, all he needed to prove was his worth. So he
In this ambush, he must achieve some results. So he also worked hard to calculate. Regarding his battle layout ability, I think the Yellow River Society has already demonstrated it, even earlier, during the Three Cities Discussion period.
This is described as Lin Zhengren’s logical line.
Du Yehu had no choice. Du Yehu had to prove his loyalty, so as soon as Lin Zhengren came to test him, he immediately took action. If he was slow, he would die. As for why he stayed in Zhuang Country, the "Tiger Minister" in "The Journey Is Difficult"
"That chapter should have already been described. (In addition, I thought it would arouse some emotions when I heard about Zhao Er's death, but I didn't expect that few people would care. Maybe it was too long, and I couldn't write it down in detail)
This is Du Yehu’s line of logic.
Jiang Wang left Chu State and came to Buhu City, firstly to chat with Zhu Weiwo, and secondly because he wanted to fight Yi Shengfeng to the death. Yi Shengfeng had no chance in the southern region, and he had no chance either.
After encountering Du Yehu's ambush, he had no choice. He had to cooperate with the show, otherwise Du Yehu would die. So he repeatedly fell into Lin Zhengren's plans.
There is a very obvious hint in the original text: "Jiang Wang treats this battle with the utmost calmness. He knows that he cannot make mistakes in every step. Any mistake may cause regrets in this life!"
I think this sentence is enough to prove that Jiang Wang's acting is not about making up after the fact.
So in the military formation composed of Du Yehu's blood-drinking magical power + evil tiger evil + three hundred nine Jiang Xuanjia + the intelligence and countermeasures provided by Yi Shengfeng (mainly the method to suppress Jiang Wang's perception of danger, this will be discussed later)
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Can Jiang Wang be injured?
I have never written that the inner palace cannot break the defense of the outer building, right? This is not an online game novel. Jiang Wang's defense is 999, and Du Yehu's sword is 777, so if the defense is not broken, the blood will not be reduced.
How did Jiang Wang faint? He was killing Du Yehu and deliberately found the wrong hiding place of Lin Zhengren. Then he left quickly because he was worried about Du Ruhui's appearance... and then encountered Du Ruhui's Tianxifa + River Thorn.
When he discovered Zhu Weiwo, he intensified his injuries a little and tried his best to fight, and then seriously injured Shen Mian. It was Du Ruhui who made him like this.
This is Jiang Wang’s line of logic.
The whole logic goes smoothly, so many people's threads come together, and this plot happens.
Frankly speaking, I don't know where the crash is.
If you want to talk about the abuse of the Lord, in my outline, this is the last chapter in this volume. (Also, I get criticized every time I write the last chapter. There is really no time when I am not like this.)
If you say there is a problem with logic, what is the problem with logic?
If you think there is something wrong with the author's attitude, I am a 4,000-word contestant who updates 8,000 words a day. I only eat, sleep and write. I have reached my limit.
Should I write any plot in the future, first A, then B, then C, then D, write all aspects, and then write ABCD after the collision?
Does anyone really like to watch it?
After Xiao Shu's storyline ends.
I want to write about Zhuang Guo first, then about Yi Shengfeng, then about intelligence acquisition, and then about mobilizing troops to ambush... Should I write like this?
So when Jiang Wang was ambushed, was there really any drama?
What kind of story do you want to read, and how do you want the author to write it?
Let's all speak freely, and there's no need to hold it back.
Of course, after today's chapter, you can no longer hear these scoldings. Now everyone is scolding the Mo family for being such idiots and being deceived by Zhuang Gaoxian.
But the plot line of the Mo family cannot be concluded now. The whole story has not reached that plot stage yet.
Even if I gnash my teeth and update it every day for a while, I still can't give an answer. (Of course I can't do it anymore.)
So I have no choice.
Yes, I have no choice.
As a novel author, it is undoubtedly a shame to have to open a single chapter to explain your plot.
But I really have no choice.
I thought that I could solve this problem by writing it as quickly and well as I could, gritting my teeth and getting on with it. But the entire logic of the plot of Wangzi being beaten has been written, and now it’s time to start the inkjet idiot.
Can I risk the collapse of the outline and write about all the Mohists first?
I can not.
I can only ask you about the plot lines that have been temporarily completed.